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Posted: 8 years ago
#81

Originally posted by: myrahluvsk

Awesome update
maan remember geet
geet is waiting for maan
geet 20 birthday will be interesting

waiting for next update




thank you😃😃
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Posted: 8 years ago
#82
Lovely update dear
Loved it!!
Maan's character as a grey touch
Maan loves his angel yet at the same time his intensity of hatered for her and his family is adding up to his burning fire
She came as a ray of light in his dark life but his love for her is over powered by his hatredness
He was reminiscing their first meet which brought a serene smile in his life and was thinking of ways to avenge her family
As a Cupid he got invitation to her birthday too
Geet was thinking abt maan and their meeting too
She was happy and wanted to meet him unknown to the truth that a Strom is approaching towards her
Hope while burning geet in his revenge he himself dies nt get burned
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Posted: 8 years ago
#83
Thanks for the pm dear
Will be waiting to known how geet's birthday will unfold new chapter in her life
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: anu5

Lovely update dear

Loved it!!
Maan's character as a grey touch
Maan loves his angel yet at the same time his intensity of hatered for her and his family is adding up to his burning fire
She came as a ray of light in his dark life but his love for her is over powered by his hatredness
He was reminiscing their first meet which brought a serene smile in his life and was thinking of ways to avenge her family
As a Cupid he got invitation to her birthday too
Geet was thinking abt maan and their meeting too
She was happy and wanted to meet him unknown to the truth that a Strom is approaching towards her
Hope while burning geet in his revenge he himself dies nt get burned
😊



yup like I wrote in d prologue...he will b a gray shaded character ...

Yup hehe he is invited .😉


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Posted: 8 years ago
#85

Originally posted by: anu5

Thanks for the pm dear

Will be waiting to known how geet's birthday will unfold new chapter in her life
😊😃



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Posted: 8 years ago
#86
Great start. Keep up my dear. Thanks for the PM will wait for next update.
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Originally posted by: sree10

Great start. Keep up my dear. Thanks for the PM will wait for next update.



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Posted: 8 years ago
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Part 2
A Distorted Wish




Geet awoke to the sound of the continuous ringing of her alarm clock.She woke up with a start and did her morning chores .She then went downstairs only to see all the decorations going on for the evening's party . Her brother, Gaurav, saw her and greeted her with a smile .After her parents died, the only one who took care of her was her brother he raised her like a father and she loved him the most ,after all he was the only family she had ."How are you doing today , my little princess", her brother asked her dearly .She gave him a huge grin and said "Great! ...Is this all for me ", she asked curiously . Her brother laughed at his sister's innocent question and replied ,"Of course dear , after all today you will be officially facing the business world, as the heiress of this empire, okay now go and get ready for shopping ,I have called your friends to accompany you ". She ran back to her room and got ready in her casuals ,her friends soon joined her .





Finally, the evening came , and all the guests started to make their entrance into the grand party .She descended the stairs in her beautiful evening gown looking as fresh as a dew drop.She greeted everyone with a gracious smile but was waiting for him to arrive.She longed to see him, hoping he will come .








At last he made his entrance looking as handsome as ever that all the ladies turned their heads to see him, but he never gave a hoot to any woman , he despised those creatures , he has hated these creatures for long who wanted him all for his money and looks , he smirked looking at the attention he was gaining thinking about the hypocrite world who only runs after the riches.He came here for the sole purpose of meeting her . Only her- the person who saw through his heart not his riches, the person who gave him a reason to smile, he looked around to find her.








When he noticed her , he felt for once to forget about the whole purpose he came here for , but then he was reminded of the miseries he had faced because of the people in this family , and was back to his calculative self . He went up to her and kissed her hand , to which she blushed ,"You are looking beautiful ", he said and handed her the bouquet and the gift her he bought for her."Thank you , I am glad you came ", she said politely.





"I am really honored you took time out to come to grace us with your presence ",Gaurav told once he joined them ."How could I have not come to meet such a graceful young lady , you have raised her well ", he said still not looking away from the object of his interest .He was sure now that she likes him too just a few hours and he will whisk her away . "Now I can make the announcement ", saying this his brother excused himself , but before he could he got a call and after that he seemed worried .He just hurriedly announced his sister's officially taking over the post of the CEO of their company and asked the guests to enjoy themselves, while he apologized for his sudden exit on the pretense of work .He knew exactly what worried her brother , after all he knew their financial conditions . Now was his chance , he went up to her and befriended her until the party was over . The dance was announced and Geet danced with her friends happily. While Maan kept a close watch on her, noticing how she looked up to him then looked down when caught, he was now positive about her feelings. Maan was asked to dance by many of the creatures, but he went up to the birthday girl and asked her for the same which she accepted. They danced gracefully making the people awestruck with their grace.






On the other hand, Gaurav got to know about the status of his company it was almost fallen now. He did not knew how it happened , not knowing he has left his precious sister with the man who was the reason of his current worries.




The guests enjoyed the party and left .Maan stayed for a while seeing all the guests gone , he went up to sit next to her on the couch where she was seated waiting for her brother ."So I heard that you completed your interior designing course from a reputed college and was always the topper , seems you are the perfect combination of beauty with brains , I have to admit I am impressed," He said to strike a conversation . "How did you know so much about me , you are a busy man yourself,"She said surprisingly unable to think he noticed so much about her ."I m always updated about the people I am concerned about", at this she looked up to him , he looked at her intently and went close to her just close enough to give the impression he wanted to give to an onlooker . "You know Geet, I really wanted to meet you, do you remember our first meeting", He asked. To which she nodded shyly, "I do". Before they could continue their conversation, there was roar after that ,her brother had just entered the living area and was furious to see him that close to his sister, they looked up to him . "Its not what you...", his sister tried to explain but here her brother had a different plan in his mind , and he just got to execute it not knowing what a blunder he is doing . "You will have to marry her or else never see her again ,how dare you get close to my sister in my absence ", roared her brother "Bingo", Maan smirked inwardly. She was stunned to hear that in a moment her wish came true in the worst manner .Her tears dropped thinking her brother is angry, but unknown to her the two men had their own motives and she was just being played as a pawn now.






She looked up to see his serious face, she thought may be he will reject her , but to her shock he answered ,"Very well then , if she don't mind then I certainly don't have any objections ". He turned to her ,"So tell me , will you marry me, if you are concerned about my feelings towards you then I shall assure you I loved u since the day I first met you on your 12th birthday", he spoke sincerely.She felt her head spinning but she soon regained her composure and answered ,"I will marry you".



He smirked thinking, "You will be all mine Geet and then I will crush you. You are your brother's biggest weakness but one thing which I never admitted is that you are mine as well but I will turn that in my favor".





His plan was finally successful and the marriage happened within a week ,in a blink of an eye her wish was fulfilled ,unaware that she has landed herself in to a bigger trouble




So here is the next part , please do give your honest reviews😃




Precap- Nightmare begins
Edited by pixelflower620 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#89
interesting update
geet played by maan and her brother also now maaneet are married
thnx for pm
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Posted: 8 years ago
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nice one so maan came to party started to woo then gaurav decided that geet should marry him may be he knew what will happen with him he didnt want his sister to see the harshness whatever it is maan is financial secure and every brother will want a sister to be there...

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