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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Sp8699

Yup please please please please update soon and do PM i really loved all three parts

Updating in sometime😊
glad you loved it😊
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: eufara_naghm

Update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update de do na jaldi se di

WAITING EAGERLY😳

Updating in sometime😊
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Zannat.

Loved every thing about these three updates 👏

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We will wait for your comeback ...study hard ...I know you'll do great 😳

Glad you loved it Zannat di
Thanks for the best wishes😊
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CHAPTER 6

Five days passed like this , both Ananya and Kabir would talk every night but Ananya would feel little bit sad because she was still thinking about Kabir's confession.

ONE NIGHT

A-hmm , to fir aapne kabhi kuch kaha nahi use

K-are vo sirf meri crush type thi , nothing more , mein uske liye
kuch feel thodi karta tha

A-to aapne aaj tak kisi ke liye kuch feel nahi kiya

Kabir got surprised reading this message

K(pov)-kya mujhe Ananya ko ye keh dena chahiye , kya Ananya chahti hai ki main usse ye kahu , kya main ready hu ye confess
karne ke liye

Then Kabir took a deep breath and typed

Ananya got shocked reading the message , she got shocked
reading the three magical words "I LOVE YOU".

A(pov)-kya kabir mujhse sach mein pyaar karte hai ya is baar
bhi sirf mazaak kar rahe hai

She typed

A-mujhe aisa mazaak bilkul pasand nahi hai

K-Ananya main mazaak nahi kar raha , I am serious , I love you

Ananya was happily shocked reading this message , she wants to jump dance , happy tears were flowing out of her eyes

Kabir was here getting impatient , he was fidgeting with his phone waiting for her answer , all negative thoughts were coming in his mind

K(pov)-kahi maine kuch galat to nahi kar diya , hope Ananya ko bura na laga ho , chahe job hi ho jaaye lekin is baar mujhe answer chahiye , chahe vo mujhse nafrat kare ya pyaar

K-Ananya kya tum bhi mere liye kuch feel karti ho

Ananya smiled a full blown smile and decided she will tell him now , he has right to know her feelings

A-I love you too

Kabir mouth hung open reading it , he was not believing his fate , his Ananya loves him too

Chupke chupke na jaane
Kab vo dil mein hai aayi
Banke khushboo meri
Zindagi mein samaayi
Uski har baat mujhko
Ab to lagti bhali hai
Main kisi raah jaau
Lake uski gali hai
Meri yaado mein rahe voo
Vo mere saath chale
Banke meri parchaayi
Maine ikraar kiya hai oh mere saathi
Thoda sa pyaar hua hai thoda hai baaki

K(pov)-meri Ananya mujhs pyaar karti hai , meri Ananya bhi mujhse pyaar karti hai

Here On Ananya Side

Ananya was feeling like she was flying , she was feeling overwhelmed , top of the world

Honth khaamosh hai par
Aankhein kuch bolti hai
Pyaar ka raaz tum par
Aaj ye kholti hai
Dhadkano mein meri tum
Is tarah kho gaye ho
Keh rahi hai ye saasein
Tum mere ho gaye ho
Main jaha jau jidhar
h...o...o...o...o
Tum mujhe aaye nazar
Maine palkein jo uthayi
Maine izhaar kiyaa hai , tum mere saathi
Thoda sa pyaar hua hai thoda hai baaki

K-Ananya tum sach keh rahi ho na

Ananya blushed and at the same time shook her head at his crazy question . Why would she joke with him on the most serious matter of her life

She only typed

A-ha

Kabir smiled and sighed "Finally"

K-Ananya I am so happy
Ananya smiled and blushed at the same time and then typed

A-me too

Kabir smiled , both were feeling butterflies in their stomach

K-Ananya main tumhe kuch batana chahta hu

A-ha bolo

K-main tumse pata nhi kaise itna attract ho gaya ki mujhe tumse pyaar hone laga , I kow I am very late in confessing because main saalo se tumhare liye feel kar raha hu , I was so damn attracted to you , to your smile , to your internal and external beauty , to your beautiful nature , to your non stop chattering , to your everything. I am so happy that you reciprocated my feelings . Thankyou

When Ananya read the message , she was feeling like a princess who just gave a very precious gift to her lover , of course he is her lover . She then typed

A-Agar main sach kahu to main pehle pehle aapse bahut darti thi , I use to be so scared of you , when you messaged me for the first time , I was hell shocked that why you are suddenly got interest in talking with me. But when we started conversation , I started liking you , I started feeling for you , slowly slowly I realised that your every word affects me . Nowadays you are the reason of my happiness as well as sadness . And I am very happy , thankyou so much for coming in my life .

Kabir got little bit emotional after reading tis message . He knew that this is the most important thing of her life and he will make sure that she never regrets this decision.

K-I love you

Ananya smiled and replied mischievously

A-Tell me something I don't know

Kabir smied at her cheeky reply and typed

K-vaise I love you ka jawaab I love you too ya me too hota hai ,
maine dono mein se kuch bhi nahi padha

A-you know the answer

Kabir shook his head at her stubbornness

K-Ananya I LOVE YOU

Ananya giggled and then decided to answer him

A-I LOVE YOU TOO

Kabir smiled and typed

K-Thanks for the small mercies

A-Your welcome

Kabir smiled

A-ok now bye kal school hai

K-Gn , Tc , Luv u

Ananya blushed

A-gn , tc , luv u too

Kabir sighed and put his phone down

Kabir smiled a full blown smile

K-finally I can say that she is mine , Ananya is mine

And he slept

NEXT DAY AT SCHOOL

T-congratulationa and celebration , my god Anu , finally tum dono ek dusre ko vo three mgical words keh hi diye

A(blushing)-hmm

T-oho koi to bada Sharma raha hai

A-aisa kuch nahi hai

T-accha baba thik hai , to tum dono mil kab rahe ho

A-Trisha abhi tak humne ek dusre se phone pe baat nahi ki hai ,
milna to bahut dur ki baat hai

T-to tu unse milna chahti hai

A-ofcousre

Then she blushed thinking how desperate she sounded . Trisha looked at her teasingly then they both laughed and hugged each other

Now Ananya and Kabir started enjoying the blissful period of their life , their every night chats , their teasing , their complimenting , their cosy romance , their everything
ONE NIGHT

Trisha and Ananya were chatting

T-Ananya , kal free hai?

A-ha

T-to chal movie dekhne chalte hai , Sultan , what's say

A-umm ok main apni mom dad se puchke batati hu

T-fine main bhi puch leti hu tab tak

After Sometime

A-mom dad said yes

T-mine too

A-to tu tickets book karle

T-fine kal 12 ke show pe chalte hai

A-done

T-ok then bye , gn

A-gn

Ananya smiled at the notification of message sent by Kabir

She opened the chat and saw Kabir's "HI" , she replied

A-hi , how are you

K-fine , so kya chal raha hai

A-nothing kal trishu ke saath movie dekhne jaa rahi hu

K-oh , aur mere saath kab date pe jaa rahi ho

Ananya blushed

A-aapke paas time hai mere liye

Kabir raised his brows

K-wow annie , what a progression

She smiled reading the message , she loves it when he address
her by Annie but she also got confused reading his message ,
what progression he was talking about

A-kya progression

K-yahi typical gf ki tarah bolna mere boyfriend ke paas to mere
liye time hi nahi hai

Kabir replied teasingly on which Ananya rolled her eyes

A-shut up

Kabir smiled at her angry avatar

K-ok

A-aap batao kya chal raha hai

K-kuch nahi bas abhi abhi apni family ko tumhare baare mein
bataya

Ananya got shocked reading her message , she didn't expected
this

A-kya bataya

K-yehi kit um meri girlfriend ho

A-whaaat

K-yup

Ananya was staring at the phone open mouthed , she was not able to believe that Kabir actually told his family about his and her relationship . Ofcourse she was not planning to hide it from her family and his also but she had not planned to reveal their equation until her board gets over . But here her boyfriend and had told his family about the equation they are sharing.Oh god now how his and her family will react at this

K-Annie hum kal bat karta hai , mom is calling me

K-bye gn , tc , sd , luv u

And he exits from whatsapp with a teasing smile on his face . He knew now she will not reply him back because she needs time to digest everything he told her.

K(pov)-pata nahi meri Annie kya soch rahi hogi , god use to mere upar gussa aa raha hoga , lekin fir bhi main dekhna chahta hu ki vo is baat pe kaise react karti hai

He slept but Ananya sleep was far away from her eyes

NEXT DAY

Trisha and Ananya were in Auto going to cinema house

Trisha noticed Ananya's tensed feature

T-Anu , tu thik hai na , any problem

A-ye sab Kabir ki wajah se ho raha hai

T-kyu , kya kiya unhone

A-arey unhone apne ghar mein mere aur unke baare mein bata
diya

Trisha's eyes got widened at this

T-what are you saying

A-ha yaar ab tu hi bata main kya karu

T-to unke ghar waalo ka kya reaction tha

A-pata nahi

T-pata nahi matlab , unhone bataya nahi tujhe

A-nahi

T-kyu

A-kyuki unko bua ne bula liya , to unhe jaana pada

T-oh , aur abhi tak koi reaction nahi aaya na

Ananya shook her head saying "no"

T-hmm , matlab sab thik hi hoga

A-but agar mere gharwaalo ko pata chal gaya aur mere mom dad mujhse naaraz ho gaye to

T-aisa kuch nahi hoga , batana rehta to abhi tak bata diya hota na

A-vo to hai lekin fir bhi

T-chill kuch nahi hoga , apna mood mat kharaab kar , movie ke
baad ek baar unse baat kar lena

A(deeply sighed)-hmm

AFTER MOVIE AT BUS STOP

T-Anu tu ek baar usko call kar le , meri bus aa gayi main nikalti hu

A-hmm , ok bye

T-bye

Trisha went off and Ananya again tried to call him and thank
god for her good luck , this time the call got connected , after 20 trials finally.

After three rings Kabir picked up the phone

K-Hi Annie
Ananya got lost in his voice . His voice sent shivers down her spine , when he called her Annie she felt some magic inside her

A-hi

Kabir smiled hearing her voice and said

K-kabir

A-hmm?

K-Kabir , mera naam Kabir hai

Ananya blushed and said

A-hi Kabir

A dazzling smile crept on Kabir's face hearing his name finally
from her in her voice

K-kahiye madam , aaj achanak se itni yaad kaise aa gayi meri ki
direct phone kar diya

Then Ananya remembered that she was angry with him

A-why you did that

K-did what

A-aapne apni family waalo ko kyu bataya hamare baare mein ,
hum unko mere 12th khatma hone ke baad bhi to bata sakte the na , itni jaldi kyat hi aapko , pata nahi sabne kaise react kiya hoga , ab aap kuch bolenge

K-Annie tum bolne ka mauka to do

A(huffed)-bolo

K-main mazaak kar raha tha

A-what

She got shocked , how could he make a joke of such a serious matter

A-aapko sharam nahi aati aisa mazaak karte hue , aapko pata hai main kitni dar gayi thi

K-arey baba I am sorry maine to bas aise hi kaha tha
A-aise hi aap kuch bhi kahoge

K-Annie dear I am so sorry

Ananya got melted at his word , his voice was so husky that her legs turned in jelly

A-um its ok lekin dobara aisa mazaak mat karna

K(teasingly)-vaise mujhe nahi lagta maine aisa mazaak karke kuch galat kiya

A-kyu

K-tumhari aawaz sunne ko mil gayi

Ananya blushed , she was also feeling heavenly listening to him

A-hmm

K-sirf hmm

A-to aur kya kahu

K-apne dil ki baat

A-bus aa rahi hai

K-kya , Annie maine tumhe apni dil ki baat kehne ko kaha , apne surrounding ka haal chaal sunane ko nahi

A-arey main bus stop pe hu , aapse baad mein baat karungi , meri bus aa rahi hai

K-Annie I love U

Ananya giggled and cut the call before saying "I KNOW".

Kabir shook his head and said to himself "Not fair my love".

END

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Edited by vssdp - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
Awesome di
Loved it
Continue soon
Thnx for the pm😳
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Posted: 8 years ago
awesum
finally dey confessed
update soon
thanks for pm
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Posted: 8 years ago
Ohh thank god vaishnavi...finally you updated
I thought April tk koi update nhi milni
Bt you proved me wrong
You updated both of your stories
I love love you for this

n the update was awesome
Finally they confessed their love to each other
n the song THODA SA PYAAR HUA HAI... THODA HAI BAKI...
I love this song
it reminded me sujal-kashish

n again thanks for the update n pm also..
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Posted: 8 years ago
Wow. Wonderful chapter.
Loved it...
Continue soonest...
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Posted: 8 years ago
Awe such cute love story of Kaya
Yippee both Kaya confess their love for each other
Awe they tease each other whenever they get chance
Loll when kabir told ananya that he talk to his parents abt them ananya was really worried
But kabir was just joking
Awe Kaya cute conversation for the first time
Continue plz
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Posted: 8 years ago
Wow just loved the part do PM when u update next...

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