RaIna FF~An Unarranged Marriage(chap11 pg40 updated)

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Yashfeen

@Bhatakti_atma

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Posted: 9 years ago

#211

Hey

Read the entire stuff.. And enjoyed it a lot..

A nice take on their relation.. :)

Do update soon.. And pm me 😃

Edited by Bhatakti_atma - 9 years ago

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lamia1210

@lamia1210

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Posted: 9 years ago

#212

hello everyone...here I am back with the 8th chapter of my (not so) good ff...

Chapter 8

raghav is working on some papers of the office at his table while naina is reading a book on the bed...

raghav looks at naina but she is busy reading the book...everyday raghav discovers the new beauty of her...he thinks she gets beautiful everyday...

Raghav's POV
koi ladki itni sundar kaise ho sakti hai?yeh makeup bhi nahi karti...expensive dresses ya jewellery bhi nahi pehenti...phir be sabse beautiful hai...arrey nahi nahi raghav uske barein mein itna mat soch...tu uske taraf attracted ho raha hai...

toh kya hua?apne biwi ki taraf attracted hona galat hai kya?lekin kya woh bhi mere liye aisa hi feel karti hai?

arrey buddhu woh ladki hai...agar mujhe pasand bhi karti hai toh batayegi thodi na...ek kaam karta hu mai hi usse bol deta hu ki mai uss se...

nahi nahi...agar woh abhi bhi mujhe ek friend ki tarah dekhti ho toh?mai nahi chahta humara yeh friendship kabhi bhi tooth jaye...

ek kaam karta hu thode din aur wait karta hu...lekin kabhi na kabhi usse meri dil ke baat toh batani hi padegi...

woh sab chod raghav...agar tune office ka yeh kaam jaldi khatam nahi kiya toh kal jarur balraj chachu tujhe ghar se nikal denge...

Kaise btaayein kyun tujhko chahe yaara btaa na paaye
Baatein dilo ki dekho jo baagi aankhein tujhe samjhaye
Tu jaane na... tu jaane na... tu jaane na... tu jaane na

raghav again starts working...but this time naina removes her eyes from the book and places them on raghav...she also discovers new goodness of raghav everyday...the raghav who only cares for others...including her...

Naina's POV

koi insaan itna accha kaise ho sakta hai?yeh toh khud ke barein me sochta hi nahi...

tin mehne hogaye maine isse na kisi pe gussa hotey dekha...na kisi se kuch mangtey hue dekha...he is just a...a blessing...

yeh kya naina...tu phirse uske barein me soch rahi hai...hum srif acche dost hai bus...

par hum pati patni bhi toh hai...lekin kya raghav mujhse pyar...nahi nahi usne toh kabhi mujhse kuch bola toh nahi...

syad woh mujhe bolne se hitchkicha raha hai...ya mai abhi bhi uske liye ek acchi friend hi hu...

toh kya mai hi usse bol du?nahi mai kyu pehle bolu?

[color=brown]Ek namkeen si baat hai, har nayi si baat mein
Teri khusboo chal rahi hai jo mere saath mein
Halka halka rang beete kal ka
Gehra gehra kal ho jayega
Aadha ishq adha hai aadha ho jayega
Kadmon se meelon ka wada ho jayega

raghav is about to leave for office as he has finished the work balraj gave him...

"office ja rahe ho?"naina asks him...

"ha woh ballu chachu ko kuch papers dene the..."

"lekin...umm woh tumhare...",naina hesitates for a moment...

"kya?"

"woh tumhare shirt ka button tooth gaya hai..."

raghav looks down at his shirt finding a button from the upper side broken...

"offo...ab toh mujhe shirt change karni padegi...aj presentation hai...late hogaya toh ballu chachu...",raghav becomes a bit tensed..

"tum ruko...mai ek nayi button laga deti hu...has 2 minutes lagengey...",naina assures...

"kya?agar mujhe needle lag gayi toh?"raghav fears..

"toh kya...tumhara skin bhi shirt ke sath fix ho jayegi...",naina jokes...

"tum mazak kar rahi ho...mujhe sui se bahut dar lagta hai..."

"injection nahi laga rahi hu tumhe...tum bas chup chap khade raho...",naina orders him...

naina brings needle thread and a new button and begins fixing it...

at first raghav closes his eyes out of fear...after a few seconds he opens his eyes...but he does not look at the needle...but at the person who is using this...naina...

naina too looks at him while working at the button...

Janam janam janam saath chalna yunhi
Kasam tumhe kasam aake milna yahin
Ek jaan hai bhale do badan ho judaa
Meri hoke hamesha hi rehna
Kabhi na kehna alvida

they both look at each other intensely slowly coming close...closer...

Meri subah ho tumhi
Aur tumhi shaam ho
Tum dard ho tum hi aaraam ho
Meri duaaon se aati hai bas ye sadaa
Meri hoke hamesha hi rehna
Kabhi na kehna alvida

they come very very close...so close that they can feel each other's breath...

Teri baho me hai mere dono jahan
Tu rahe jidhar meri jannat wahi
Jal rahi agar hai jo ye do tarfa
Na bhuje kabhi meri mannat yahi
Tu meri aarjoo mein teri aashiqui
Tu meri sayari mein teri nusakhi

suddenly naina's finger gets hurt by the needle...thus breaking their eye lock and the chance of lip lock...

"ouch,"naina winces..

raghav sees a drop of blood on her finger...and takes her finger in his mouth and sucks the blood off...they both look at each other again...

Meri subah ho tumhi
Aur tumhi shaam ho
Tum dard ho tum hi aaraam ho
Meri duaaon se aati hai bas ye sadaa
Meri hoke hamesha hi rehna
Kabhi na kehna alvida

naina and raghav both feels a bit embarrassed...raghav soon leaves naina's finger...

"woh tumhe toh pata hai mai khoon nahi dekh sakta..",raghav tries to justify..

"it's OK...but mujhe lagta tha tum sirf apna khoon dekh ki hi dartey ho,"naina smiles..

"ha...apna aur apno ka...",raghav says...

naina blushes hearing his words...

raghav is about to leave when he turns back at naina...

they both smile at each other

I wrote this chapter within half an hour...so I don't have any idea about how it was...I am waiting for ur reviews...plz do like and comment...

Edited by lamia1210 - 9 years ago

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Keepdreaming

@Keepdreaming

Stunner

+ 6

Posted: 9 years ago

#213

sweet update. ..
raghav and naina love each other
but don't know if it will be good to confess

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shamina

@Sakkiyah

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#214

Beautiful

Really loved the story.The song was also nice for the story.

Waiting for your next update

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Sowmiya

@anu5

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#215

Lovely update dear

Loved it!!

Raghav noticed geet's inner beauty and soul and was mesmerised

Loved his perspective

He thought his confession and endurance for Naina would spoil his camaraderie he shares with her

On other hand Naina too was spellbind and tantalize towards Raghav

She adores his caring and concerning nature of Raghav

Lovely Song!!

Loved it and was apt for the situation too

Loved the last part

Naina was sewing his broken button and Raghav was admiring her antics

Loved Raghav's statement at the last

😊

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Sowmiya

@anu5

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#216

Thanks for the pm

Will be waiting for the next update😊

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Yashfeen

@Bhatakti_atma

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Posted: 9 years ago

#217

I loved it..

Their povs.. Arghhh..Confess kar do yaar ab aur wait nahi hota 😳

Aur needle se darr? Sirf Raghav ko hi lag sakta hai😆

The needle scene was cute. 😉

Update soon plz 😊

Thanks for the pm😃

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lamia1210

@lamia1210

Inactive

Posted: 9 years ago

#218

Originally posted by: ananya2010
Awesome update, loved it.
Veer deserved the slap and Mr Kumar too for being rude to Naina's mother. Poor Naina everyone is taunting her but happy that she gave it back to them.
Thanks for the PM dear.

hey ananya really sorry 4 the late reply...by the thanks a lot 4 liking dear...😊