PriVeer Story Circle - Page 91

@Darling it was pure entertainment. You have such a pleasant writing style. 😊
How I wish to go next as something came in my mind but I haven't done breakfast yet 😆

Originally posted by: fizy_wizy

@Darling it was pure entertainment. You have such a pleasant writing style. 😊
How I wish to go next as something came in my mind but I haven't done breakfast yet 😆

Originally posted by: RishuDarling

To all, Thank you for the sweet compliments.

No problem Fizza. Have your breakfast. Feed your internal self. You need the fuel for your creative master mind😉 surprise us.. We are waiting for your next update soon.

Is there anyone else out there who wants to do the honours? If you have not written before but feel inspired to, just don't think, start writing and throw yourself in the deep. You just might discover a new hobby or even a talent within yourself. And what's the worst that could happen? You will end up with a Rishu Rhyme, which I am sure you will survive😆

So.. Who what will follow next? Will they actually kiss? Or become more intimate? Will they find out secrets and mysteries of this old creepy house and it's equally creepy keeper?

Marr, long live good strong WiFi!😆😉

Those are actually very motivating . It makes a person go quicker than normal.😆

Ok! Since no one is going next I am doing it. Right now 😉

She tightly gripped the arm he had around her waist "R-Ranveer why d-don't you go and change as well?" A cunning smile spread across his face as he moved his hand along her arm reaching her face. Taking her hair behind the ear he whispered "Sshh! Don't say anything, Nothing can stop me today. I waited for this moment for so long". His voice took a note of deep lower power as it was a bit strange. As she looked into his eyes she felt a sudden, soul-shattering chill. She could hear her own breaths as if they were a wind rushing in a storm.

She found herself being lowered on the bed. She pushed him back. "You's better not". He pulled back, stared deep into her eyes. She never saw him like this. Pinning her under his weight he smiled and leaned for a kiss. "S-stop" She screamed and kicked him hard, really hard where it hurts, right in his area. Last time she did it accidentally but this time she stroked with all the strength she had. It was more painful for him than taking the bullet as his breathing stopped for a moment. Unable to look around he lied on the bed in a child pose.

The candles in the hallway and the the scent was pulling her towards the room in the corner as she slowly walked. Taking a good look around she spotted the weird looking man standing right behind her with a candle in his hand. It was terrifying for her to an extent she wasn't able to say anything.
"I told you not to go there, what brings you here?". His shrill voice was something that broke the horrifying atmosphere.
"W-what's there? She was hesitant at first but this had made her curiosity rise.
"Miss Oberoi, Why did you come out?" Ranveer came forward as he spotted both talking in the hallway. "He is asking as if he doesn't know anything" She thought to himself. As she had her gaze fixed at him it was confusing for him. His gaze turned towards the man who was looking creepily at Priyanka from head to toe. Ranveer steps forward placing his hand on the man's face pushes him away and stands in front of Priyanka. "Do you want anything, Mister?"he says putting his hands in the trouser's pockets. "I just want to inform you that do not stare at the girl". The man was unable to look up at Ranveer. "Why? do you have any problem with it?" Ranveer steps closer to the man."I don't have any but you might have".
"Just cut the crap. Ok! Now please leave"

"Not this girl, the one in your room. Do not look into the eyes of the girl in the painting. She was murdered in this house. She loved a man but he didn't so he killed her. She died as a virgin".

Priyanka was getting scared. "Really? Is this all you came up with?". Ranveer was clearly not affected by it. Priyanka recalls what happened in the room and wonders if Ranveer was possessed by her spirit. "I d-don't t-think he's lying" priyanka says. "Aaahhh!" Priyanka screams as she felt something moving along her feet, she jumped at him and he held her in a loving embrace. It was a cat

"I remember someone call herself Prinku Pehlwan". He stressed on the Pehlwan part. He puts her down as she felt embarrassed by her own actions. "I shouldn't have come with you. Dev..."
(He cuts in) "Are you missing Drev". She had already been so fuming that she ignored his teasing. "Why would I?" She looked at him
Ranveer wanted to know about dev so that it could help Shinday in finding more information. "Do you want to speak to him, Shall I... " he wanted to know where he was
"No Thankyou! firstly I don't remember his number and secondly he must be in the plane by now".
"Plane? What do you mean by that"? Is he not in the country? Where is he? He wanted to know it all
"Why should I tell you?" Priyanka walks away

Word Count: Some rules are meant to be broken 😉

Guys!

Hello everybody 😃
I'm Navneeta and I'm new to the IB forum. I used to watch earlier but after Anika took the job as a wedding planner ,I stopped watching it. But recently I again got the IB bug inside my head and went to watch all the episodes of it. That time only PriVeer grabbed my attention. Such an awesome couple 👏. And before I knew I became a complete PriVeer fan. I love the story circle and u guys are so talented 👏 .
I'm now addicted to this story circle 😊 and I totally enjoy reading updates put by each one of you. I joined this circle because now I cannot remain a silent reader 😉. Thanks to the motivation u guys provide to us . This has only encouraged me to take such a big step.

"Why should I tell you?" Priyanka walks away

"What does that supposed to mean?" he asked, annoyance and irritation filling his voice. "It means exactly what I told you. I am not telling you about Dev" she said, annoyed. Why is so he adamant to know about her personal life? "Why do you care anyway?" she asked, as they entered the room.

Ranveer suddenly felt cold, and noticed now what she was wearing. "I am a police officer Miss. Oberoi. I am doing my job, and why are you wearing that? Do you want to die of hypothermia?" he said, irritation never fading, and pointing at her nightdress, then he looked away. He hated to admit that he was blushing.

Priyanka was on the verge of fuming. How dare he?! He was the one who told her to put it on? Even if she chose to wear it let's say hypothetically speaking, who is he tell her what she can wear or can't?! However, then she remembered how he was acting earlier and stopped herself from saying anything further. He was just doing his job - making sure she was alive and safe.

"Anyway" he said, annoyed. Dev was on his suspect's list and he dared not to speak his mind - he was jealous. The green monster was rearing its ugly head. He needed to find more info on Dev if he really wanted to solve the case, and the Oberoi girl was not helping.

"Go put something else on, or go under the covers" he said and walked away to the sofa. She stared at him quizzically. There he was with his "don't care" attitude. "Why are you staring at me?" he asked and continued "you want to die and make me the only witness to your death?" he sneered. Priyanka was hurt. Why was he so mad, because she didn't give him any info about Dev? Why did care anyway? Why does he get so worked up every time the topic of Dev comes up? She shunned the little part of her had dared to say anything even before it could began. "No, it can never be. He's only doing his job and trying to get on my nerved. There's no way, he's jealous" she said to herself. She got up on the bed, completely forgetting the chill she felt earlier in two separate occasions - when she was lying on the bed trying to sleep and when they walked into the room. She put the semi ratted covers on. This was the best she could get tonight anyway.

Ranveer sighed. He didn't mean to act like that. This case was getting twisted by every minute and he needed to put an end to this. He needed to know where Dev was going, one way or another.

Priyanka was trying her best not to cry. First she gets in an accident, the bloody form of Ranveer is more than enough to make her feel as if someone is tearing her heart into pieces. Then, she gets stuck in the middle of nowhere, away from her family, completely unsure whether she will make it alive or not. On top of that, the man she was so worried about was now treating her so indifferently! First he gets mad because she is not telling her anything about Dev, then he harshly tells her that she shouldn't die as he is not willing to be a witness. Why did she still care about him anyway? She should've known better. Why would someone let the girl that he doubted for the longest time in his heart anyway?

She tried to go to sleep and now something wet on her face. She was crying. Little did she know that the man across from her has been observing her. "I shouldn't have been too harsh" he said to himself. Then he heard Priyanka scream.

Posted! Should be on page 121.

I'll try to post another update. However, if anyone wants to join please do so!!!! 😊

So I'm out for a day and we have 3 great updates😃 but I'm a little confused did the almost kiss happen or not? Did he actually get kicked where the sun never shines for the second time?