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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: twerping

I think we are entering the zone of paranormal activities now.. This is awesome!!! Great stuff Tahiti!



Aren't we? 😉 Remember our conversation the other day? 😆
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Posted: 8 years ago
Tahiti, glad to have you in the circle! Welcome! 😳 And fantastic update - lot's of possibilities open. :)
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Tahiti-1

Guys,
I honestly appreciate all the love and support!
I think I will pass it on to RishuDarling!
Maybe you could bring in a kiss, a little romance and a little spookiness? 😉

All of you guys are awesome writers!!!! I am glad y'all are enjoying my post! 😊



Hi all, hi Tahiti,
So.. I came home very very late today and noticed my gift.
Tahiti has passed on the writers 'pen' to me.

Tahiti, I will try my best to incorporate all the elements and I can only hope I will do justice to your update and to the Cycle. It feels like an exam, a project for school.
Now I just have to make sure I ace this one or you cut me some slack 😆😉
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: RishuDarling




Hi all, hi Tahiti,
So.. I came home very very late today and noticed my gift.
Tahiti has passed on the writers 'pen' to me.

Tahiti, I will try my best to incorporate all the elements and I can only hope I will do justice to your update and to the Cycle. It feels like an exam, a project for school.
Now I just have to make sure I ace this one or you cut me some slack😆😉



😆
You are AWESOME writer Rishu!!! ❤️


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Posted: 8 years ago

Sixth Sense ~ A Haunted House or A Helping Hand? ~


"Tell me, we're you able to find out more information?" Ranveer was eager to receive an update. He got up and walked towards the end of the room and looked around. All he could see was was an old painting hanging on the wall, an old wooden closet, chair and table.


"Sir, we don't have a clear lead yet on the whereabouts of Dev Chabra. The license plate of the SUV is registered on his name but we can't do much yet. Legally, he has committed no crime. Not yet at least, but he is still a suspect in this matter."


"Shindey listen, can you arrange transportation for us with the local police? I want our luggage transferred as well. We need to get back as soon as possible! And one more thing.. I want a full investigation on the Jeep. I have been thinking.. The battery was replaced last month. It should last at least 3 to 5 years. So, it seems the ground wiring was rigged. If so, by whom? Please make sure this is done on full priority. I expect a full report by tomorrow morning."


He stood in front of the window as he finished his conversation. The full moon shone brightly. He had always been attracted by its magical beauty. He had recalled the evening of Karva Chauth. The evening, when he had found Priyanka completely distraught. He turned around to look at her. She was sleeping.


He looked around again. His eyes rested on the painting. Although, the painting was old and covered under a layer of dust, he could see it was portrait of a young woman. A classic beauty. Burlesque dancer perhaps, judging by her costume.


What was that howling sound he heard? Was this human or animalistic? He looked outside the window, but there was no animal to been, except for an owl in a tree.


He thought of the words of the creepy housekeeper:

"No matter what, do not go to the North end!"


Was it really a joke? He made a mental note to request his name and have Shindey pull a background data on him.


Why was he not able to shake that feeling that he was being watched? As if someone was caressing his face.

He looked again at Priyanka.


Priyanka had been watching him throughout the call but quickly closed her eyes, the second she realized he was about to look in her direction, pretending to be fast asleep. The truth was, she had heard and registered his every spoken and unspoken word. Secretly, she had enjoyed listening to him, watching his body language. Somehow, his dominance had the power to startle and overwhelm her but then again, at the same time, she felt drawn to him. His care and concern had relaxed and calmed her down.


Why was she not able to shake that feeling that she was being watched? What was that howling sound? Just like Ranveer, she had wondered about the same questions.


Suddenly, Priyanka felt a cold chill shiver up her spine. It gave her goosebumps. She opened up her eyes wide and looked straight into Ranveers eyes, feeling scared and uncomfortable. Her breathing was visibly unbalanced.


Within seconds he stood at her bedside while she got up. Both looked straight in each others eyes. She looked frightened.


"What's wrong Priyanka? Did you have a nightmare? About the shooting?"


"W-we n-need to l-leave. N-n-now! This p-p-place.."


"Ssst.. Just calm down.. Ssst.. Don't be scared.. Nothing will happen to you.. I promise you.."


"N-no.. T-trust me. This p-place is h-h-haunted! Y-you have to b-b-believe me! I felt it. An ice c-cold h-hand on my b-back, n-neck and f-face."


Ranveer had felt the same earlier, but decided not to confirm this to her. It would freak her out even more. He assumed that the events of that day had taken a toll on Priyanka. The poor girl had gone through a lot today. He held her in his arms tightly.


"Miss Oberoi.. Your clothes are still wet from the rain. You have to remove these wet clothes or else you might catch a cold. That cold feeling you are describing? It must be because of this. Come on remove your clothes quickly!"


"What?" she just stared at him. What did he just say to me?'


"Come on! Chop chop!"


"Of course I won't take of my clothes. I don't have anything to change into."


Ranveer realised what exactly he had asked her. Not your smartest moment' he thought to himself. He let go of her slowly but remained still and ever so close.


"Look, just take of your clothes so it can dry. You can wrap the bedsheet around you right?"


Without waiting for her reply he had turned around, giving her the space to change. Priyanka stood there hesitantly. Ranveer opened up the closet. He chuckled. A naughty smirk appeared on his face. He had found a handful of outfits. He picked one and handed this over to Priyanka.


"Here you can wear this."


"What?" Priyanka looked at the outfit in her hands.

Seriously, I am not wearing this!' she thought.


"Look I have no time for this Priyanka! I told you I would keep you safe and sound. That means your health also. So go and change!"


Priyanka just stood there looking at him, not budging an inch.


"Miss Oberoi! I have work to do.. What will it be now?

  • Either you change your outfit yourself

  • Or I help you change..

  • Or.. you sleep without your clothes... underneath that blanket..

So.. What will it be.. MISS.. OBEROI..?"


Priyanka fled to the bathroom to change.

Unbelievable! I can't believe I am wearing this. It's so short and revealing.'


She stood there quite a while. Embarrassed to walk in the room.


"Miss Oberoi? Have you decided to sleep there? Come out now or else I will come inside. And trust me.. I will come in!"


"P-please t-t-turn the l-l-lights off first!"


After Ranveer had confirmed all the lights were out, she slowly stepped out. His eyes had to adjust to the darkness. She did not realise it but the closer she came towards the bed, the better his view on her became.


The magic of the moon had gotten him into a state of high, treating him on a beautiful eyesight. Like a magnetic field was activated, he was drawn to her. A feeling he could not resist any longer. He didn't know how or when but he found himself standing right across of her.


Priyanka had noticed Ranveer walking towards her. It all went so fast. Her mind wanted to object though her voice failed her. She could not utter a word. What was happening to her? It felt as if she was under a spell of the moon. Intoxicated by its beams.


She looked absolutely stunning in that sexy night dress. He smiled, complimenting himself on his good taste.


"Priyanka.." Her name was spoken in a soft loving manner. He pulled her closer to her, barely leaving any space in between them. His hands gently touched her beautiful soft pinkish cheeks. She closed her eyes, enjoying the electrifying sensation that pulled through her, merely by his one touch.


"Ranveer.." His name escaped from her lips, as he leaned in for a kiss. He could feel the warmth and softness of her breasts, against his body. His longing for her could no longer be kept inside. He realized now, that the loud pounding of his heart was in fact the announcement of an intense desire ready to break free.
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Tahiti-1


😆
You are AWESOME writer Rishu!!! ❤️



😳 so sweet of you to say that. Thank you.
I have posted my update just now. I truly hope you will like it.
And as far as word count goes.. I have not been able to respect that rule at all 😆
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Posted: 8 years ago
You have done a fantastic job!!!!!!
I LOVE how you added details to the room, with a hint of spookiness!!!
You also added romance!!! ❤️
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Posted: 8 years ago
That was another brilliant update, Rishi! The element of spookiness combined with romance. 😉
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Posted: 8 years ago
Oooh, horror and romance. I like this 😛 Great update, Rishu!
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Posted: 8 years ago
Who's going next? Not me. 😛

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