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Posted: 8 years ago

"Is -is he okay?" she enquired while signing the form. Priyanka realised the water from her hand had wetted the edge of the form. "Sorry," she said, indicating the paper.

"No problem ma'am", the nurse smiled at Priyanka.

"That bullet was a close call. Inches away from the heart" the nurse explained while Priyanka listened to her with her eyes widened.

"Well, he is a police man. This shouldn't be a big deal for him. Once the doctor checks him, he is good to go" she concluded.

Priyanka paced her way to the sitting area, her head suddenly dizzy. Close call. He could have been dead because of me. She couldn't just keep on doing this. At first Om bhaiya, and now ACP Randhawa. She felt like she was bringing an array of misfortunes with her, and she had to stop it. She carted danger with herself and she realised anyone who tries to be around her at this time ends up under the same cloud of danger.

"Miss Oberoi."

Her chain of thoughts broke as she heard him call out for her. There was a white bandage around his left arm and a blotch of blood on it. He held his leather jacket in his other hand and was wearing the same shirt bloodied shirt.

"W-why are you here" she enquired, surprised by his antics. "P-please, you sho-should be resting."

ACP Randhawa chuckled.

"The doctor completed his round. I'm good to go now" he replied. "And this", he continued, pointing at his wound. "Is not a big deal. Its very usual, Miss Oberoi. There's nothing to worry about. Now if you don't want to get further late, lets leave."

"No" Priyanka retorted.

ACP Randhawa looked at her with narrowed eyes.

"I can't keep d-doing this" she continued, standing up from her seat. "I can't -keep causing such troubles, Mr. Randhawa."

"What are you talking about?" ACP walked closer to her.

"This" Priyanka pointed at his injury. "This. I'm -talking about this. You c-could have died because of me. I cannot keep doing this."

ACP Randhawa kept looking at her in awe. Is she being serious right now. Is she. He ignored her musings and held his stance.

"Miss Oberoi, do you seriously want to spend the night in a hospital? Haven't you watched horror movies?" Randhawa spoke with a certain resilience in his voice, hoping she'd listen. "There's a bus stand around the corner. Lets go."

"Y-you should go" she continued, discounting his efforts. "I'll m-manage alone."


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Posted: 8 years ago
Aw, Prinku
What a sweet update, Rini! Loved it. Who wants to go next? :) I can't update for today, might be able to write one tomorrow night.
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Posted: 8 years ago
Anu, I think you should go ahead :D
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Posted: 8 years ago
Hello! This message is for the handful of (silent)readers that this circle has. We were wondering if anyone else wants to join the circle as a writer and wants to be able to update the stories! The rules are simple and one can find it on page 1! If you're looking forward to give the story your unique twist, please PM Twerping and you're set to go!

- PriVeer Story Circle
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Posted: 8 years ago

Yea okay :D I guess Anu disappeared. Waiting for your update, Fiz :D
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: ThatNarcissist


Yea okay :D I guess Anu disappeared. Waiting for your update, Fiz :D


-shuffles in-

Haha, can't do an update today, Rini. A little bogged down with work. Looking forward to your update Fizza!
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Posted: 8 years ago
Staying back at the hospital after realising the horror element wasn't something she would prefer. Ranveer had a victorious smile on his face. By the time they started walking towards the bus stop that was just a yard away. Priyanka's attention was completely occupied by Ranveer's wound.

"How was your trip so far, Miss Oberoi?" Just to divert her attention he started the conversation.

"I will never forget the days spent with you." Realising what she just uttered she tries to justify it. "W-what i m-meant was the d-days at A-shram". She was embarrassed. Ranveer found it amusing as her both sentences meant same.

Priyanka stood close to him as it was getting darker and she already felt scared. The pale glow of the moon light made her shine and the smile on her face made his heart beat go crazy. To him the medicines were responsible for this. He felt his nose tickle . The escaped locks of her hair were dancing in the wind and made him sneeze.

"What are you guys waiting for? No bus will be coming because of the strike. Did you not see the board behind?" The man who was passing by on the cycle alarmed them

"Oh freak! I forgot about that".

"W-what are we g-going to do now? Shall i call Shivaay Bhaiya to send us chopper?" She thought of it as a brilliant idea as it will take them less time to reach back.

"Brilliant idea Miss Oberoi. You make me proud .. Sometimes" Ranveer claps that makes Priyanka happy. "The goons in the car couldn't kill us but the chopper in this weather will definitely grant your wish" he mocks Priyanka.

"Let's walk for now. Somebody might give us a lift".

They were in the middle of the road with no one around and there was no sign of any vehicle coming. His phone rings. He tries to excuse himself but she holds his arm.

"Yes Shinday, any progress?"

"Sir the number plate that you told me about is registered on Mr. Chabra's name"

"Okay. Let me know..."

"Sir his full name is Dev Chabra"

"What? ... Are you sure?" It was difficult to digest the news

"Yes sir! I double checked it because you always say there shouldn't be a room for mistake"

"Okay Shinday, keep me updating.".

He cuts the call. Dev Chabra? Is it the same Dev or someone else? Why will he do that? Does he have any connection with all this? Is someone framing him too?
He looks at Priyanka who was staring at him with her eyes wide open."What did he say?"

"Umm... Nothing. (Unable to meet her eyes)
He just told that it might be difficult for us to find anything tonight because of the storm."

Why couldn't I tell her? Was Dev the one blackmailing her? No body except her family knew she is here. Then how did he know? Why did they break up? Priyanka had answer to all the questions but he was unable to ask her anything.

Placing his hand on hers to calm her down he assures"Don't worr..." He found himself tightly hugged when lightening struck. She squeezed him tightly. It started raining quite heavily. "P-prinku P-pehlwan is the s-strongest" she was chanting continuously with her face banging onto his chest. "She's afraid of thunder?" It was so sudden that he couldn't do anything. He was keeping his hands off her. To calm her down he pats on her soaking wet hair
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Posted: 8 years ago
Wow !! Wadda twist !!! This is amazing. Please update soon.. BTW, Good Mrng all
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Posted: 8 years ago
Hey guys😳,
So I just wanted to let you'll know that I'm not sure if I will be able to update until Tuesday thing is im going on a trip and am not sure how the WiFi works there with God's grace if that is set then it'll be awesome but if if doesn't then I don't know what I will do with my life
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Immaturebookie

Hey guys😳,

So I just wanted to let you'll know that I'm not sure if I will be able to update until Tuesday thing is im going on a trip and am not sure how the WiFi works there with God's grace if that is set then it'll be awesome but if if doesn't then I don't know what I will do with my life


So sweet to give us a heads-up. Don't worry about it. PriVeer Cycle will be here after your trip as well. Just make sure you enjoy yourself and do whatever you need to there 😉 have a safe trip.

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