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Posted: 8 years ago
Have a feeling that intense action scene is coming up

If it is can ranveer be shown getting hurt
Really want to see a concerned prinku
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Posted: 8 years ago

The Crash Part I


As the headlights of the SUV approached and shone brighter,

Priyanka closed her eyes and prayed while she held on tightly, preparing herself for the worst. A loud scream escaped her lips. "RANVEER!" She could feel the car spin, rounds and rounds, before they actually came to a still stand. The smell of burning tires overwhelmed her. Out of breath and in tears, she opened up her eyes to check on what had happened.


Ranveer had reacted on pure instinct and techniques, which he had excelled in during his training. He had managed to avoid the crash by diverting the car to the left at the very last moment, leaving the SUV no time or space to react.


"Priyanka?! Are you ok?" The adrenaline was noticeable in his voice and face. He looked at her briefly, but with genuine concern. He had to stay focussed. These guys would be back for sure!


"Yes.. You?" She spoke clearly but could not find more words, for which, it appeared, was no time.


"Don't worry about me.. Just hold on tightly!" he said, while trying to restart the car without success. In the rear mirror he could see their taillights, signaling the SUV brakes being used. It would not take them very long to turn around.


"COME ON! DAMMIT! START!"

Ranveer was not able to get the car started again, leaving him frustrated. He had no choice than to prepare Priyanka for the crash.


"Priyanka.. Looked at me.. Listen, I need you to do exactly as I tell you to do.. They will crash into us with full force, pushing us forward. You just need to hang in there. I will take care of the rest. Ok?"


She nodded. His voice was calm and in control. There was no doubt in her mind. She trusted him in this very moment and she would follow him without any hesitations.


He gave her the instructions to get exactly in the position to protect herself as much as possible. Ranveer had a plan. Hopefully, it would work. He had shifted into second gear. As the SUV approached he warned Priyanka.


"Brace yourself! NOW!"
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Posted: 8 years ago

The Crash Part II


The crash happened just like Ranveer explained to her, with immense force, pushing the jeep forward. Out of reflex to protect her, he had put his arm in front of Priyanka.


Ranveer made sure to keep the steering wheel straight, trying to avoid not to crash into trees or other objects. As soon as he thought they had made enough speed, he jump started the car, this time with success! "Woo-hoo YES!" He screamed out.


He hit on the gas pedal to get a head start. Without any hesitation, he turned the car around. But this time, he was prepared and in control. He pulled out his gun! He would end this, right here and right now.


Priyanka panicked. A gun? She prayed again in silence. Oh dear God, please let nothing happen to us? Please..'


Ranveer fired the first shot, at their tires. The gunshots back and forth sounded like a harsh threatening thunder. The front shield got damaged, scaring Priyanka even more. But she remained quiet.


"OUCH!" Ranveer exclaimed.

"RANVEER!" Priyanka wanted to reach out to him, but the movement of the jeep did not allow her to do so.


"I am ok! It's nothing!" he said as he fired again, now wounding the driver. The SUV crashed into a tree with full force.


Ranveer ran over to the car to see if both were still alive and if he could get information out of them. But unfortunately, they did not survive. Ranveer quickly investigated the car for proof, took their phones and guns, and wrote down the license plate. He needed to find out who had sent them.


He called Shinde to find more details and send the local police to clean up the mess. As he walked back to the car, and put his phone in his pocket, he felt thick sticky drops on his arms. He looked down and noticed a big wet red spot on his shirt, which seemed to be growing wider and wider.


Priyanka ran towards him. "Ranveer! Blood!"

He thought to have seen concern for him reflected in her eyes.

A smile appeared on his face.


"I told you.. I would not let anything happen to you.."

He could hear her call out his name, right before he collapsed.
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Posted: 8 years ago
Ok.. Update time from me.. 😆

RANVEER !!!!!! Priyanka screamed as she watched him crumple on to the ground. Her eyes grew wide and she stepped in beside him and shakily touched the spot where blood was gushing out. He was bleeding profusely. The bullet had hit his arm. She didn't know what to do. The nearest hospital was away by 10 mins but then until then she needed to stop the blood flow but then there was nothing that could be done. She searched both the cars for First-Aid boxes but found none. The road was deserted which meant that they had to walk to the hospital. Finding no other option, she took her dupatta and tied it tightly around his arm. He jerked and winced but didn't do anything more. After tying it tightly, she tried making him stand up with his injured arm around her shoulders, one of her hands supporting his injured arm and the other around his waist. It was difficult. He was too heavy. Priyanka was huffing and puffing. She thought,"He must be eating like a pig !!!!!" Cursing his heavy body, she made him walk until he fell down again, bringing her on top of him. She landed on his hard chest and woke up slightly to look at him. His lips were trembling. He was shivering. She felt his neck and found it to be burning. "He needs to be taken to the hospital immediately", thought Priyanka. Again with the same strength, she pulled him up and walked him till the hospital. She screamed out to the doctors and nurses who came running and put him on the stretcher. He was taken into the Operation Theatre where Priyanka was not allowed. The last she saw of Ranveer was his not letting go of her hands and the doctors taking him inside leaving her to catch a last glimpse of Ranveer..

She went out. Her hands were cold. She was shivering herself. What had conspired just few minutes ago... The chase, The shooting game, Ranveer injured.. She closed her eyes and shuddered. She didn't notice the rain making its way down to the Earth. She let her tears fall.. She didn't know why she was crying. Maybe she was stranded in an unknown place, maybe that car crash incident or maybe Ranveer was hurt. Whatever it was, the rain acted like a good friend hiding her tears. She felt a hand on her arm. She turned to see RANVEER !!! She was both shocked and surprised. She struttted,"Ranveer ???" Ranveer replied,"Yes Priyanka.. But why are you scared to see me ? I won't eat you." He laughed. It felt good to see him laugh like that. Then she frowned,"You are supposed to be in the Operation Theatre. How are you here now ? I thought you nearly died after that bullet." Ranveer replied,"Priyanka.. You really think I would leave you and go ????" Priyanka lowered her face. Ranveer put his finger under her chin and lifted her face up,"Never Priyanka. I would never leave you and go." And then he pulled her to his hard chest for a bone-crushing hug. Both were wet and clinged to each other. It might have been passionate, intense and romantic with the rain dancing around them but for Priyanka, it felt safe. She felt safe. She left warm. His arms snaked around her slender waist where he could feel her curves. Her arms were around his neck feeling his soft hair. There was no space between them.. She broke the hug and smiled at the face smiling a genuine smile back at her. She turned away from him. Priyanka said,"When the crash happened and you got injured, I got scared. I don't know who sent them but they looked dangerous. And you put forward your life to save mine and even got injured for me.. How can I even repay you !!" She closed her eyes and let a fresh pair of tears make way down her face.

She heard a voice,"Miss !! Miss !!" Snapping her eyes open, she turnedaround to see one of the nurses standing there. She frowned and walked around to search for Ranveer. The nurse looked bewildered. The nurse asked,"Miss.. Are you alright ?" Priyanka replied,"Yes. I am alright. Where is Ranveer ?? He was here na.." The nurse replied,"Miss. He is in the Operation Theatre having the bullet taken out. You need to sign this form Miss. But first, please do come inside. You are dripping wet." Priyanka was bewildered but then came inside and looked at the form. She then realized that it had been a dream and that Ranveer was inside the Operation Theatre.

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Edited by AngelicTomboy - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
Oh My Matha!!! *Wonders how hot Ranveer most might have looked in this action sequence*☺️
Good work girls😉. I can go next if no one has reserved a spot. Do let me know if anyone wants to go next😊
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Immaturebookie

Oh My Matha!!! *Wonders how hot Ranveer most might have looked in this action sequence*☺️

Good work girls😉. I can go next if no one has reserved a spot. Do let me know if anyone wants to go next😊


OMM indeed.. So much spice.. ACP's Accident, Prinku worrying, Rain Sequence.. What else yaar? Will the doctors be able to remove that bullet(s)? Will they find out who messed around the car wires causing problems? Who sent those men in the SUV? What proof could help them further? Has Shinde discovered something in the meantime? Oh gosh... I don't think I can sleep now... 😆

Marr, feel free to continue. I don't think there is anyone claiming the next update for now 😊
I am off to sleep for a few hours.. Surprise us 😉
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: ThatNarcissist



Aww okay do your work :3
That reminds me of your PriVeer fic which you haven't updated since ages :P



That's the one I was referring to. 😉
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Posted: 8 years ago
Wow! 3 updates to catch up on. I'll be back later. :)
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Posted: 8 years ago
I'm sorry guys I won't be able to update today😭
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Posted: 8 years ago
Loved the updates, Rishu and Deepu! :)
Waiting for Rini's ^_^

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