Jealousy is a disease! (RuMya TS completed @ Pg3) 24/12

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They never required a reason to start a fight. No matter how normal talk they're having it always ended on a fight. She lost her patience with Rudra. Neither recalled what that fight was about. She stormed out with blood pulsing. He too started punching the sandbag in her room. She decides to meet Reyaan after her broadcast to sort out the uncomfortable truth about her marriage with Rudra.

Her face has always been beetroot coloured but the sunlight made it even brighter. Slightly nervous about disclosing the truth to the person who was more like a friend than a boyfriend. He saw the tension rising on her face. She was hesitant about coming forward with her story but held firm. She was surprised by his cool reaction as she didn't expect things to go smooth. He promised himself to make things better between Soumya and Rudra.

He suggested to drop her home which she accepted quite happily. Reaching the house they found the door closed.

"Why is it closed? It must be his doing." Soumya was still fuming as he recalled their fight in the morning

"Relax Soumya, what's the big deal? Just ring the bell," Putting his hand on her shoulder he calms her down and reached his other hand towards the bell.

"Stop! It's late and I don't want anyone to see us together especially Dadi". Soumya stops him from ringing the bell and takes her phone out to call Anika so that she could open the door for her

"You don't want Dadi to see us together or ... Rudra?" Reyann teases Soumya

"Shutup Ok!" She was about to call Anika when the door opened. She pushed Reyaan to the side as she was stunned.

Rudra was standing in between the half opened door, holding it and sticking his face out.

"Are you back" He tried to be friendly as if nothing happened between them earlier

"No, I am still in the studio. Duffer!" She was irritated by his actions

"How many times have I told you to call me with respect". He opened the door , stepped out

"Respect ?to you? Huh! Anika Didi's chandni would love to" Soumya folding her arms sticks her tongue out

"Liste...Aaa" He points his finger and it results in Soumya holding and twisting it

"Sshhh!" Soumya shuts his mouth by pinching his lips together

Reyann was watching all this and wonders how difficult would it be for him to bring them closer so that they can realise their feelings for eachother.

"H-hi Rudra!" Reyann interrupts their fight and waves towards Rudra who was already in shock.

"You were with this monkey? And did you just insult me, Me, infront of him?" Rudra glares at Reyaan and then Soumya. He removes her hand from his mouth and pulls her closer. "And why was he hiding"

"Why should i give explanation to you?" Soumya placing her hands by waist questions him

"B-because... Because" He wanted to say because she is his wife but the words were not coming out of his mouth. He grabs her arm "Just get in". He found himself standing inside while Soumya was not even budging from her spot he turned and saw Reyaan and Soumya holding hands and looking at eachother. His ears were emitting smoke that only he could feel.

"Now that you are home safely, I'll be at ease" Reyaan says with an assuring smile

"What?" Soumya laughs at it

Rudra's jaw dropped about 3 times during that whole meeting & he laughed in disbelief.
"You're at ease? I am someone who doesn't really put people at ease" he sniped jealousy.

"Oh I didn't know we were supposed to care about you". Soumya snubs him

"Let him be" Reyann tells her to put her hair up for tomorrow so that he could see her beautiful face clearly. Soumya was confused at what he was saying as he had no idea whatsoever. The second his hand reached to touch her hair Rudra's eyes narrow in anger.

He pulled her in as he had enough but she runs back out to say him GoodBye! Reyaan tells Soumya to go in first. They argue about it back and fourth until Rudra yells at her and threatens to call Dadi. Reyaan snaps an imaginary picture of Soumya with his hands and says "Just in case I miss you"
Rudra finally slams the door in his face.

He drags her along until they reach the rooms uptairs "Sleep tight tonight Soumya"
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Posted: 9 years ago
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res.
Yayaya Jealous Rudra is treat to watch/read. 😃

This was amazinggg girl. 👏😳
Jealousy surely is a disease.
I love how he switched between funny & intense mode when jealous.
This guy is a package.
LOVED IT.

Please can you pm me, whenever you post the next part. 😳
Edited by sparkle2015 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Very cute, good job! Cant wait for the next part.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: sparkle2015

res.

Yayaya Jealous Rudra is treat to watch/read.😃

This was amazinggg girl.👏😳
Jealousy surely is a disease.
I love how he switched between funny & intense mode when jealous.
This guy is a package.
LOVED IT.

Please can you pm me, whenever you post the next part.😳



He really is a complete package.
I will for sure 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Thankyou. 😃 Update soon. 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
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This was simply amazing 😳
Jealous Rudy was a treat to read 😆
Waiting eagerly for the next part
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He came down scratching the head with his free hand as the other had a bottle full of protein shake , apparently half asleep as well. He rubbed his eyes as he was left puzzled seeing the decorations and whole family gathered around. Did I miss something? The more he thought his little mind was left spinning. He struggled to see through them.

"Come On Reyaan, now man up and do it" Om said placing his hands on his shoulders and pressing them firmly.

"Reyaan? That monkey? What is he doing here so early in the morning". He seemed confused as he looked at his watch and the time was 11:30.

Anika left her spot and she went closer to a shy Soumya that left him with a clear view of the happening. The family kept on motivating Reyaan.

"What is it? Some clown show?" He was irritated with his family more than he was feeling angry towards Reyaan. He had no idea what's going on. He yawned

"Soumya, will you allow me to show you my Paratha making skills for the rest of our lives?" The next moment Reyaan was on his knees holding a paratha in his hand as if it's a ring. The family laughed at the proposal.

"Say yes Soumya" Jhanvi suggested

"No sumo, you can accept this paratha. Don't you know you are on a strict diet. Reject it. Quick Soumya. I have a protein shake ready for you. See" he was talking as if Soumya was listening to him.

"Yes, i will". Soumya's words were pricking him like a needle. He was getting furious. He couldn't do anything. He picked up the cushion from sofa and aimed at Reyaan's hand as Soumya stretched her hands towards the paratha. He threw it with all the strength he had in his biceps

"Aaahhh!" The scream forced him to wake up and he sits up in a shock.

"Have you lost it , Ru?" Sahil was clearly fuming at Rudra

"Why are you here?
Wait a minute? Was it just... a dream? " he mumbles to himself

"Dadi sent me to wake you up as it is getting late for the Pooja.
Just to let you know I wasn't dying to come here. Ok?" Sahil sticked his tongue out as they both never got along well and leaves

Rudra quickly gets up and starts punching in air in excitement as he felt relieved knowing it was just a dream.

"Joker!" Sahil peeked through the door as Rudra's voice was clearly no less than a speaker.

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He came out all dressed up. He admired his Anika Bhabhi's creative abilities seeing the decorations. He starts looking around as his eyes just wanted to see Soumya. Not Soumya but he spots Sahil sitting on the sofa doing his homework. He approaches him as he was sure that Sahil is the only one who always knew Soumya's whereabouts.

"Sahil, Where is everyone?" He sat by his side still looking here and there. Sahil leans behind a bit as Rudra's big physique was covering his view. He extends his arm and points towards everyone standing in the Mandir and says their names. This irritates Rudra as he felt Sahil mocked him

"I can see that." Rudra looks down at Sahil who was laughing showing his front teeth

"Sumo..." As he was in the middle of saying it he quickly stopped thinking how much Sahil dislikes someone calling her that "love Angel...S-Soumya, where is she?

"Yes, she is my love and my angel" Sahil closes his eyes folding his arms starts imaging Soumya. "Where is she?" Rudra
Yelled and it startled Sahil. He was angry. The phone beside Sahil rang and it diverted their attention. It was Soumya's phone and Reyaan sent message

"I'll be there in 20. Love".

Rudra snatched the phone before Sahil could see it "Do your homework or else I'll tell Anika Didi". He tucks in the phone in his pocket. He turned and saw her standing behind with a smile plastered across her face. She looked breathtakingly beautiful with her twinkling big eyes. She wore a long white dress that made her look no less than an angel.

"Soumya, Rudra, come quick" her gaze turned back from his face. As she turns he yanks her pony leaving her hair flow down her shoulders. She looked at him but ignored. He clearly remembered how Reyaan told Soumya to tie her hair up today. He stopped right there. He felt as if all this has happened before. He looked at his watch and the time was 11:10. It was all happening exactly like his dream.

The family starts the ShivIka's first pooja after marriage. Rudra saw Shivaay filling Anika's hair parting with vermillion.

"Only you two are left. So Come on complete the pooja". Dadi said pulling them in. They finish doing the pooja , Rudra was staring at Soumya all along.

Rudra puts the Veneration Plate down and takes a pinch of Sindoor from it. Soumya was about to leave but he holds her hand turning her around facing himself . Rudra raised his hand to turn her hair apart he filled it with Sindoor. Everyone gets shocked along with Soumya whose mouth was wide open.

"O Khotiya! It's not a compulsion for you to do whatever Shivaay does. Use your brains sometimes. He is a married man that is why he put Vermillion on his wife." Dadi tries to explain Rudra.

Jhanvi comes forward seeing Soumya tear up and tries to correct her son's mistake. As she reached her forehead Rudra held his mother's hand:

" Hamari Shaadi Tou Kab ki Ho Chuki, Ehsaas aaj hua hai. We are officially husband and wife now ".

He takes out the Magalsutra which he once stole from Soumya's drawer

Edited by fizy_wizy - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awesome Update 😳
Rudra's dream was so funny 😆
Loved the last part
eagerly waiting for the next part
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Posted: 9 years ago
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This is super AMAZIIINNNGGG.
I want Ro-Yaan more now.
Loved it to the core.
Thankyou for writing this.
Keep writing more.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: sparkle2015

This is super AMAZIIINNNGGG.

I want Ro-Yaan more now.
Loved it to the core.
Thankyou for writing this.
Keep writing more.



By wanting Ro-Yaan more do you mean in the show or this TS 🤣

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