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Mrinalini

@minakrish

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+ 44

Posted: 9 years ago

#21

It was heartbreaking to read this one. 😔 So beautifully worded. 😊

However, the last para did definitely bring a smile to my face! ❤️

~ Mrina <3

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Reading_love

@Shree06

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Posted: 9 years ago

#22

Beautiful
I am always amused by your writing and here you go again girl
wonderful, shravan feelings were awesomly described love it 👏

I am just 🤢

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Reshma Ahmed

@Perpetuity

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+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#23

This is so beautifully penned down. You are an awesome writer.

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Ankita

@Fly_high

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#24

Beautiful that's all I could say

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Sarcy

@Sarcy

Sparkler

+ 8

Posted: 9 years ago

#25

💔

This poor guy! Who would've thought that being his arrogant self and not doing anything would result in so much pain for Shravan - and Sumo as well. IF only he hadn't been arrogant in that one moment. But again, never in his wildest dreams would Shravan have thought that a moment of his silence would result in miseries of such magnitude!

Well penned! :)

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Ishq-high

@Ishq-high

Navigator

Posted: 9 years ago

#26

This has got to be the most beautifully articulated story of shraman. The words were transcending and it was very engrossing. Beautiful as always.

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Azraa

@Azraa01

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#27

A wonderful piece of writing

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eleutheromania

@eleutheromania

Beginner

Posted: 8 years ago

#28

This is angst-galore! The accident track could have been extended so beautifully and deal with both Nirmala and Shravan's guilt, I was quite disappointed with how it was executed.

You are so verbose, your vocabulary is to die for. I was reading the first paragraph of this story and the only word that came to my mind was "wow".