This poor guy! Who would've thought that being his arrogant self and not doing anything would result in so much pain for Shravan - and Sumo as well. IF only he hadn't been arrogant in that one moment. But again, never in his wildest dreams would Shravan have thought that a moment of his silence would result in miseries of such magnitude!
This is angst-galore! The accident track could have been extended so beautifully and deal with both Nirmala and Shravan's guilt, I was quite disappointed with how it was executed.
You are so verbose, your vocabulary is to die for. I was reading the first paragraph of this story and the only word that came to my mind was "wow".
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