RAYA SS : Fifty Shades 'Darker' PREVIEW Update pg4 22 /12 - Page 2

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Thank You So much For commenting Special thanx to Nori,kushi,Aman,Anu bcoz of this ppl i am in love with Ram and Sakshi

and Sorry i wont send pm and one more thing My updates are not in Parts it will come as scene's, thoughts you can say like previews but i have this simple way of update that will keep excitement of reading in my views Index will be update on 1st Post

You have already read Ram's Narration Here is Priya's Thought

Blue Color : thoughts

Red Color : Scene (dont get confuss it will clear with upcoming updates)



Priya's Thought (Narration,interlude)



Sigh...it all started with that awkward glances on the interview for his personal assistance

He looked me like he was reading me not my resume and I am specialist in face reading

I found him completely in behind the shell he made around him and then MY JOB happened

I tried I tried hard to work upto per his terms but I couldn't because He him self happened


"Dont Call me Sir again"

"Then what ?? RK ???

"No"

"Oh RK SIR"

"One more sir from you mouth than i Will Kiss those lips senselessly got it ???

"But Sir ??? She was cut off by his hot lips on her. She tried to push him with her hands but he took them and pinned them on the wall. She didnt open her mouth for him. She just stood there. She like it. No, no. She loves that he is kissing her.


I broke down all his Shell and his Past everything but one thing I come to know that what is He Today all because of his Past half of the part of me felt terrible to saw him like this But Other one is super Happy coz he is Mine only Mine

Confused ???????let me know your thoughts😉

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Posted: 9 years ago
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very very interesting...
waiting eagerly for more updates
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Posted: 9 years ago
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oh yess...a treat...just read the part 1 and here the second is!!! small...but deep tough... ;-) kinda fifty shades...so ram does have a past and they both a bewitched by each other...haee...all it is ...is RAYA...our life... ...:-) next soon...and try to make it a lil long and big... plzz :-) great going
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: abhishekpanchal

oh yess...a treat...just read the part 1 and here the second is!!! small...but deep tough... ;-) kinda fifty shades...so ram does have a past and they both a bewitched by each other...haee...all it is ...is RAYA...our life... ...:-) next soon...and try to make it a lil long and big... plzz :-) great going


Hi Just read you 1st comment thanx for reply and feedback it means a lot to receive comments like this and about length i can write only this at once that was 2 updates in one day 😉 and sorry i cant even imagin ppl write so much in one single update 😆😆😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Dhinchank


haha Sorry to say but there is so many awesome stories already on forum 😉
Thank u for lovly feedback will update soon



Yes off course there are so many good and beautiful stories but they had been read many times. wanted something new and it is here.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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I am liking it
Wanna read more about how the story will unfold
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Posted: 9 years ago
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superb going. priya is his personal assistant... nice very interesting...
do regular updates...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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nice. but ...one request...thoda aur jyada likho na. i mean we at IF have a habit of reading looong updates, plz agar ho sake toh updates ki length badhao.
priya is rams personal assistant. and he kissed her. ohh..wow/

waiting for next.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: iluvusakshi

nice. but ...one request...thoda aur jyada likho na. i mean we at IF have a habit of reading looong updates, plz agar ho sake toh updates ki length badhao.
priya is rams personal assistant. and he kissed her. ohh..wow/

waiting for next.


Hi thanx for feedback But Sorry i cant write more than this
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Posted: 9 years ago
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hehe...well being and writer i so can relate to ur condition...we write a lot...(thats wht we think) but it comes out to be small...as we have to put a lot of thought...and we think a lot...and pen it a lil :-P...so dont worry...you'll get used to it..and if not long updates...thn short aand quick would do... ;) so ab nxt do...chota hi sahi but update is must!!!!

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