RAYA SS : Fifty Shades 'Darker' PREVIEW Update pg4 22 /12

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reshak

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Posted: 8 years ago

#21

Its really interesting n something new..
i m liking this n love to read more...

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leena

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Posted: 8 years ago

#22

awww awesome what a start too good plz update Ram is ruthless where Priya is have her own attitude this is something really die for plz continue the next part as soon as possible plz...

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leena

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Posted: 8 years ago

#23

part 1
this was shortest one but speechless part for sure awesome too good I really enjoyed it a lot... the kiss & his authorisation on her made all views clear can't wait to read further u have really strong grip on story telling so plz don't make us wait plz post the next part soon waiting...

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Dhinchank

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Posted: 8 years ago

#24

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"Say you Love me " His grips on her neck become tighter

"Priya Sharma say you love me and i ll leave you otherwise" He smirked his nails digging deeper in her neck She fought for AIR But it become waste

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"You cant ignore him" her inner voice discourage her

"but I cant fall in his traps "She fought back

"Try Me" A male voice interrupted

"You are so...SEXY "

"You are so HOT "

"lets make this moment Memorable "😉