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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: srividhya68

awesome upt
waiting for next part
cont soon


Thank u dear!
Next update will be the sooner possible!
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Lovely update Maithu! Waiting for next part! 😉
Loved it!
Sorry for not commenting earlier, phone was acting up so couldn't come online.
Thanks for the PM! 😳
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: BreakingBlue

Lovely update Maithu! Waiting for next part! 😉

Loved it!
Sorry for not commenting earlier, phone was acting up so couldn't come online.
Thanks for the PM! 😳

No pbm dear!
Glad that u liked it!
Thank u!😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hi friends,

Here is the next part of this serie, part 5!
Sorry for the late update!

Recap :
After meeting Arjun and Bhagya, SUKOR are back to hotel room!

Link for Part-4

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Chakor without giving a damn to the size of the couch said "Suraj! You sleep on couch as I will be on bed!"

"Can't you see the size of the couch? Is this torture your punishment you talked about?" saying this, he came up to the left side of bed and sat down.


"Can't you see that the bed is not large?"
"So what? We will adjust!" with a smirk
"There isn't enough pillow!" Chakor said it worriedly when interrupted by her Pati Dev.
"To do a battle with them!" questioning look took over his face.
"Don't you see TV soaps?" putting her right hand palm on her forehead and her inner thought said "Tube-light, he can't even understand!"
"I had only time to control those bandhu" realising what he said, he corrected himself "I mean I had to supervise others work."

Chakor coming to the other side of the bed, explained to Suraj the reason to involve TV Soaps "When I was with Bhagya Di, she used to watch them. Sometimes, I too joined her. In serials when Pati and Patni have to share a bed and they weren't comfortable, they make a wall of pillows to avoid any" all this while she was making herself comfortable sitting on the bed and adjusting here and there , she turned towards Suraj to find him staring at her with full of attention "I think you understood what I mean!"

After a few seconds of reflection, Suraj almost screamed "Ohh, I don't have any idea of reducing my image by getting close to you!" Chakor tried to open her mouth when suddenly he changed his tone to flirting one and continued with a smirk "You naughty girl, always thinking about it!"

"Shut up Suraj! I'm serious!"
"I'm also serious baby!"
"With which rights you are addressing me as Baby?" She took a deep breath while Suraj is amused of her reaction and continued "Look Suraj, my practice session starts tomorrow, I mean in 5 hours. So don't try to get on my nerves! You sleep wherever you want but remember one thing, you will get the biggest punishment of your life if you come near me!".

Finishing her short monologue according to Suraj, she took the blanket, lay down on the bed and went to sleep.

He kept staring at her and said "What does she think of herself, don't forget that you were my Bhandua Biwi, I mean you are still my" hesitation to choose the correct word stopped him "Let it be! I'm still you Dharam Pati Dev!"

Seeing no reactions from other side of the bed as Chakor wasn't facing him, he did "whatever" action with his shoulders and hands, saying "Already slept! Strange, she doesn't fall asleep faster!" all the while laying down on his side of bed making sure of not touching even her dress!

All that time, Chakor was laughing loud under the duvet putting her right hand on her mouth to not let the silence break! After a while she turned towards Suraj, to have a sight of Suraj in deep sleep from the corner of her eyes and muttered "Good night Dharam Pati Dev!"

***

Sun rays enters between the curtains of the window. The atmosphere in the room is calm and smooth when a knock on the door broke the silence. .

Chakor opens her eyes to find out she is not in her place but near Suraj with his left hand on her waist and her left hand holding that hand. Whereas his arm is her pillow with her right hand holding it tightly under her hair.

Slowly she left his hands free to free herself from his hold on her waist when she heard her name come from him.
"Chakor! Let it be na!"
"Pati Dev, I have to go!"
"No you can't!" as a child who don't want to let go off his toys

Chakor with all her force is trying to get free. At some point she felt he has loosen the grip, so she freed herself and got up from bed adjusting all here things and started to get down from bed when she felt her shawl is stuck.

She turned to free it and there she found him holding it.
"Suraj leave it!"
"No way!"
"Do you remember what I said yesterday night?"
"Nope" making a baby face
"Your punishment!"
"It's you who came near me!"
"That doesn't matter! You will have to"
"You will get one too!" cutting her in mid-way
So she started again "Instead of one hour, I will give you 2 hrs of m" his train of thoughts ran at speed of 100 ideas/sec with a large smile which was noticed by Chakor, nevertheless she continued "my lecture!".

Jumping from the bed, he sat up and screamed "Nooo". Opening his eyes, he turned his head in all sides to find out that he is alone in the room, someone is knocking on the door and he was holding a pillow in his hand.

"Thank god, It was a dream! How can I dream about me with Bhandua Bi, no Jagat Maa, no ... Chakor? Nevertheless, it's a dream to forget! By the way where has she gone?" He remarked the time to be 9:30 AM, when he heard another knock on the door. So he got down of the bed and found a note on the side table.

Taking it, he walked up to the door all the while reading the small message left by Chakor :

"Suraj, I'm going for practice and will be back by evening so take care of yourself.
- Chakor"

He said to himself "Madam ji already in practice!" and opened the door to find the responsible for the room service.

The person was here to ask what did he want for lunch and if he can bring his breakfast. Suraj said he didn't need anything and let him go before closing the room door.

The day passed in a jet speed and when he was back to their room around 8:30 PM, he found her already asleep on her side of the bed. So he went out of the room to have his dinner in the service bar (No he didn't drink alcohol) and came back to room watching a movie on his phone with headphones.

***

The next day he didn't have any dream but the day was similar to the day before where she went for practice leaving a note for him :
"Suraj,

We will go to Azaadgunj tomorrow morning.

I have reserved a table for two in the restaurant in front of the hotel at 8:00 PM, so you should be on time.

Have breakfast before leaving the hotel.

Take care! Have a nice day!

- Chakor"

"Why should I oblige her? I will be there only at 8:15 or 8:30 but not at time" was his thought after reading it.

The day passed as he went to meet his friends, outing with them and bought new jackets (of the same colours)...

Before all this, he had his breakfast before leaving his room as the room service person has brought him a breakfast tray as ordered by Chakor.

He was with his friends when his phone rang (7:00 PM) and he thought it must be Chakor who is reminding him about the restaurant. But no, it was from some bank to ask him if he need any loan... He just barked at the person on the phone before cutting it! As his friends knew him well they didn't cared about his reaction, but the thing is he might be expecting his Patni ji's phone call.

At 7:20, he started to feel a pressure rise on him and thought "Why am I feeling like this!... Chakor, hope she is fine!" So he tried to contact Chakor but it was unreachable as her phone is dead (only she knows it). So the growing tension on him made him leave the place and go back to room to find it empty.

As quick as possible he came out of the hotel and waiting for the traffic light to turn on. It's 7:59 when he tried again her number but it was of no use.
"Chakor, I should have been with you. I thought that you will be safe there with all the media people around you and your practice session. I will not leave KN if any thing happened to you as I" seeing the green man traffic light, he put a stop to his train of thoughts and ran up to the restaurant and there he saw Chakor through the glass walls with the menu card on her hands.

The relief he got at that moment was like he got his life back from the devil. He took a deep breath and entered the restaurant.

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Thanks for reading friends hope it's not boring!
Comment and hit the like button if you liked it! Else anything is welcomed!

Link for Part-6

- Maithili


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Posted: 8 years ago
#45
Lovely update. ...enjoyed. ...plz update next part soon...
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Posted: 8 years ago
#46
Awesome update! And a long one too! Ah, my weekend is made! ❤️
Wow I commented early for once! 🤣
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Posted: 8 years ago
#47

Originally posted by: vinlora

Lovely update. ...enjoyed. ...plz update next part soon...

Thank u Lora!
Happy that u liked this part!
Will try to update it soon!
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: _Namita_

Good update Maithili.

Thank u Nami di!😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: BreakingBlue

Awesome update! And a long one too! Ah, my weekend is made! ❤️

Wow I commented early for once! 🤣

Glad that u liked it!
😊
Thank u for ur lovely comment!

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Wow lovely update Maitu! Loved SuKor nok jhoks and ending up hugging each other at morning. Loved how Suraj was tensed for Xhakor. Waiting for the next part. Hope you will update soon.

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