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emerald39

@emerald39

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#721

Originally posted by: -Sarcy-
Anu, I'll be catching up with your PriVeer works and leaving my comments tomorrow as I ended up spending quite some time on the update and now it's quite late. :)

Night, ladies!

Sure Sarce, take your time! 😊

Also, brilliant update! I still love this cheeky side of the ACP, even though things are taking a serious turn.

And he fed her!!!

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emerald39

@emerald39

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#722

Originally posted by: Immaturebookie

G'morning waiting for the update 😆 if you guys want I can go next after @AngelicTomboy

Looking forward to both of your updates! 😳

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Immaturebookie

@Immaturebookie

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Posted: 8 years ago

#723

Originally posted by: AngelicTomboy
I myself need some headstart to start. So amazing ladies/gentlemen, please go ahead 😆

Ooohhh then can I go first😳

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OmkaraKiParvati

@OmkaraKiParvati

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 8 years ago

#724

Go ahead please. I want a headstart

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Sarcy

@Sarcy

Sparkler

+ 8

Posted: 8 years ago

#725

Originally posted by: emerald39

Sure Sarce, take your time! 😊

Also, brilliant update! I still love this cheeky side of the ACP, even though things are taking a serious turn.

And he fed her!!!

Isn't he cuter when cheeky? 😆

Bold: Someone noticed! 😛 Thank you, Anu. 😳 No one commented on that bit so I was wondering if it got lost somewhere along with the cute, timid mouse. 🤣

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Aleena

@cute-aly

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 8 years ago

#726

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emerald39

@emerald39

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#727

Originally posted by: -Sarcy-

Isn't he cuter when cheeky? 😆

Bold: Someone noticed! 😛 Thank you, Anu. 😳 No one commented on that bit so I was wondering if it got lost somewhere along with the cute, timid mouse. 🤣

Infinitely cuterrr. I love ACP for being snarky and cheeky. *heart eyes x10000*

Gahahah. Sarce, I was holding back a squeal because I was reading that in my office. These two are doing every thing a couple in love do, but unintentionally. 😆

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Immaturebookie

@Immaturebookie

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Posted: 8 years ago

#728

"Miss Oberoi now that you have enjoyed a hearty course, don't you think it's only fair if you tell me what I want to know?" Ranveer questioned.

"So you really want to know?"

"Hell yeah"

"Ok I will tell you" Priyanka paused as if trying to recall the happenings of the fateful night.

Ranveer felt the air thicken it was almost in a second that they change from being immature youngsters that kept throwing insults at each other to a mature couple that had all the understanding and power to withhold the torturous demons of the past. Priyanka ran enough, she knew it very well . Every race had its halt so did her race.

"Om bhaiyya and I went out for a drive that night. Actually I forced him too, he kept saying 'Pinku at this rate you would kill some innocent soul with this horrible driving of yours' well he said that for fun just to annoy me" Tears started pouring down her cheeks as she let out a dark chuckle.

"I was driving when O bhaiyya received a phone call..." Priyanka broke down and Ranveer scooted her closer pulling her for a hug.

"It was an unknown number. Svetlana knew very well that Bhai wouldn't answer if he knew it was her.."

*FLASHBACK*

"Hello" Om answered.

"Well, well if it isn't Omkara Singh Oberoi"

"What the hell do you want" Om barked.

"You'll find out till then why don't you enjoy the video attachment I've sent you" She laughed.

Om watched the video of a young girl being strangled to death by the vicious secretary.

"Wanna know where it takes an interesting turn?"

"Now" She screamt as a body came flying right in front of the car.

*END*

"I remember nothing after that just that later our vehicle being surrounded by masked men. we were injected with a drug of some sort the next morning we were in our car that was parked in front of our gate" Priyanka concluded feeling lighter yet uncomfortable. The ACP's eyes too were puffed by the end. Priyanka felt her chest tighten as she gasped for air. Ranveer watched in horror as Priyanka was yet again about to get a panic attack.

"Priyanka, Priyanka look at me" Ranveer spoke caressing her cheeks.

Priyanka looked into his eyes to see not an inch of hatred or anger instead pure concern. She felt herself relax.

"Its going to be alright ok. I'll find away, I promise" Ranveer assured.

"I know" Priyanka replied confidently.

i'm sorry if this was lame guys :(

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OmkaraKiParvati

@OmkaraKiParvati

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 8 years ago

#729

So Svetlana marks an entry into their lives again.. Great going Rishu

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Immaturebookie

@Immaturebookie

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Posted: 8 years ago

#730

Request😃

CAN THE NEXT WRITER INCLUDE ATLEAT A TINY KISSY😳 (I MEAN A FORHEAD KISSY OR SOMETHIMG😉) CAUSE WE DON'T WANT A POUNCING ACP☺️ *Or maybe we do or maybe I would shut up🥺*

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