Maaneet Journey FF-Marriage at First Sightpart thread 3 link pg 1 - Page 25

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Maaneet entered km ... N unknowingly performed all the rituals of traditional grah pravesh of a newly Wed couple...

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Part 18

Next day early morning

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Geet wake up in sleep and saw her sleeping postion.automatically Geet face become light red.

Geet carring maan hair: Maan u r so cute in sleep..omg if anyone see this mark in my wrist.what they thinking.in ur unconscious state u crushing me like pillow.if in our SR what will do with me.

Geet selfthought: Geet in early morning u thought about ur sr.nowday u became very shamless.

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Geet kisses his forehead and went out

Morning 7 clock

A melodious voice of Bhajan song from outhouse ( none other our Geet sing song in front of god idol)

Dadi already wake up in sleep and other wake up in sake of Geet song.

Maan hears geet voice and getup in smiling face.

Everyone come to pooja room and Geet did arati with song

Jai Ambe Gauri, Maiya Jai Shyama Gauri.
Tumako Nishadin Dhyavat, Hari Bramha Shivari.
Om Jai Ambe Gauri

Mang Sindur Virajat, Tiko Mrigamad Ko.
Ujjval Se Dou Naina, Chandravadan Niko.
Om Jai Ambe Gauri

Kanak Saman Kalevar, Raktambar Raje,
Raktpushp Gal Mala, Kanthan Par Saje.
Om Jai Ambe Gauri

and everyone behind her. And Geet turns back with arati plate.

Geet: Sry dadi I disturbed u everyone.

Sam: my beautiful sleep broken because of ur stupid song with taunting tone

Dadi: Sammera shut ur mouth.geet beta ur pooja make this mansion to temple.u not give me arati.

Geet give arati and prasad to dadi

Vicky: GB what Prasad give to dadi.

Choti: Why u want Prasad to ask angel straightly

Vicky: Before few minutes only i heared Gb beautiful voice .and I don't want hear ur ass voice.

Choti: Kya u told I have a ass voice.ur buffalo, ur ass iam not.

Geet: early morning Dont start ur bhajan.choti go to fresh up and I prepare ur breakfast.

Swara: Di my favourite dosa also prepared plzz

Dadi: Why u stain ur self.chandu will prepare breakfast to everyone.

Geet: Nahi dadi I will do.today iam not going to office

Vicky puppy face: GB u not prepare my breakfast.

Geet: Vicky dont do drama.tell me want do u want.

Vicky: I love u GB and good morning.

Geet: Good morning , go and fresh up i will prepare ur break fast.

Everyone go to respective room and Geet went to maan room.

Maan room

Maan hand hit to glass piece and maan saw broken glass pieces in bed and his bare body also some nail scratch

Maan thought: Nail scratch and broken glass pieces in my bed .yesterday I slept in my bed and Sam only stay with my room.its mean I misbehaved with Sam or she advantaged me in my sleeping state with shocking face

Maan : I cheated my mishty with guilty voice and his angry himself

Geet enter in room and saw maan sad face.

Geet selfthought: Maan thinking I seduced him that only he looking sad .first I will clear his misunderstanding now

Geet: Maan

Maan not looking geet face and his angry himself.

Geet mind voice: Even he not look my face.

Geet come and sit next to maan in bed and lift his chin with her index finger.

Geet: I

Maan: Iam sry mishty

Geet confused : Why u asking me sry, maan

Maan: I didnot intentionally mishty and iam sry jaan ,i cheated u ,don't go away from me with guilty voice

Geet thought: iam not understand anything.what he did it why iam going away from him

Geet: What happened tell me clearly.

Maan: I know definitely u angry with me but dont go away from me

Geet: Ha baba iam not go away from u

Maan hold her palm :last night I misbehaved with Sam and really Geet iam not remembered anything with slow hestistate voice

Geet: Kya

Maan: Plz mishty don't go away from me. Iam nothing without u with pleading voice

Geet mind voice: Now I understood He thought that chudail stayed with him yesterday and thought cheated me that only he sad so sweet.now I play with u,my patidev

Maan: Mishty Plz talk to me ur silent killing me.

Geet fake angry face: I hurt maan.i thought u never touch any women rather than me but U break my trust maan and show back to him and in front smiling face

Maan: Plz mishty, give me punishment, but don't say I break ur trust.yesterday iam not in conscious state.

Geet turn back face to maan: Sry maan, i need to go know with hurt face

Maan: Mishty listen to me

Geet went out immediately and outside room laughed so much.

Geet selfthought: Iam sry maan i love to play with u.

Maan: Iam not leave u Sam and in ur sake only my mishty angry with me and head placed in bed with closed eyes.

Sam silently enter maan room and saw maan in sleeping

She don't know maan already wake up

Sam: Maan sleeping

Maan open his eyes shout : Sam

Sam jerked and gulped her saliva: Sry maan yesterday i went my room to sleep.sofa not comfortable to me with once go said and sry I left u alone in night.

Maan relieved and selfthought: It means Sam not with me yesterday.

Maan: today onward u r not sleep in my room and give my laptop and get out my room with bossy tone

Sam give his laptop and went out quickly.

Maan: Sam not stay with me then who's stay with me yesterday and first i need maniofy mishty

Maan open his laptap and see cctv footage. Geet room also have cctv camera because Geet room is maan study room.he set camera in safety purpose in his study room but noone know about it.

Maan see Geet sit in her bed with his photo through camera connected in his laptop

Maan: Sry mishty

Geet kisses his photo and laughing

Maan confused her behaviour: I am thinking, she angry with me but Why she kiss my photo , and I thought she is crying rather than laughing madly.

Maan eyes open widely: Same bangles it means yesterday she only stayed with me.oh madam play with msk.in ur own mouth said to me that iam only stay with u yesterday night .let play GMSK with smirked face.

After some time Geet come with maan breakfast

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Geet fake angry face : Maan ur breakfast.

Maan selfthought: Mishty ur good actor.

Geet: Maan ur breakfast.

Maan: I don't need anything this is my punishment with fake sad face

Geet: Don't behave like child and have ur breakfast and then have ur medicines

Maan: Iam not

Geet mind Voice: He is sturborn and what I do know

Maan: Ok I eat my breakfast but u give me food in ur hand.

Geet mindvoice : Few minutes before only he pleading me but now ordering me

Maan mind voice: I don't want quickly finish our play.I am also love to play with u.

Geet searching spoon in breakfast plate and she don't know maan already stole spoon and placed in under pillow.( MSK changed to TSK thief Singh khurana)

Maan: Iam waiting mishty.

Geet: Oh maan iam searching spoon.i placed in plate but it is not there

Maan: So what u have hand mishty with innocent face

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Maan enjoyed food in his mishty hand and suck her fingers sensuously with his M-shaped lips

Geet: Maan what r doing with slow voice.

Maan: Eating mishty

Geet: I know ur eating but why suck my fingers

Maan: Today food more tasty yaar.

Geet: Dont suck plz something happening in my stomach.

Maan smirked: What happening Geet with husky tone

Geet: Maan don't tease me..

Dadi enter maan room : Geet beta

Geet getup in bed: Ha dadi

Dadi: U go have ur breakfast and then go to ready office beta i help maan

Geet confused face: Ji dadi

Maan: But why Geet go to office.

Dadi: She work in our office

Maan: Ok I am also going to office.

Dadi: Maan beta,Geet is ur secretary or u r geet secretary.with teasing tone

Maan: What question this dadi.

Dadi: Then why u want behind go with her like hutch dog

Maan: Iam not going behind and I am going to my office.

Geet: u not go anywhere MJ.dadi iam also not going office.i will help with him online meeting.

Dadi: But beta Adi told me u need go to site .

Maan: She not go anywhere I will inform to Adi.

Dadi: Really she not go anywhere or u want she not away from u murmuring in maan ear.

Dadi: Geet beta, I have some work with u.maan beta u sleep with smirked face.

Sam call to brij and brij attend her call

Brij: Hi sis how r u.

Sam: Iam not good brij where r u

Brij: Why u upset my sis.

Sam: I upset because of that Geet.everyone praising her and she controlled everyone.

Brij: Who is Geet and if she is very beautiful with eager voice

Sam: Ha she is very beautiful with irritating tone

Brij: My sis told other woman is beautiful so she really beautiful.i want see her.

Sam: Brij I need ur help when will u come back even bua not in mansion and she not pick my call.

Brij: Cool sis I will back next week.later we will see that beauty with lusty thought.

Sam: Come soon everyone irritating me

Brij: Bye sis and cut the call

Brij: Geet nice name.i will come to see u sweetheart with lusty thinking.

Maan room

Maan: Iam boring, mishty not allow me office and even outside of my room.how many hours I slept .

Geet: U need rest then only u completely alright.

Maan smirked: Geet today also Sam sleep in my room

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Geet mouth open wided: So u want that chudail sleep with u

Maan: not like that, last night iam in good sleep so I thought today also

Geet: It means u want samera sleep next with u and then u will sleep become good

Maan: I mean she is very soft hand that iam not wake up in sleep.

Geet: How do u know she have soft hand with angry voice

Maan: Last night she slept with me and she touched ,scratched my bare chest.

Geet shout : Last night I only slept with u with flowing told and realised bit her lower lips with closed eyes.

Maan: Now cheater caught

Geet: U already know that.

Maan : I thought I cheated u but u play with my feelings.don't talk to me

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Geet cupped his little baby angry face: Chella kutty, ammu kutty, buji kutty, thanga kutty iam sry.i have right to play with u then who will I play.

Maan: Iam not kid so don't put ice in my head and don't call me in nicknames

Geet: U r my kid and so u r my kittu

Maan: Why u give me lot of funny Nicknames.

Geet: I will call u any names I have a right and I am only play with u ..

Maan: Iam ur kittu and ur my cutie, why u wear full handed saree today

Geet: In ur sake only I wore full handed saree.yesterday u did with me so much

Maan innocent face: What i did with u

Geet show her wrist marks: First u touch my hand and ur tight grip my bangles broken.my bangles r broken

Maan: I will buy diamond bangles it just glass bangles mishty

Geet: u know maan why married women mostly wears glass bangles

Maan : I don't know

Geet: because that bangles is good sign of married women and bangles sound makes her husband crazy about his wife with blushing face.( sry my own thought)

Maan: so u want me crazy about u but when we met I lost myself to u and kiss her wrist and then what I did with hushky voice

Geet: Then ur hand move to my waist.

Maan hand slowly placed to her bare waist inside of saree : Like that

Geet: Ha and then u squeezed my waist with slow voice

Maan squeezing her waist and then misty

Geet with slow moaning voice and his hand make her magical dream: Then u hand move to my bre stop with blushing face maan moaning

Maan: And then my hand move to ur with mischievous smile and geet come to real world

geet: Remove ur hand to my waist.

Maan: Why u stopped tell me

Geet: Iam not tell u with blushing face and hug him

Maan smirked: So I did something with u then only u not told me with husky tone.

Geet: If someone see I hugging u what are they thinking.

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Maan: MSK affairs with his secretary their thought.

Geet: Maan

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Part 19

Little leap week passed maan almost alright and his bandage removed and Geet pampered maan so much.she take care of him..both are romancing, teasing, little fight without anyone knowledge.other side dadi gang planned their plan not succeed fully. Even though everyone confirmed maaneet love each other.

Today Sunday, every one in km ,Hall

Everyone settled in hall.one sofa Geet, dadi and choti.next one pinky, swara and Sam other one maan, Vicky, Adi .

Vicky: Everyone in mansion lets play any game.

Pinky: Which game we play.

Maan: U play people iam not interested

Choti: Jiju it is more fun u also play with us

Geet : Choti, leave him he is 30's so that only he not interested in fun

Everyone giggled and maan glare to Geet.

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Maan: Miss Geet I look like 30 's for u but every girls drooling me openly and run behind me with pride tone

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Geet eyes anger : Acha every girls drooling u.

Dadi: now lets play game iam judge of this game.everyone pick up one shit one by one.everyone do what written in ur shit otherwise that person become loser.

First who pickup shit ,my little princess Shona

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Swara pick up shit: poem

Swara: i told two poem I dedicated to my special two person ,first poem for my maan bhai no my father and next poem dedicated to my gudiya di.

"Every morning as I wake up I think of you,

As the hero that came into my life,

More and more you appeared to me when I was in strife,

Afraid I could not live without you in my life."

Maan come to hugs swara and kiss her forehead and said ur bhai never go away from u.

Swara: thanks bhai and maan settled in place

Swara : next poem dedicated to my gudiya di

"You came as a ray of light

Made my life cheerful and bright

Showering your affection over me

So that my face is full of glee"

Geet side hug to swara and everyone clapped for emotional poems

Next turn to sam

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Sam pickup shit: No I can't do it

Vicky: What in this shit why u cannot do it sam with teasing tone

Sam: Oh I do to monkey antics.

Swara murmuring dadi : Correct shit goes to Sam.

Dadi: Sammera u will be disqualified.

Sam mind voice: I will impresses dadi and maan in sake of I do everything.

Sam : Ok I will do.

Sam standing monkey pose and did both her hand in to her armpit and did monkey antics.

Everyone laughed and sam embrassed. Next adi turn and story teller

Adi: I will tell u story all u but everyone reply my question.

Everyone nods accepted Adi condition

Adi: In Beautiful place, one long big tree.in trees three bird lived.first bird name is anymore, second bird name is some more and third bird name is once more.one time hunter shot first and second bird and then which bird name alive.

Everyone : Once more.

Adi : U all r interested in my story.I tell u once again beautiful place one long trees

Everyone terror look to Adi and pinky said to maan:: Jiju i don't want marry ur brother

Maan: As wish u saaliji with teasing look to adi

Adi smirked: Maan why u calling pinky to saali .she is ur Bhabhi maan.if she marry to me then she will become ur Bhabhi maan.

Maan mind voice: Adi iam not leave u uknow very well she is my wife sister.i deal with u later.

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Vicky:ha bhai Why u calling pb to saali with teasing tone

Maan: Pinky, if u have problem I called saali with u.

Pinky: No jiju u call me saali only.i liked the way u call me.

Pinky mind voice: I wish same jiju.u will marry my Geet then automatically I am ur saali.

Vicky turn: I will dance with anyone.

Swara: Choti dance with u

Vicky: Iam not dance with her.i will chose my beautiful partner.

Choti: In the world even ur the lost man iam not dance with u.

Vicky: Same too u

Vicky goes kneel down in front of Geet and hold her hand: Will u dance with me.

Maan fuming and Geet smirked to maan

Geet nod her head and Vicky kiss her palm

Vicky and Geet dance in romantic song of Ashiqui 2- tum hi ho

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maan face red because Vicky kiss and romantic song then Vicky hand in geet waist and dance moves

Maan want shout to stop Unfortunately song finished.everyone clapped their performance.maan angry glare to Vicky.Vicky gulped his saliva .

Vicky murmur to dadi: Dadi plz save me with ur possessive grandson

Dadi: Maan ur turn

Maan pressed Vicky tightly and eyes gestured I will give u good lesson later.

Maan turn: Romance purposal to anyone.

Vicky:laughed maan bhai purposal to girl, it become eighth wonder

Geet: Till now ur bhai not propose anyone with mischievous smile.

Swara: Ha di maan bhai is perfect bachelor and in college time every girl proposed and even his lady lectures also proposed him but he not accepted anyone proposal.

Geet look maan lovingly and Sam told: Because he is my finance

Maan glared to sam and ofcourse everyone angry glare to sam

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Geet lovely look to angry look: Now MJ ur turn with grinned teeth.

Maan smirked face , step to Geet.everyone thought maan propose to Geet and Geet scared his come to her.

Maan try to touch Geet palm but his hand hold dadi hand and kneel down in front of dadi.

Geet mind voice: Dust dhanav.

Maan hold dadi Hand and his eyes starring to Geet.

"Ur my special girl,

U r the first person

I wish to see when I wake up and the last sleep

I want to talk to before I fall asleep

You are the reason for my smile every morning and the reason for a pleasant sleep every night

This is why I consider you to be my heart beat.

I love u mishty"

Maaneet starring each other and maan hand in dadi hand.

Dadi clear her throat: Who is mishty maan with teasing tone.

Maan: Oh ha obviously ur my mishty, my sweet dadi.

Choti: Wow jiju u proposed lovely.

Vicky: Adi bhai pinch me.i saw msk or any teenage lover.

Adi : Famous laugh and u don't know him.he is more romantic person u never imagine in ur dream also.

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Maan get up and winked to Geet and settled down inhis sit.

Geet turn: Song

Geet starring maan and melodious voice

Onnappola Oruthana
naan paarthathe illa
o osarampaathu
vaanam kooda
kurugume mella

( iam not see anyone like u and sky also shrink in front of ur height)

saamipoola vanthavane
kekummunne thanthavane
naan vanagum nallavane
nalla ullam koondavane
yen ottumotham
jenmathukkum saami neethane ( u come like god , before not ask anything u give me everything, u r good heart , in all my lives ur only my god )

unna ethirpaathu thaan
ennithayam vazhuthathoo
thannai ariyaamale
unnai athu sernthathoo

( In my heart live for only waiting for u, without my knowledge my heart sent with u)

illai ini eethum endru
vaadi nindra poothile
muthumani theril ennai
eetri vantha vallale

( i sad thought l lost everything that time u come and pickup me in pearls chariot)

oru vaarthaiyil
ennai uravaakinai
un uravenpathu
yuga yugangalai
kadanthathu thaane

( in ur one word make me ur relation.in ur relation it becomes more than of epoch

Onnappola Oruthana
naan paarthathe illa
o osarampaathu
vaanam kooda
kurugume mella (2)

(iam not see anyone like u and sky also shrink in front of ur height)

This song from Tamil movie my favourite song - singer Shreya ghoshal.translation any wrong sry.

Dadi look at Geet emotional mind thought: She love maan so much.maan lucky got her.

Dadi: Romba nalla paduna da.( u sung very well beta)

Geet: Dadi u know tamil

Dadi: Ha beta I know Tamil very well.

Swara: Di I learned Tamil from dadi

Pinky: Shona unagukum Tamil mozhi theriyumaa.( shona u also know tamil language)

Adi: Pinky u also speak in Tamil.

Pinky: Obviously I know Tamil because my mother tongue is Tamil and my sisters is Tamil.

Sam: But pinky ur orphan how ur mother language become Tamil.

Pinky hurt Sam words and eyes moist , everyone angry raised to Sam and feel bad for pinky.

Choti anger raised and shout to Sam but Geet hold her hand and gestured stop.

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Maan shout: Sammeria u dont know any manners and u talk to pinky this way

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Sam: But I said true only.

Maan: Just shut ur mouth, she is not.

Sam stamped her foot and went out.

Maan: Pinky come

Pinky come in front of maan with moist eyes.

Maan: U also behave Sam said is right, u also thinking we have noone to u.

Pinky: No jiju.

Maan: Then why u not reply Sam taunting with u.why u silent.

Pinky: Iam sry jiju and iam afraid

Maan: Ur msk saali.ur not afraid anyone , u understand.

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Pinky nods her head and side hug to maan

Maan: Pinky first u maniofy ur sisters

Geet and choti glare to pinky

Pinky scared and maan said iam with u don't worry.

Maan: Why u both glare my saali

Geet: We not glare with ur saali, we angry with our sister pinky .

Pinky: Sry Geet and choti.iam sry with puppy face.

Choti: Di we r sister dont forgot once again.

Geet phone ringed and look I'd angry become to smiling face: Papa calling.

Pinky: Papa phone I will talk him first with excited voice

Everyone happy saw pinky come back to cheer mood .

Geet give phone to pinky: Talk ur papa.

Pinky: Papa how r u and maa.i miss u so much

Papa: I miss u princess..why u voice not good what happened

Pinky: Nothing papa where is maa.

Papa: ur maa is not near me, don't lie ur paa tell me what happened

Pinky: oh papa and choti snatched phone

Choti: I tell u papa ( narrated sam taunted to pinky)

Papa: princess give phone to ur di

Papa: pinky, ur my daughter if anyone said ur orphan or taunting u, ur papa ka brave girl right.

Pinky: sry papa ,iam not repeat once again

Papa: give phone to geet

Pinky give phone to geet: ha papa when will u return back to Chennai.

Papa: after 2 days we will back to Chennai.so I already told ur bhai arrange choti flight ticket to Chennai in after three days

Geet: I will tell to choti.bye papa

Papa: take care beta.

Everyone enjoying in hall and geet come back to hall.

Geet: choti, maa and papa come back after two days and papa booked ur flight ticket after three day to Chennai.

Choti face fell down: I will go back to Chennai.

Maan: choti ur study important ,u need go to Chennai. After exam u come back to delhi.

Choti nods her head:tika jiju

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No one noticed other one souls also hurts because his choti away from him yeh none other our Vicky

Night time everyone enter go to respective room

Pammi return back to mansion and enter in her room and saw some one passed her room and also thinking that face

Pammi come out the room and see one girl stepdown to downstairs

Pammi: whose is she.and girl turn now pammi saw her face.

Pammi shocked saw her face and stunned in that place

Pammi gulped her saliva with horror face shout: booth booth...

Precap: choti faint , swasan flashback story and sam,brij and pammi planning to something

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