Maaneet Journey FF-Marriage at First Sightpart thread 3 link pg 1 - Page 35

Originally posted by: Drashtilove

Lovely updates..geet was faking anger and maan got to know it sam is too much now that brij will come..loved their game monkey dance of sam ha ha..maan proposed lovely thnx 4 pm

double update get woke up to a beautiful sight of her maan in her arms kissing she went she sang a beautiful bhajan all like it geet play a pran wth maan making him thoink ghe misbeahve with sam maan comes to know and decided to play back he was arousing her dadi wanted geett o go to office even maan wanted to go as his mishty was going maneet lost in their world wheil sameera told brij abt geet who is lusting after her all were playing game maaneet cute fight geet makingh maan jealous maan propse to dadi looking at geet while geet sang song for maan dadi is so happy to have a bahu like geet who loves her grandson so much sam hurts pinky while all console her choti hads to go back vicky sad pammi back and gets scared seeing a ghost

Sorry for late reply. Went to native place .awesome updates waiting for next updates

Fabulous updates. Loved Maaneet's scenes. Sam calls her brother Brij to help her in getting Maan. Beautifully written. Loved it. Waiting for next.

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Part 20

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Pammi shout : Booth booth

Dadi,Vicky,swara, Sam come pammi room

Sam: Bua u came

Dadi: Pammi what happened why u shouting booth booth

Swara murmuring Vicky ear: Bhai I think mom saw Sam face closely that only she shout booth ( mahika idea) both giggled

Pammi scared face: Maaji I saw her with stammering voice.

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Dadi understand her scared and told everyone go to ur room and pammi come my room now.

Dadi room

Pammi: Maaji i saw her and she is booth.

Dadi: She is not booth

Pammi: I saw her face look like anju.

Dadi: Ha she look like anju but she is geet not booth

Pammi: Really she is not booth

Dadi: Ha once again u shout or anyone know about anju specially maan , iam not leave u with warning tone

Pammi nods her head and go to her room.

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Next morning

Maan wake up in sleep and watch camera photoage to geet room through his laptop

Maan: Where is mishty ,she not in her room

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Maan dailed geet number and obviously see camera photoage also.

Geet come out bathroom with wrapped towel

Maan eyes wided see her in state and towel covered only above her knees ,bare shoulder, wet hair , milky legs,water drop in cherry lips and sparkles eyes.

Geet attended maan call: Good morning maan

Maan:

Geet:maan u hear my voice

Maan: Ha ...mish..ty with stammering voice

Geet: Why u stammering maan

Maan: Nothing

Geet: Today u come to office

Maan: yes

Geet: What happened why u talking in one word answer.

Maan: Oh

Geet: I don't know what happened to u, I need dress change so bye

Maan:kya u change dress in ur room no

Geet not hear maan voice and already she cut maan call

Geet hand remove her towel and maan closed his eyes tightly.

Maan mind: Maan why u closed ur eyes and open ur eyes ,see ur pretty wife

Maan heart: No maan this is wrong , u r good boy dont do it.

Maan mind: Maan she is ur wife ,u have full right to see her

Maan heart: Ha maan she is ur wife but in her heart ur in lord place not devil place

Maan mind: Maan dont hear his voice and think about her wet hair, milky legs.think maan u never got this chance once again.

Maan: Ha ur right with closed eyes.

Geet: Iam always right maan

Maan open his eyes and see his mishty infront of him with fully dressed

Maan: Mishty why u changed ur dress soon and went bathroom to fresh up with cute angry face

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Geet: suddenly What happened to him... With confused face

Dadi: Maan beta u going office today so dont strain ur arm

Geet: Dadi I will take care of him

Dadi: I know beta u will take care of maan

Maan: Noone in mansion

Dadi: Adi and pinky already went to office.shona and choti in her room both are planning for roaming Delhi today.obviously our lazy Vicky is sleeping

Maan: Hmm ok both r going alone it is not safe so Shona and choti go with Vicky for their shopping

Geet: Iam going office, bye dadi

Dadi:geet beta u go with maan car.

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Maan: Miss Geet not come with her boss car ,dadi with teasing tone

Geet: Ha dadi iam not going with my boss car so iam going in taxi

Dadi mind voice: Both are Dramabazzz

Dadi: Geet beta u go with maan car not taxi .

Sam: I come with u ,maan

Maan: Sam KC not tourist place, u come anytime with grinned teeth.

Sam: I want work with u and I will learn more thing from u and geet. geet u teach me right with sugar coated voice

Geet: Ha I will teach u good lesson with murmuring voice

Maan: Dadiii

Dadi: Maan beta allow Sam in our office.she do anything mistake then u will throw out her anytime but give her one chance

Maan irritating face: Ok but u come with another car not my car.

Sam: Ok maan so geet also not come with u.

Maan: Geet also not come with me and she come with in ur car with angry face

Sam: Kya

Geet: No MJ iam not come with Sam ,bye dadi maa

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Maan car enter in kc and everyone staff alert in their position .

Maan entry in office like lion enter in den and his walking style like noone stand infront of me and both dazzing eyes covered in goggles and his 8 pack body show in tight shirt.

Every girl faint in his one look and his body structure omg...

Maan enter in his cabin and waiting for his mishty arrival

After 15 minutes geet enter maan cabin

Geet: Good morning sir

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Maan: Ms geet this time u come to office.ur 15 minutes late

Geet: Sry sir, my hubby not leave me

Maan: What u already married with shocked face

Geet: Yes sir, my darling not leave me and iam also not stay away from my handsome ,charming hubby with blushed face

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Maan: Kya ur hubby more handsome than me with irritating face.

Geet: Obviously my darling is the best in the world.

Maan: Noone defeat MSK charming with pride voice

Geet: Ur wrong sir,my maan is charming, my prince charming

Maan: I hate ur hubby

Geet: But i love my hubby

Maan hug geet back and now say iam best not ur hubby

Geet turn back hug him: No my hubby is best

Maan: Mishty with puppy love

Geet: I love u MSK

Maan: I love u too GMSK

Maan kiss her cheek,nape and geet close her eyes.

Geet: Maan

Maan: Ha mishty

Geet removes his hug: Maan this is office, ur my boss and iam ur employee

Maan: Iam married but I live in bramachari with puppy face

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Geet pinch his cheeks and then kiss his left cheek and maan show his right cheek and she try kiss his right cheek but maan turn his face.both lips meet.only peck not kiss

Geet: Maan u cheating me

Maan: We are married but till now u not give me single french kiss.

Geet blushed : I am only urs maan but this not our time.

Maan: Iam waiting with irriating face

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Swara , choti and Vicky come to hall.

Chandu roaming in hall with tensed face.

Vicky: Chandu bhai why u tensed

Chandu: I am thinking about maan sir health.

Swara: When u studied mbbs bhai with teasing tone

Chandu: I am not doctor like u but iam cook so iam think about maan sir food.

Choti: So u want sent to mj food to kc , it is simple matter why u tensed, bhai

Chandu: Choti baby , geet baby not pickup my phone.if I send food to kc or some other place.if maan sir went any site place

Vicky: Then call maan bhai ask him, where is he

Chandu: No Vicky baba, iam not tolerate maan sir angry

Choti: sent message to jiju.

Chandu: Ok choti baby

Vicky: Girls we already late lets go for ur boring shopping

Chandu: How will I find out maan sir see my message

Vicky: Call maan bhai and tell him, see my message and reply soon with teasing tone

Swara and choti giggled & went out with Vicky.

Chandu mind voice: Vicky is right ,first I sent message and then call maan sir

Message: Maan sir, If i send ur food to kc or some other place.

KC

Maan see Chandu message and tried to reply his message

Chandu call and maan pickup the phone

Chandu: Maan sir see my message and reply soon, iam waiting for ur message and cut the call

Maan angry face: Chandu

Mall

Swara and choti enjoying her shopping and Vicky irritating both girls behaviour.

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Swara talk someone and choti come to swara side.

Swara: Aunty she is my friend choti

Choti see her face and her face change to shocked expression.

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Choti faint in ground and swara tapped choti cheeks but no response.

Lady: Swara beta suddenly what happened to her , why she faint with worried face.

Choti: I don't know aunty

Vicky: Shona what happened to choti, why she sleep in ground

Swara: Bhai, she faint, lift her

Vicky pickup choti in his arms and move to car

Swara: Aunty I call u later.

Lady: If she is alright then call me with worried face

Swara: Ok aunty..went out

Vicky: Shona we need go to hospital with worried tone

Swara: No bhai, I already called Shilpa aunty , she come km

Vicky: Ok, call Gb and maan bhai

Swara call geet phone and geet attend her call

Geet: Ha Shona tell me dear and maan standing geet back

Swara: Di , come km soon

Geet: What happened Shona why u tensed.

Swara: Oh choti faint in mall.plz come soon iam scared di

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Geet: kya Iam coming , u stay with her with worried voice and cut the call

Geet: Choti faint in mall, we need go km soon with worried tone

Maan: suddenly what happened to her

Geet: I don't know maan plz lets go with crying face

Maan: Nothing happened to our choti , stop ur crying mishty

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Maaneet, Adi and pinky come km and everyone rushed choti room

Dadi, swara and Vicky waiting outside of choti's room with worried face.

Geet: Shona she alright na with moist eyes.

Swara: I don't know di, aunty check choti

Everyone waiting for doctor and doctor come out

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Geet: Dr she is alright

Sheela: Nothing to worry but she take any medication about any type of phobia

Geet: claustrophobia treatment doctor.but 5 yrs back we stopped her medication and then she not feared anything.

Shilpa: I think she saw related past person or anything remind her past incident that only she faint nothing else.if she behave strangely or rudely and give this medicine.

Geet: Ok doctor thank u

Shilpa: Maaji iam leaving now if any urgent, call me and shona baby u also doctor but u scared in little thing

Swara: but she is my friend aunty.iam not tolerate anything happened her.

Dadi: Ok shilpa beta.

Choti sleeping in her bed and geet carring her hair

Choti murmuring in sleep: Iam not stay in this place plz bhai save me and iam scared,plz leave me, I want see my bhai

Choti wakeup in sleep shout: Bhai ...

Everyone worried about choti state and geet tears flowing in her eyes.

Choti: Iam not stay in this place and bhai where r u continuously shout

Geet slap choti cheek and choti come conscious. no one understand anything why choti shout and why geet slap choti.

Choti: Angel hug geet tightly with crying vigrously

Geet: Nothing my bachaa iam with u na and stop ur crying dear.

Dadi signaled everyone go out except choti and geet in her room

Choti placed her head in geet lap and geet caring her hairs

Choti: I want go back Chennai.i feel safe in maa and papa place only.plz arrange my flight ticket di with feared face

Geet: Iam with u , noone sepearted my choti with me.

Choti hug geet waist protectively and slept in her lap , geet placed choti head in pillow and cover blanket and kiss her forehead and went out.

Everyone waiting outside

Vicky: Gb what happened choti ,why she behave strangely and what is claustrophobia with pain voice.

Swara: bhai claustrophobia means fear of confinement.

Maan: pari I am not understand.

Swara; if any person stay enclosed place or any other dark room without window.that feared person affected by claustrophobia. In choti childhood something happened that only she affected claustrophobia.

Maan: geet why she have panic attack

Geet: I will tell u later maan and first I need talk with shona and swara come to my room

Geet room

Geet: what happened in mall and tell me clearly.

Swara: I introduced sansky mom to choti suddenly she faint

Geet: whose sansky

Swara: I already told u iam in love with sansky and he break up with me.

Geet: but u not told clearly and even iam not see his photos and I don't know his full name.

Swara: his name is sanskar maheswari and show sanskar photo to geet

Geet shocked mindvoice: it means sanskar bhai lady love none other shona and choti saw annapurana aunty ( sanskar mom) in mall that only she faint. Now What I will do

Swara: sanskar ,maan bhai,adi bhai and ranjith studied same college and best friend. i fallen love with sanskar but first he not accept my love because of maan bhai friendship.

Flashback start

Swara: sanskar why u lie to me , I know u also love me then why u not accept ur love.

Sanskar: iam not love u with fake angry face

Swara: this is ur last warning if u not accept ur love then u not see me alive.

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Sanskar: what u said with angry face.

Swara: why u angry sanskar maheswari and if I alive or die what ur problem

Sanskar shout:I have problem because I love u and I cannot live without u.

Finally my stupid friend proposed his love to my pari

Swasan : maan /bhai

Maan , adi and Vicky standing infront of them.

Vicky: shona finally sanskar bhai proposed u with teasing tone.

Adi: bhai nahi jijaji

Vicky: sry sanskar jijaji

Swara hide behind sanskar back and sanskar in tensed face.

Maan: pari why u hide behind sanskar and come to me.

Swara come maan side and maan side hug to swara.

Sanskar: plz maan don't break our friendship and I don't know when I fallen love with swara , after I realized my love and I avoided her completely.in frustration I told her ,I need ur friendship rather than my love.

Maan: I give right nickname to u stupid. Why I break our friendship and iam also happy that my pari got best life partner in her life.

Swara: thanks bhai

Maan kiss swara forehead: ok I think u both need privacy with smirked face

Adi: ha maan I don't want see my sister beat my dear friend opps jijaji with teasing tone

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Vicky come sanskar side: if u alive then call me which hospital u admitted with teasing face

Maan: take ur time pari winked to sanskar. Everyone left out

Sanskar:maan don't leave me alone and iam also come with u guys.

Swara her hand in her waist : Mr Maheswari iam waiting

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Sanskar pull her and swara fallen his chest : I love u shona

Swara: I love u sansky

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Both family accept swasan love because both family rich and good names in society but one phone call changed their destiny

Swara : hello who is this

Lady: iam also like u and sanskar betrayed me .now iam pregnant of his child.

Swara: what rubbish talk about my sanskar.

Lady: I know u not trust my words but he betrayed many women. u trust that sanskar then go xyz hostel and room 205. U will find out real face of sanskar.

Swara: I am going that hostel because I will prove u my sanskar not cheat me

Lady: first go and then u also break down like me and cut the call.

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Swara come hotel and knock - room 205 and one girl open the door .girl wore only bathrope.swara enter the room and see sanskar sleep in bed with bare chest.

Swara: sanskar with moist eyes painful voice

Sanskar wake up and look at swara

Sanskar get up in bed: swara what r doing here with irritate face.

Swara: iam one asking this question to u and why sanskar

Sanskar: Yeh I affairs with many girls with angry face

Swara : U r telling lie right

Sanskar: U seeing in ur own eyes ,everything is truth and everyone know we are engage soon don't do any drama in this place

Swara: what engagement u talk about and u break my trust sanskar and run out the place with crying face

Swara told everything to maan and maan went to sanskar place with angry face

Flash backend

Swara: u know di even he insulted my maan bhai and break up our relation then maan bhai and sanskar become enemies in professional field with crying face

Swara hug geet and geet carrying her back

Geet: shona now also u think he betrayed u

Swara: no di first iam also angry with him but I know he love me so much .after I asked him many time but he not opened up.i don't know why he behaved me and why he insulted my maan bhai.

Geet: ok shona , u go to ur room.

Geet mind thought: sanskar bhai never betrayed anyone specially his shona . I know he love her so much. Whenever he talked to me that he said only about his khadoos friend and his shona . I need talk to bhai about choti and shona matter

NEXT PART 21

Precap: brij see sanskar and geet together, sanskar side flashback and three devil plan and brij informed maan or pammi about sanskar and geet together.

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Superb yaar.. oh no.. sanskaar didnt cheat swara.. but y he did that?? Geet should find out truth.. ab yeh kya naya raaz hai.. y choti fainted seeing sanskys mom?? Superb yaar.. cont soon..

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