New FF: Part 1 - Flashback pg 1 UPDATED

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Hey Guys,

So for a few days,I have been thinking of writing another FF, but instead of 1,I have come up w/ three very different stories && couldnt decide on one so I thought maybe u guys could help me out!Below I have a couple choices,Pick the story u would like me to continue best in a reply && the one w/ the most replies,Ill continue!So here we go....

Choice #2:

A Fan Fic Of Dill Mill Gayye,after 3 years.....

Armaan & Ridz have separated due to misunderstanding btw each other. Rahul & Anji have separated the 2 for theirown selfish reasons,But....

Armaan & Ridz start getting closer & remember the old times together....

Okay so choice 2 wins!Here's a preview of Part 1...

Part 1:

Riddhima woke up suddenly in the middle of a nightmare as she always did.&& As usual,it was his memories that awoke her,his.After all these years,she stiil could not forget him,his smile,his eyes,his face,and his touch.She had tried so hard to forget him but why couldnt she?Her mind flashed back to three years before, when she used to work in Sanjeevani in Bombay,those were the fun days,the way their journey had started out,Her,Anjali Di,Atul,Sapna, and Armaan. She remebered the first meeting at the BB Court where Armaan was playing basketball w/ kids && then she had challenged him,how he had come late on the first day && played around w/ her by putting sauce on his face faking an injury...

Then how they were assigned to work together && the bet which she had won,how they always used to fight...

&& Then the time that Armaan had asked her out on a date but she had sent all his GF's there,&& then the tim that she fell for him,the most beautiful moments of her life,the Dandiya dance,the meeting at the BB Court,the dance at Lonavla,the big hug hed given her when she thought Di was adopted,the time at the roof when Armaan was hurt...

Remebering all the past meories,Ridz had tears in her eyes....

R:Main Use Pyaar karti thi!Par phir kyun usne mere saath aisa kiya?Kyun?!

She flashed back to that night when Rahul had told her Armaan's reality:

Ra:Riddhima,Armaan tumse pyaar nahi karta!Woh toh sirf tumme histimaaal (use) kar raha hai tumse shaadi karke woh chahta hai ki Sanjeevan uske naam ho jaye.Sach toh yeh hai ki woh Maya jo pehle hospital mein sucide karke aayi this na?Armaan usi se Pyaar karta hai aur woh pregnant hai!

Riddhima had been shocked,was this it?After Papa (Shashank) had died Sanjeevani was in in her's and Padma Ma's name.Had he only loved her wealth all along?

Riddhima had been disgusted w/ him && left Bombay and Sanjeevani in the care of Anjali & Padma Ma. Now she lived in Lonavla taking care of the Sanjeevani Orphanage.

Present:

Ridz wipes her tears && then the phone rings:

Bringg!Bringg!

Ridz picks it up & answers:

R:Hello?

Voice:Hello?!Riddhima beta?Beta jaldi bombay aa jaao!Yahaan Sanjeevani mein tumhari zaroorat hai!

R:Kya?Ma maine aapko kaha tha ki main ab wahaan aane nahi wali!Aap toh sab janthi hain!

Pad:Haan beta par Anjali ab panch (five) mahinon (Months) ke liye Medical camp mein jaa rahi hai!Aur phir Sanjeevani ko kaun sambale ga?

R:Ohh..Aisa hai toh mein panch mahinon ke liye aa jaati hoon...

Next Part:

Armaan & Ridz encounter after 3 years..

Armaan & Ridz have to work on a case together...

How was Part 1?Plz tell mee!&& Dont forget to comment!

I will continue the next part if u liked this one,&& if u dont then I wont.

Thanxx!!

Love,

Jasnoor

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Posted: 18 years ago
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i liked both but i'll choose d 2nd choice...
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Posted: 18 years ago
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afifa tum yaha bhi lolzzzzzzzz
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plz plz plz second one n start soon 😃
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Posted: 18 years ago
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2nd one. please start as soon as possible.
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Posted: 18 years ago
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hey
i'll choose the 2nd one
😊 swansea 😊

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