RaIna FF~An Unarranged Marriage(chap11 pg40 updated) - Page 16

Originally posted by: Amrtina

Awesome update

😳

Originally posted by: ananyachaudhary

loved the update
very awesome
loved to read about raina
loved how they care about each other
hope naina helps raghav to see real face of mehras

thanks a lot ananya...love u 😆

Originally posted by: Keepdreaming

lovely update
sanjana hate her..what doescshe think if herself...
good that naina didn't keep mum
as per naina's wish dadi agreed for two reception...

thank u dear...by the way u r also a good writer...I have read os...write more 😃

Originally posted by: braveheartdoc

Sorry for being late...but I'll post my comments very soon...I hope you don't mind...

it is completely OK...anytime u can... 😊

Originally posted by: bhanu_rekhag

Amazing part

Naina is way too good for my liking... but no probs until she is not mahan n sacrificing lamb...

Buy my doubt is whether veer n sanju are acting or really married

May b raghav for the first time may go against his family for naina

thank uuu dear...and ur doubt will be clear soon😉

Originally posted by: simi91

Beautiful update

Good naina standup for herself show sanjana what she really missing

Naina lucky she got life partner who support her & be by side

Love how the story progress

Pls do cont soon

Thanks sweety

thanks a lot...I m glad u liked it 😳

Originally posted by: braveheartdoc

It was really good...I liked how Naina gave back to Sanju...and didn't say anything to dadi...she is really a mature girl...
Then the reception for both the couples. ..good idea...but I really think Veer and Sanju aren't married...
Also the gown given to Naina. ..I'm sure this would be some kinda plan to humiliate her in the reception. .I just guessed..

Keep writing. ..I like to read your updates. ..Thank you dear...

thanks a lot 4 commenting...I m happy that u liked the update 😃

Originally posted by: lamia1210

thnx a lot friend...I always look forward to your comments...it is such a pleasure😊

hi guys today I am presenting u the 6th chapter of my ff...this chapter is full of RaIna...I hope u will like it...

Chapter 6

naina is sitting in front of the mirror getting ready for the reception...she is wearing the purple sari her mother gifted her.

raghav comes in the room in his golden sherwani...he becomes mesmerized with naina's beauty and keeps staring at her..

raghav is brought back to reality by naina's words...

"mujhe na bahut dar lag raha hai raghav...agar sudha aur pam chachi bura mann gaye toh?"

"kuch nahi hoga...mai unhe sambhal lunga...waise..."raghav hesitates for a moment...

"waise kya?"

"waise tum gown mein isse jyada sundar nahi lagti..."

naina's cheeks turns red for a moment...raghav also feeling embarrassed after making the statement..

"woh mai bhul hi gaya mujhe tumhe kuch dena tha..."raghav changes the topic..

"kya?"

raghav goes to the closet and brings a box out of it...

"yeh kya hai?"naina asks him...

"tumhare liye hai...khol ke dekho..."

naina opens the box and sees a beautiful necklace in it..

"wow...yeh mere liye hai?"naina is still confused...

"ha wo iske piche ek bahut lambi kahani hai..."raghav says...

"toh batao na...mujhe koi jaldi nahi hai..."naina tells him smiling...

raghav becomes happy...first time in this house someone wants to listen to him eagerly..

"tumhe bata hai naina...bachpan me mai bahut ziddi hua karta tha...agar mere didi ko kuch milti thi toh mujhe bhi woh chiz chahiye hi chahiye thi...ek baar na.."raghav pauses for moment with a smile...

"ek baar kya hua?"naina asks..

"mere mausi ne didi ko ek necklace gift kiya...bas mai bhi zid karne laga mujhe bhi ek necklace chahiye..."raghav stops as naina starts laughing..

"sorry...tum continue karo..."naina manages to say in between laughter...

"phir maa ne mujhe ek aisa necklace kharid ke diya aur unhone kaha, beta yeh apni biwi ko mere taraf se dena..'par uske kuch dino baad hi..."raghav becomes sad..

"kya hua tha?"

"uske kuch dino baad hi maa ka death hogaya...aur wahi mujhse kiya hua unka last wish tha...toh..."raghav tries his best to control his tears...

"aur tumne unki last wish puri kardi...woh jaha bhi hogi aj toh bahut khush hogi..."naina tries to cheer him up.

"thank u..isse pasand karne keliye..."

"pasand?yeh mujhe bahut zyada pasand aya...mai toh ajki function me hi isse pehen ne wali hu..."

naina tries to put it on...but she cannot manage the hook...

"mai kuch help karu?"raghav asks her..

"hmmm.."

raghav comes behind naina who is standing in front of the mirror..

raghav is managing the hook of the necklace when their eyes meet in the mirror...

raghav's fingers accidentally get in touch with naina's skin making her shiver a bit...

Haan hasi ban gaye
Haan nami ban gaye
Tum mere aasmaan
Meri zameen ban gaye

raghav notices her reaction and tries not to touch again...

"sorry...woh...galti se..."raghav tries to explain.

"it's okay.."naina answers in short...

they both look at each other in the mirror...



Haan hum badalne lage
Girne sambhalne lage
Jab se hai jaana tumhein
Teri ore chalne lage

raghav finishes making her wear the necklace...

raghav becomes confused if the necklace is making naina more beautiful or it is naina who is making the necklace more beautiful...


Har safar har jagah
Har kahin ban gaye
Maante thhe Khuda
Aur haan wahi ban gaye
Haan hansi ban gaye
Haan nami ban gaye
Tum mere aasmaan
Meri zameen ban gaye

dadi knocks at the door...calling them to come to the hall..

"tum log ready hue ki nahi...mehman agaye hai..."dadi calls out..

"ha dadi abhi ayi..."naina answers.

as naina is going to leave...raghav gets hold of her wrist making her a bit nervous...

"raghav..."she says with fear...

seeing her afraid he leaves her hand..

"i'm sorry...mai tumko darana nahi chahta tha woh mujhe tumse kuch baat karna tha..."

"abhi?function ke baad karte hai..."

"nahi naina...woh hume kal hi baat karni chahiye thi..."

"thik hai bolo..."naina speaks fearing what will he say..

"naina humari shadi jaise bhi hui ho...hui toh hai...and we can't change that...lekin tum yeh shadi nahi karni chahti thi...apne maa ke wajah se tum razi hui thi...toh..."

"raghav...tum kya kehna chahte toh mujhe kuch samajh nahi araha hai..."

"naina tumhare upar koi dawav nahi hai...tum jab chaho yeh rishta tod sakti ho..."

naina becomes shocked as she has never expected raghav to say so...

"tumhare family ke liye shadi bahut choti cheez ho sakti hai...lekin mere liye yeh ek pavitra bandhan hai...aur isse aise hi toda nahi jata...ha agar tumhe iss rishtey se problem hai toh..."

"naina agar mujhe iss rishtey se problem hota toh mai kabhi yeh shadi nahi karta...
"

they both remain silent for a moment and then raghav breaks the silence...

"toh thik hai...hume ek dusre ko as a husband wife accept karne me thoda time toh lagega...tab tak ke liye hum acche dost toh ban hi sakte hai..."

naina who was upset with raghav's statement now smiles a little...

"ha...waise bhi friendship duniya ke strongest relation hai..."naina says..

"ha woh toh hai...waise ab agar hum hall me nahi gaye toh hume dadi se strong dant padegi..."raghav jokes...

they both laughs and heads towards the hall...

phewww...done...I'm really confused about it whether it is good or not...plzz share ur reviews in comments and don't forget to hit the like button😉

great updates
read all the chapters in a go
loved all
cont soon