A short OS - Sumo: 'Did I ditch him?' - Page 2

no tomatoes n chappals...instead as a first time writer, I'd rather say it was amazingly written...the thought which you chose to write was kabil -e-tarif... realization of sumo if she's repeating the same mistaken that she did ten years ago was incredibly written...it was necessary for her to not ditch him this time...after all he had confessed he loves her since always n needs her...n as a best friend, lover, wife she must be his support when he's broken badly...or can say shattered irreparably ...
her concern thanks God she called him n pushkie thanks a lot cutiepie for ur lecture...n shravu even in his sleep was muttering I love you wapas aa jao I need you...aha my heart clenched that moment...n finally sumo came to him running n he must have thought he's dreaming ...well anyone would think...n finally their hug n kiss ...amazingly written...Congrats for ur first os ...keep writing dear. .loved it...
love, anju :)

This is exactly what I wanted out of Sumo . ..to not repeat the same mistake...this is what they should have shown in the show as well...awesome write up!!!

Beautifully penned... short and sweet

Different concept but loved it how it should be in the show also... She ditched him again when he came confess his love to her... She told him that first gi mend u r relationship with u r mother first till than our relationship won't work out... Again u will hurt & all... Shravan really he was the most suffered in his entire life... Everybody ditched him... His father, mother & even Sumo...

Hey such a beautiful concept. I just loved it. why don't you continue it as ss. we would love to read more by you.