A short OS - Sumo: 'Did I ditch him?'

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hi All,
Have tried to write a small OS to keep the memories of our favorite pair alive... I am a first time writer...so tomatoes and chappals welcome..😊

Sumo: Did I ditch him?

"His words keep on playing on my mind. Sumo I love you so so much. I need you". But what did I do? I turned him away...I told him he can come to me once he sets right his relationship with his mother. When he has so openly told me that he needs me, is it right on my part to send him off? He needs me...he is now shattered...he has learnt that his father has told him a lie all these years, he has been hurling abuses at his mother for no fault of hers. Am I not repeating the same mistake I did 10 years back...ditching him when he needs me, when he needs my support..he is all alone now. Being his best friend and the love of his life, is it not my part to be with him during his difficult times?"

She tries calling his phone to find out where he is. It keeps ringing but no answer. After quite a few tries, she calls Pushkar and asks him where Shravan is.

Pushkar" Bhaiya came to meet you. Where is he now? Is he not with you?"

Sumo" No, he left from here some time back. Can you find out where he is please? He is not answering my phone"

Pushkar: "Sumo, did you fight with him again? All this while I was supporting you because I knew Bhaiyaa was wrong. But not now...Bhaiyaa knows the truth about his mom, Sir told him everything and he is broken. He has realized that he is at fault and he loves you very much. Now if you don't acknowledge his love and support him, where is your love for him? What you are doing is not right Sumo.."

Sumo: "Pushkar bas kar yaar. I know what you are saying is right. Please check if he is at home and call me back at once."

Pushkar runs upto Shravan's room and finds him in a delirious state, muttering something again and again and half asleep on his bed. He goes and shakes him...bhaiya, bhaiya... He finds that Shravan is sleeping and is muttering "Sumo please wapas aa jao na... I need you... I love you so so much" Pushkar calls up Sumo and puts his phone on speaker so that she can listen to Shravan's words. Sumo listens to Shravan's words and starts crying. She realizes that he loves her much much more than she loves him. She tells Pushkar that she is coming there right away.

Sumo drives at a reckless speed and reaches Malhotra mansion and just runs into Shravan's room. She find that he is again and again muttering "Sumo please wapas aa jao na... I need you... I love you so so much". She is in tears. She lifts his head and places a lingering kiss on his forehead and says in his ears, I am here Shravan ...for you and with you. I told you na, I shall never leave you jaise pichli baar kiya tha...

Shravan wakes up to find Sumo sitting near him on the bed. He thinks he is dreaming and says..."nahi she cant be here. She said she will come only after I mend my relationship with my mother. But does she not realize that I need her even to do that." Sumo holds his face in her tiny hands and says," Shravan I'm sorry. I ditched you 10 years back when you wanted to share your sorrow with me and I was about to ditch you now when you need me. But I realized my mistake and I am here now. I shall always be by your side forever, promise..."

Shravan sheds tears of joy and places kisses all over her face, her forehead, her eyes, her nose, her cheeks and finally on her lips. Sumo becomes shy and blushes tomato red...

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dhanyata thumbnail
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Yeah, a short one !! but it has got more meaning. Exactly sumo did the same as she did during teenage. Left him alone, when he needed her the most. Whats the point in asking him to go and mend his relationship with Mother first, she should be beside him while he does. I liked that part very much, you made her realize this point.
So sad for Shravan, what kind of breakdown he is going through

And the most important adorable part, in the show, their convo at his office conference room after durindher fiasco, she promised him, she will not leave him alone. Oh My God, How can we forget that beautiful episode. You reminded that remarkable dialogue here. Hats off👏

This is simple FAB🥳

Please keep writing
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Thank you Dhanyata... for your lovely words.
Remembering the dialogues only makes us realise how effective the scenes and dialogues were and how pathetic SONY is to put an end to such a wonderful show...

Thanks once again,

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Posted: 8 years ago
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The concept is different and very nice. i think more os and ts can be written on this concept it will be treat to read.
considering above as your first os you really done well. you should write more
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Nice write-up at the first instance itself👏 congrats!!!!! You should write more and it is a request!!! What we could not watch in the show that you have brought out nicely!!!!!
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Lovely os . Sumo realising that shravan need her during his hard times...do write more😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
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awesome
absolutely loved it
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Really nice and sumo realisation . ..the much needed
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Left me with another Kaash!
U guys are making EDKV fandom dreams come true..!😊
Edited by CarpeDiem_ - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Beautifully penned..!!!
loved it❤️

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