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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: RishuDarling



Hi Fizzy,

Gosh your update came so quickly. You all write quicker than I can think😊
As the ACP blindfolds towards Prinku the murderer is gone now, he is now openly more concerned for her well being. Lovely how you have opened up the chance for him to win her trust and open up on either the situation at home or the accident and the blackmail letters.

I wish you had not stopped so soon and finished or started their conversation. But it is a cliffhanger and I hope the next update will let us know what Prinku decides to došŸ˜‰

You did very well!!

I wonder who would like to go next.. Sophia you perhaps? Or someone else really wants to jump in here?

Good night😊



Oh! Apologies from my side for not going on with the flow. Actually I think was a bit too strict about the word count šŸ˜†
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hey fizza! Please continue!! 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hello! šŸ¤—
Loving the updates Marr, Rini and Twerps! We are seeing a whole new side of ACP.

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Posted: 9 years ago
finally caught up nd guys kya twist pe twist latehošŸ˜† Dev bhi ageya🤣
grt job guysšŸ‘

nd twer,tnx 4 putting da ''story so far" ... it helped a lotšŸ¤—
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Posted: 9 years ago
"You are far too trusting" he never guessed that it might break Priyanka's confidence.

"D-Do you t-trust me, ACP R-Randhawa?" She felt him mocking her beliefs. How could he say that.

"I have a hard time trusting people, Miss Oberoi". He rolled his eyes at her, and mocked laugh as he leaned back on the bed placing this arms by the side and folding one leg on the other.

It was only today when she finally gathered her courage to reveal whatever she has been holding in her weak heart for 2 years and it was more than just about the note. Just because he offered to help her brother and herself out of the mess. Has he been betrayed? She never knew this and would have never guessed because he has always been cold towards her.

"T-then whats the P-point of t-telling you anything, ACP?" It's been a struggle for her and the story he might think as self made just to get away with the crime she committed in his eyes. An awkward wave left his face a Priyanka said that. His face was unbearable. He looked more pissed off, at himself maybe. Why did he even say that in the first place when she is the girl who takes every word seriously. Did I just ruin the chance?

He sensed her emotions as he stood up, placing his hands of the chair's sides she was sitting on and towering her. "Today is not the day to play games, Miss Oberoi!" He whispered in her ear. Her hear smelled good but it didn't make him any less frustrated. He looked at her with a smirk on his face as he saw her changed expressions.

"You'll have to tell everything, no matter what." The voice contained all the pent-up anger. Was he threatening her? She was ready to tell everything but what if he didn't believe her. That was the only question she had in her mind and asked him too.

"I will not say anything, not just today but ever" She made a final decision

"Okay then I'll have to use my own ways" he was not ready to take impertinence lightly. His words made Priyanka's heart beat so loud that he could hear it. It was amusing for him. His words made her terrified. To her memories it was clear to her that he'll not let her go easily.
She wanted to escape from the space under his arms but he sensed what she was up-to, he came more closer bending down a bit. His action had an equal reaction that Priyanka's knee unknowingly hit him hard in his privates. He was having a difficulty breathing. He tried to remain composed but only he knew the pain. Priyanka was equally shocked as she gagged her own mouth but she did want to miss that chance to escape.

"You have chosen the wrong person to mess with, Miss Oberoi"
Edited by fizywizy-woo - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Too good update Fizzy.. I love it.. Someone update please šŸ˜†
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Posted: 9 years ago
OoohhhšŸ˜‰ the updates are gettimg interesting by the second
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Immaturebookie

OoohhhšŸ˜‰the updates are gettimg interesting by the second


That wink though šŸ˜†
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Posted: 9 years ago
Bwahahaha! Isn't Prinku quite flexible? 🤣 She's so good with kicks, Randhawa could use them some time. šŸ˜†
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: twerping


I knowww!! Even as I wrote it, I was like people are going to kill me for doing this! But secrets must be revealed slowly slowly, na? 🤣


Hahaha same xD I thought people would kill me for dropping the "We did not kill her bomb" out of nowhere. But you people be so kind! :')
Twerps and Fizza, lovely updates. One more edgy turn to the story! I love how all of us are proceeding with the story altogether even though none of us know where we're taking it. I guess thats the magic of it!
Edited by ThatNarcissist - 9 years ago

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