PriVeer Story Circle - Page 54

Originally posted by: twerping

Brilliant!!! Anu! 🤗 The phone call was the most natural touch in the world! Wonderful weaving in of show storyline into our fic... And also gives Prinku the perfect reason to come to such a decision.

Also loved the way ACP's teasing changes into concern when he sees her in genuine worry. Loved the update!!

Will fizza go next? Or sophia?

Originally posted by: fizywizy-woo

I'll do it in a bit if that's okay 😆

Originally posted by: emerald39

Thank you! 🤗

And totally took the liberty to make him use her name 😆 Just felt that their chemistry is more or less there, only when it stems from a place of genuine concern/worry for each other.

Looking forward to the next update! 😊

@Rishu no worries,whenever u guys feel like making dem call by der 1st names 1y den write 😉 just throwing dat here nd der 'll do 4 me 😉


@Anu amazing update 😊

Anu, fantastic! The whole phone convo made perfect sense as it paves the way for Prinku to open up to the ACP about her problems. Now to see how the conversation goes!

She reached out and held his hand, she clenched it tightly now. He could feel the tension in her body. He tightened his grip as he felt a tear sliding down her face. He pulled her closer and held her "What's the matter Miss Oberoi? Is all okay back home?"

She suddenly shook her head. The gesture was a cause of great concern for him. Her body was cold. She felt his warm fingers under her chin. He lifted her face to meet his eyes. Never did he know that this will make her break down completely. It was his reflex action that his arms wrapped her in a pacifying hug. The thing he cared about at that very moment was not his case but the girl, whom he never saw crying like this.

She hugged him with all her might and lets tears fall. She held onto him for so long until she realised it was the same man she can never share her feelings with. Her mind was having all sorts of thoughts regarding her O Bhaiya. She breaks free from him leaving him think if he did something wrong.

"W-why do y-you even c-care, ACP R-Ranveer Singh Randhawa?" In her mind this might be the moment he was looking for, the moment she utters what he wants to listen. She can't go weak in front of him.

"It's not like that" he began

I may not be as amazing as you all guys but I tried my level best here. I hope you all will like it and let me know about improvements as I believe there is always a space for it.

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Hi Anu,

Fizza!!! That was superb!! Prinku crying in his embrace!!! Pure love, girl, pure love! So glad I peeked in to see this update! Now I can really go to sleep sated in PriVeer love!