||Coming Home .. Meher Preet write up||

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Credits:

Two scenes & Title in the following write up are inspired from creative pieces
of Proteeti - ID is Radhikerani

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Pics: Google and sana.harshiti from her FB fan page


Small attempt to celebrate Meher & Preet
on their Wedding Anniversary December 02, 2008
Happy Anniversary to fans
🥳

*Please excuse any mistakes.*


C o m i n g H o m e




People were milling about when she walked out quietly to the garden. She slowly moved along towards the beach.

It was a luxury house in fact the entire neighbourhood is filled with her siblings and in laws houses.
The house on her right was her older sis Heer and Prem Jiju's. Her mother in law and father in law stayed with them along with their kids Chahat and Pratham.

The house next to her sis is her husband Preet's older sister Kulraj di and Kiran Jiju's where they lived with their 3 kids Ketan, Vikas and Tanu.

The house in the right corner opposite side is her older brother Nihal and her sis in law Veera's.

The house in front of hers is Preet's second brother Harman and her sis in law Maya's. They had a son named Arjun.

Her parents passed away several years ago and she considered Preet's parents as hers as they treat her like their daughter.

At one point all the members lived in one big house but later Prem suggested that it's important each have their own house after the marriage. The parents Lalit and G3 Juneja agreed.

But Preet was not very happy about it as he didn't want to be away from his brother whom he fondly calls as PB. Prem reassured him that it will not be like that and they will all live in same neighbourhood and so they bought the land in the area and built houses.

Prem gave a house as a gift for each person's wedding - in Meher's case it was a joint gift from her Jiju and older sis Heer.

There was a mini fight as to who will have the house beside Prem. Knowing this Prem said he will decide it and he made Preet's on his left side and Kul di's on his right side. 😆

Of course Harman and Veera whined right away. This made parents worry. So Prem said you can see this house when you open the front door. So you are all staying close to me. That made everyone satisfied and happy. The parents also relaxed

Every week the whole family meet or at least whomever is in the house would. They take turn to entertain which house to meet. It's great fun. They all mingle and play games and discuss what happened that week in person face to face as opposed to by phone.

Meher is a house wife and has a small child. Though Preet has asked her many times to focus on her career as a lawyer she flatly refused saying Preet is away serving the country in the military.
If she is also working then who will take care of Preet junior? That was her argument.
Preet has asked her that she must not waste her time and once their son grows up to a certain age, she has to be back in the work force as he put it.

Meher walked on slowly not really paying attention to the surrounding.

Her back yard faces the beach where it is peaceful and she would usually look at the orangy sunset. It makes her all excited when she watches the round red sun going down slowly and disappear as though it's playing hide and seek game with her.
She knows she would look through her balcony early in the morning to welcome the sun again. It gives her hope and be positive.

Although at this moment she felt restless. Her mind was fluttering with expectation.
She could not sit in one place and wait.

She saw a small girl making a pile with sand and she was sitting alone. Smiling at the girl she walked towards her.

"Tanu you are here all alone? Where are the rest of them?"


"I am right here" - a voice caught her attention and she turned around to find her sister in law smiling.

"Hi Kul di" she said slowly. Soon two others joined them Kiran her Jiju and her nephew Ketan.
As they were chatting she asked "Jiju you are sure he's coming today? You confirmed ?"

Kiran looked very surprised but he understood that she's worried and answered that nothing to worry about and he will come today evening. He had called the office and they had confirmed he left on time.

After while everyone noticed dark clouds forming in the sky and knew it's time to go home.
They all rushed inside along with the kids.


...


As she entered the house she noticed that there sure are lot of people moving around but the work is not being done. She decided to take control and started to give instruction what to do and where things to be placed.

The house is lit up in all floors as if it is Diwali. Whoever walks by there may wonder if it is indeed Diwali 😲 or they may think someone forgot to celebrate on right date and instead making up for the celebration today!! 😆😆

The reason though known to all inside this house and they were all rushing from point A to point B trying to fulfill what the queen of the house has instructed them - their boss.

Everyone forgot that it is lunch time and continued to decorate and make sure the evening grand celebration will be indeed that Grand! There should not be any mistakes in welcoming the special person - the king of this house or they thought of him as such.


...


Drenched fully in the heavy falling of torrential rain he walked very carefully stepping on puddles in between in the side roads.

He slowly opened the gate and walked towards his house.

A smile played on his lips as he raised his right hand to knock on the door. He wasn't sure if anyone would be able to hear his voice or knocking sound. He wasn't sure if the rain has made electricity to go off.

As he pondered over what or how to get inside the door, suddenly it opened wide 😲 and surprised him beyond his belief as he saw a toddler run past him in jet speed. 😲

He turned around to look where the child is running to. He looked on in wonder as the child looked up at the sky showing his little teeth and clapping hands. He jumped and twirled around and managed to stay without falling on ground. He then picked up the wet earth that probably looked like his favourtie pudding😆 and pasted on his cheeks. All this happened in a matter of few seconds!

Soon a lady came running and calling for the child and when she finally sees him she said "oh oh beta what have you done?!" She shakes her head and kept on calling him to come to her.

The child imitating her hand gestures called her towards him and showing with his little finger what was above and laughing at the same time. This went on for a minute or so. Finally giving in to her son's whim she stepped down from her veranda and walked as fast as she can to where her son is playing or making a mess of himself to be exact!

As she went near the child, he pulled the end of salwar suit indicating her to sit beside him as he was already seated on the ground now. Unable to balance herself from his little pull and the muddy earth she sat down. The child happily pasted her cheeks with some more muddy earth and clapped his hands. 😆


The mother didn't know if she should scold her son or laugh at his play just stared at him in wonder!

The heavy downpour didn't allow her to see him properly as it looked like there is a glass wall between her and her son.

She slowly got up picking up her son in her arms. He hugged her tightly and giggled loudly indicating he's happy to be in her arms. She kissed his cheeks appreciating her son's affection.
Though mud was pasted on their faces it soon washed away due to heavily pouring rain.

The mother walked as carefully as she can back inside the house holding her son in her arms.

She was so preoccupied that she didn't know if there is anyone at the front door.

He was watching the scene with a smile and his eyes lit up in surprise.
For a moment he stayed put frozen looking at the picture perfect moment in front of his eyes - his life just walking past him.

He decided to stay mum and walked behind the mom and son through the open door.

As he walked inside he was surrounded by people saying hi not realizing his condition. He didn't complain as he too did not see his family for very long time.

After few minutes of chit chat with all the people who came in front of him, he climbed up the stairs towards their room.

He was happy to be back and noticed how the house has been decorated and he could hardly see the colour of the wall. 😲😲
The heavy rain, dark clouds and thunder had distracted him and he didn't think of looking through glass window to see what is going on inside. If he had done that he would have noticed the electricity was there and the party atmosphere.

As he reached his room he saw his son playing and wearing dry clothes.
The little guy didn't seem to mind that his mom had pulled him off from rain play.
He is happily playing with his little friends and cousins.

He thought for a moment to step towards that direction and hug the little guy then he stopped and changed his mind.

He walked towards his room instead with a happy anticipation and hoping to meet her.

He quietly walked inside as the door was already opened. He found her staring outside the window.


...


After making her son wash up and make him wear clean clothes she let him go and play.

Just a little while longer. He'd be here she thought. She will go down to welcome him.
While she waited she wondered how nice it would be to have her sweetheart by her side.

She knew she has to manage by herself most of the time as Preet always wanted to be in the army. It was his childhood dream. But she missed him and because of the nature of his work, she cannot chat every day nor can she see him on festive days.

Few years ago when he came for vacation he received the call to come immediately.
The war has started. She was worried and anxious like any wife would but she learned to cope with everything. She focused her time entirely in taking care of their son.

When Preet had to leave suddenly, Meher was one month pregnant with their son Preet Junior.

Their son's name is Pranay. Preet insisted to find a name that reflects his brother Prem (he was very partial towards him as Prem fulfilled every wish of Preet without a second thought always.).

Meher came up with this suggestion and he happily accepted. Pranay means affection and their son is indeed very affectionate and caring though he gives her tons of exercise every moment of the day like he has done today. The only reason she is standing here without a worry is because Kul di is supervising all the kids at the moment.😃


...


Tiptoeing like a cat he stopped behind his destination - his wife!

He didn't bother about his wet clothes and decided to do what his heart was telling. He went and stood behind her, wrapped his arms slowly and placed his cheeks against hers in an affectionate way and said Hi in a soft husky voice.

She was startled to say the least and tried to turn around and look at him.

He didn't let her and hugged her more tightly.

She now understood this is not a stranger but the special person for whom she has been waiting all day preparing to welcome with all her love.

She finally came to her senses and manage to find her voice to reply. "Preet!

When did you come? Why didn't you call me? Why are you all wet? OMG!!! Go and change. Wait let me bring your dry clothes. I mean we have a evening function. I mean all are waiting downstairs. And here we are standing in a room." 😲

Preet; Oye! 😲 what the heck? I came to see you *raising his eye brows* after all these years and you are worried what will people say? Oh never mind what people will say. Come sit beside me.
*He pulled her hand and sat on the sofa by their bed.*

Meher: 😲 Haven't you learned something from being in military all these years? What is this? Don't you want to clean yourself and freshen up?At least towel dry your hair and face!!

Preet: Oh darling? Look it's pouring outside and I've already showered head to toe *giving his goofy grin* I don't need to shower again!!

Meher: You're gona get ill. Please go and shower and put on some dry clothes.

Preet; Ok ok meri maa *says in an exasperated voice*

Meher: What ? 😡 Since when did I become your mother?

Preet: umm since now *giggles*

Meher; Preet!!!! 😡 she said in a miffed tone and she stood up and turns around looking away in frustration.

Preet gets up and hugs her from behind. He softly whispered "Meher my jaan please don't be angry. But you know me" *he gives a cute apologetic face*

Meher couldn't help but break into a smile.seeing the childish side of her husband.

Preet drags her to the sofa. At that moment there was a knock on the door and someone brought snack and hot tea in a tray. Meher takes that in her hand and placed on the coffee table in front of the sofa.

Meher: Preet now at least have this tea with snack. You really need to take care of yourself.

Preet pretended he didn't hear anything and simply stares at her.

She looks up and gets lost in his eyes. His eyes silently conveying how much she means to him and how happy he is at this moment.
She noticed the tired and weary eyes though his face is dripping with rain water.
She could tell he's had a tiring journey and must be feeling exhausted but his face showed a playful yet thoughtful expression. He's super excited to be home she thought.

Preet is a mechanical engineer by profession and serving in army. Though most of the time he is behind the war scene, he has been in danger zone many times.
His skin looked so smooth and clean like a new baby's.
There is no sign in his body that will tell the hardship or heavy work load he has been put through during his service. He's always cheerful and no one would ever guess he has served in military for last 5 years and even been in war.

They got married soon after graduating from university. He proposed and she accepted right away.
Both families were friends for last two generation so they were all happy about Preet and Meher's marriage.

Seeing the sudden silence that fell between them and Meher's worried face,
Preet pulls her into a hug. She smiles and hugs back.

After what seemed like hours they pulled away and Meher tries to get his attention to have the snack. She was really surprised by his carefree attitude towards food as he never ever let a chance slip to get hold of his favourite snacks!

Preet has a naughty glint in his eyes and without uttering a word opens his mouth, indicating her to feed him. 😆
She shakes her head and says "You would never change hai na. When will you grow up?"

Preet after successfully swallowing his bite manages to mumble " Neverrr" in a determined tone and winks at her. She smiles at his playful mood.

Preet hugs Meher again and softly said "Happy Anniversary Jaan. Thank you for making this special. I did not expect this at all. This looks like a Diwali party to me."

Meher gets emotional and wishes him. She pulled back from the hug. She kisses his cheek and said "How could I not? After all the King of the house - our little Palace is returning from the war! Really it's been 3 long years. You haven't seen your son - Junior Preet."

Her voice started to crack so she stopped suddenly and looked down, as if she is admiring the snacks on the plate.

Preet: You still call him Junior Preet? 😲 saying this he tweaks her cheeks knowing that she is crying. He wanted to make her smile again.

Meher couldn't help but give a small simile. She replies "of course. As you're not here. Who will I call Preet? I mean I want to hear that name every where every day. So that's the only way I know how to do so I call him Junior Preet. 😎 By the way he is exactly like you."🤡

Preet giggling says "Yes I saw the mud play in the rain. 😆 He sure makes you dance to his tune. 😆 You're powerless and simply obey his orders huh!"

Meher giggled recalling what had happened downstairs 15 minutes ago. She then suddenly asked surprised "You saw that?" 😲😲

He replied by nodding his head up and down meaning yes.

Meher: Like father, Like son! Why didn't you say anything?😲

Preet: I was shocked and then decided to surprise you. I did good hai na ? 😎

Saying this he moved his eye brows up and down.🤡

Meher: I must have looked awful drenched in rain. 😳 *She shyly looks down.*

Preet goes near her and hugs her. "If that is so then I'm looking awfullest!!!!"

Meher: Hey that is not even a word! 😕

Preet: So I made that up. 😎 It made you look up at my face hai na ? *He laughed*


Meher formed a fist and punched in his chest with a playful anger for teasing her.

Meher looks up at Preet and said in an apologetic manner "Preet this wasn't how I imagined. We were all set and would have gathered downstairs to welcome you. I was waiting but you came so early and no one saw you. 😒😔

Preet: Jaan pretty much everyone saw me downstairs. I tell you something this is the bestest sweetest funnest delicious party I've ever been surprised with! Saying so he pulled her into a hug and patting her head with his palm trying to relieve the disappointment she felt at the moment.

He could very well imagine Meher organizing pooja and then she must have planned for fun and games for kids and dance and masti for adults as it is something he loves and she knows that.

Preet: I will be a good boy and not waste all your effort for our celebration. Let me go put on fresh clothes and come down.

Meher: I'll be waiting she said with a cute smile. 😃

Preet : Be ready with my gift *He sticks out his tongue.*

Meher: What? 😲 Where is mine? *She asked as she stood up putting her hands on hip*

Preet: All in good time my dear wife and you be ready.

Meher shaking her head said "You will never change Preet ?! Are you a kid?"

Preet quickly ran back to give a kiss on her cheeks and whispered in her ear "Never"

Meher smiling, shaking her head pushed him towards washroom to get freshen up.



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Fatima_Q thumbnail
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Aww!!! Athisda...what a fabulous story!! I absolutely loved it!

How wonderful and fortunate for the Junejas to have a living situation like the one you have described in the story. It is truly an ideal.

Never in a million years would I have thought of putting Preet in the military...I mean...I'd never put him in harms way...but by having done so...you made his homecoming to Meher on their anniversary feel even more special.

Love the scene in their room...

And I can only imagine what Preet's anniversary gift to Meher will be...

I'm grinning like the Cheshire cat now.

Love Meet...

And love you loads...Dil se...
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Came back to read this story again... 😛 🤗
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Posted: 8 years ago
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wowww Athi Amazing story
very different and yes its veryyy beautiful
and sab saath me reh te hai
nebours hai
love this story
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Athiii darlinggg! *_*
Whoah! You started your writing venture with Meet. Wow I am so so happy. This year's Meet anniversary is so special for me beacsue I am of Kis Desh forum. Love you from the very core of my heart.

Coming to story, it was amazing. Preet is the millitary was a unique idea and it gave me a big smile. But just like Fatima, I don't really want to potray Preet ever in a profession because I am too scared to let Preet go through any danger. This story was super sweet and the emotions were potrayed really well. Loved it. Hugs and Kisses. ❤️🤗

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Awww wow Athi!

The concept was really different and I loved it!
Preet coming back after 3 long years ... Meher is so strong! She took care of their son during all this time. 😳

I just love their scenes! cuteness, sweetness, and so romantic! Preet's special gift, mmm I guess it *naughty look*! 😆

and Preet Jr is too cute also! 😳

All the family live together in the same neighbourhood! Really nice! 😉

Awww this made my day Athi, keep writing more!

Hugs🤗
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ps: fantastic BANNER
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Wow so u finally sorted Jzoo n settled them in separate places 😉 .i would love to c preet in army
😳 and meher calling their son preet jr just to remember preet so cute. Thnx for sharing such a heart warming piece. Totally loved it

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