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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Snow_Angel

nice update.. RaIna scenes are cute..

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Drashtilove

Lovely update..raina are lovely together...hmm the mehras start their routine of ordering raghav naina shocked to see all this but it was necessary she should now how they treat him thnx 4 pm

hey thank uuu 😊 😊
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: ananya2010

Awesome update, loved it.

Naina will teach a lesson to the Mehras now and also for disrespecting Raghav, Naina will slowly get to know that Raghav is not heir of the Mehras.
Thanks for the PM dear.

thanks a looottt ananya 😆
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: lamia1210

hey angel...I really feel very proud to have a reader like u...love u too.. ⭐️


i m overwhelmed dear...❤️
we readers are also lucky to have writers like u...❤️
love u dear...❤️❤️
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Posted: 8 years ago
I am really sorry 4 the late update...I was a bit busy...by the way thanks a lot 4 liking the last chapter...it feels very good when people appreciate your work...without wasting more time I present u the 5th chapter...

Chapter 5

naina is feeling bored sitting in her room...raghav is out of the house for buying some goods for Pam...

naina thinks of going to dadi and talk with her...

as naina passes the hall...she sees sanjana sitting there...naina tries to ignore her but sanjana comes to her and blocks her way..

"naina you know I really feel very sorry for you...babes.."sanjana says making a sad face.

"and why is that?"asks naina...

"tumne kaha socha tha tumhari shadi veer mehra se hogi...aur tum kaha...kher chodo sabki kismat meri tarah toh nahi hoti..."

naina does not answer and passes her...but after going a few steps she turns back and comes to sanjana...

"you are right...meri kismat tumhari jaisi nahi hai...and I am grateful for that..."naina says confidently..

"excuse me?"

"jiske kismat me veer jaisa irresponsible aur coward husband hai uske jaisi kismat kaun chahegi?"

"how are you insult veer?"sanjana gets angry,"aur tumhari kismat toh bahut acchi hai jisme raghav jaisa ek naukar husband hai..."

"raghav naukar nahi hai...usse iss ghar ke logo ne naukar bana k rakha hai..."

the argument was going to take a bad form when dadi comes in the hall...

"kya baatein horahi hai yaha pe..."dadi asks...

sanjana gets afraid as she thinks naina will complain against her but naina does not.

"kuch khaas nahi dadi...waise mai apki paas hi arahi thi.."naina says with a smile..

"woh toh thik hai...lekin ghar pe sab ready kyu nahi hai?arrey bhai sham ko reception party hai...aur..."dadi gets annoyed,"sudha, parmeshwari, ira kaha hai sab?"

within a minute everyone arrives at the hall.

"sabko yaad hai ki nahi aj ghar me ek function hai..."

Pam looks at sudha and they both nods..

"mummyji mai...I mean mai aur sudha bhabi soch rahe the ki raghav aur naina ke reception ke sath sath veer aur sanju ka bhi..."pam could not complete her words..

"shadi akele me karli toh reception sab ke sath karne me kya fyda...yeh sirf naina aur raghav ka hi reception hoga...

everyone becomes sad hearing this and naina feels bad for them...coz she can never bear to see others sad...no matter how they treat her...

"plz dadi man jayiye na...mujhe aur raghav ko bhi bahut accha lagega...please dadi..."naina pleads to dadi...

everyone becomes shocked as they have not expected this from naina...

"thik hai...lekin sirf tere liye naina..."dadi finally agrees.

now everyone becomes happy and so does naina...

"naina beta tum bahut acchi ho",sudha pretends to be nice to her,"tum mere sath chalo mai tumhe ajke function ke liye ek accha sa dress dungi..."

naina is at sudha's room with sudha and pam...sudha brings out a red gown and places it before naina...

"kaisi hai yeh dress?"sudha asks.

"yeh toh bahut beautiful hai..."naina answers.

"tum bhi isme bahut beautiful lagogi.."pam adds..

"toh phir final...ajke function me tum yahi dress pehen rahi ho..."

"lekin reception ke liye maa ne mujhe ek sari gift kiya hai..."

"oh no darling please koi sari wari mat pehen na..."sudha protests...

"naina aj society ke bade bade log aney wale hai...unke samne tum typical behenji banke kaise jasakti ho?yeh humari reputation ka sawal hai..."pam tells her...

naina does not argue and leaves the room with the gown..but she still does not get how can a sari destroy their reputation ..

naina comes back to her room and finds raghav has already returned..

raghav sees the gown in her hands..

"yeh kya hai?"raghav asks...

"yeh sudha chachi ne diya hai...aj reception me pehen ne ke liye..."

"arrey wah...yeh toh bahut sundar hai...tum toh..."raghav stops seeing naina sad...

"kya hua?tum sad kyu ho?"raghav asks her inching a bit closer.

"raghav maa ne India se ek sari layi thi mere liye reception me pehen ne ke liye...unhe bahut bura lagega agar mai woh na pehni toh..."

"itni si baat...tum apni maa ka diya hua sari hi pehnogi..."

"lekin chachi..."

"woh sab mai sambhal lunga...tum bas yeh sad face mat banao...mujhe accha nahi lagta jab tum sad hoti ho..."

naina smiles...though her marriage was not planned but she has found a great friend who supports her.


I know the chapter is a bit short and few RaIna moments...but I promise u guys won't be disappointed in the next ones...but plzzz like and comment to encourage me to update faster longer and better..😊

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Posted: 8 years ago
wow dear...
what an update
loved it...
naina should show sanjana her place...
and i really loved how raghav supports naina...
really what naina has sanjana doesn't...
loved it...
waiting eagerly fr the nxt part dear...
cont. soon...
and hx fr the pm dear...
love u❤️
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Posted: 8 years ago
Clean and crisp writing dear
Loved the update!!
Naina was getting weary and impatient being alone
Naina thought to pay dadi a visit
On the way she met Sanju who was mocking Naina with her taunts
Naina gave back sanju her own jeer vowing to veer's chicken and scaredy act
Loved the way Naina stood for Raghav's respect !!
Dadi yelled at Mehra's for not being dressed up for Raina's reception party
Sudha and Pam put froth their desire to celebrate Sanju and veer's reception too
Initially dadi denied but due to Naina's insistence dadi agreed
Pam and Sudha suggested Naina to wear a red cocktail dress to her merrymaking party
Naina obliged as she didn't want to hurt them
Raghav found Naina to be gloomy and asked her the reason
Raghav second handed Naina to wear a saree choose by her mom
😊
Is Sanju and veer really married !!?it was their ploy to stop veer and Naina's wedding!!?
😲
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: anu5

Clean and crisp writing dear

Loved the update!!
Naina was getting weary and impatient being alone
Naina thought to pay dadi a visit
On the way she met Sanju who was mocking Naina with her taunts
Naina gave back sanju her own jeer vowing to veer's chicken and scaredy act
Loved the way Naina stood for Raghav's respect !!
Dadi yelled at Mehra's for not being dressed up for Raina's reception party
Sudha and Pam put froth their desire to celebrate Sanju and veer's reception too
Initially dadi denied but due to Naina's insistence dadi agreed
Pam and Sudha suggested Naina to wear a red cocktail dress to her merrymaking party
Naina obliged as she didn't want to hurt them
Raghav found Naina to be gloomy and asked her the reason
Raghav second handed Naina to wear a saree choose by her mom
😊
Is Sanju and veer really married !!?it was their ploy to stop veer and Naina's wedding!!?
😲

Thanks for the pm
Will be waiting for the next update😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
Lovely update.. Naina gave perfect answer to sanju she is flying too high..hmm reception and raghav said her to wear her ma's saree may be pam n sudha wont like it thnx 4 pm
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Posted: 8 years ago
loved the update
very awesome
loved to read about raina
loved how they care about each other
hope naina helps raghav to see real face of mehras

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