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RTDeewani

@RTDeewani

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

Hi everybody. Like some of you know it already that I have earlier posted a few stories in PV forums, one of them is titled RHYTHM.

It is actually not my own story but the written version of a Tamil movie called Rhythm.

I really love that movie so much that I penned down the same story with the leads of PV as protagonists and it received very good response bcoz most of the readers who commented there were from other countries who were unaware of such a movie.

But here, I believe most of the readers to be Indians who would've probably watched the movie earlier and this written version might not interest them much and I am therefore skeptical about posting this story here using AKDHA as leads.

But if that is not the case and if you will be still interested to read it, I don't mind posting the Akdha version Of RHYTHM here.

But there is one more thing about this movie... that this movie doesnt contain any SR scene or even a small kiss scene between Akdha. I am telling this before itself so that you don't get disappointed at the end.

So plz tell me all your honest opinions on this so that I could decide whether or not to post it. Even negative response is welcome.

Thanks.

Love & Regards

Jodhu

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roseraja1915

@roseraja1915

Rocker

Posted: 9 years ago

Please go ahead and post it, Jodhu. We would love to read the Akdha version.😊

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P.Jyothi

@pandrangijyothi

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Posted: 9 years ago

Please continue dear. But small request...😉 include some lovely romantic movements of akdha if possible...😆

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RTDeewani

@RTDeewani

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: pandrangijyothi
Please continue dear. But small request...😉 include some lovely romantic movements of akdha if possible...😆

I can understand that and I did add an Akdha scene of my own but it comes at the epilogue only. The thing is each scene of the movie is interconnected so I just can't insert in between some Akdha scene as it would disrupt the flow of the story.

I doubt if that will be satiate your demand.

Edited by Jodhu - 9 years ago

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Vrinda

@--Vrinda--

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

go ahead with it dear ,
just one request as u just need to edit the lead names, so please try to update regularly

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RTDeewani

@RTDeewani

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: --Vrinda--
go ahead with it dear ,
just one request as u just need to edit the lead names, so please try to update regularly

Dont worry about lead names. I'll surely edit that😊.

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sorathsheikh

@sorathsheikh

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

Heya Sissy i'm Pakistani 😃 And i haven't watch that movie which you mentioned in your post 😊

But i would love to read Your new story Don't mind its just an advice please do write stories from your heart and mind they will be super hit stories 😃 don't write stories from movies 😳 Do continue and pm me by the way accept my buddy request 😃

Love you my new friend + sissy 😆 Please mention some akdha scenes as its important na 😉

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Kavya

@Kavya_P

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

GO HEAD BUDDY 👍🏼

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RTDeewani

@RTDeewani

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

NOTE:

Oh my girlsies... you all have really put me in a dilemma that I am unable to choose whether or not to post it. I know none of you are against about posting the story. Well, the confusion really is about the addition of more Akdha scenes in it, which I have done only at the epilogue.

Your demand is not wrong but I fear that will affect the flow of story as each scene is interconnected like a chain reaction.

But I can't disappoint those readers who are OK with whatever I have in store for this story as well.

Therefore, I have decided to post the story as it is by just changing the name of the characters.

Those who wanted more akdha intimate scenes, kindly do not mistake me or feel offended by my decision and I request to read the story atleast once, after I post it.

May be after you read it, you might probably understand my decision to post the story as it is, in a better way, hopefully.

But if you're still not satisfied after reading, kindly let me know.