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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: RishuDarling

I like how the story is evolving, nice and slow but steady.

How I wish I could participate! My fingers are itching to type something too but..
I really should not be starting something new so... ๐Ÿ˜ญ


Would you like it if I threw in some ideas though? so I can still have some input in this lovely story ๐Ÿ˜ƒ

Anyway keep it up. Reading as much as I can ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ


Hey Rishu! If you want to jump in, please do! You don't have to keep posting if you think you won't be able to...but a post here and there will be exceedingly welcome. To have you write on PriVeer will be such a treat!๐Ÿ˜ณ
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Posted: 8 years ago
Three updates! I loved them all Preity, Deepika and Sarce!
I will try to get something up before I go to sleep tonight guys, but I can't promise it, unfortunately. Anyone who wants to post before me, please feel free ^_^
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: RishuDarling

I like how the story is evolving, nice and slow but steady.

How I wish I could participate! My fingers are itching to type something too but..
I really should not be starting something new so... ๐Ÿ˜ญ


Would you like it if I threw in some ideas though? so I can still have some input in this lovely story ๐Ÿ˜ƒ

Anyway keep it up. Reading as much as I can ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ


Hi Rishu! ๐Ÿ˜Š Thanks for comments.

Feel free to join us. Like Twerps said, no harm even if you can post once in a while. If you absolutely have no time, don't hesitate to throw in your ideas either. A couple days back, we were brainstorming about whether Prinku should be the person responsible for the death of the ACPs sister, or not. So, jump in however and whenever you like! ๐Ÿ˜‰
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: emerald39

Three updates! I loved them all Preity, Deepika and Sarce!

I will try to get something up before I go to sleep tonight guys, but I can't promise it, unfortunately. Anyone who wants to post before me, please feel free ^_^


Haha! The thread suddenly came back to life after a bout of laziness. ๐Ÿ˜† Can't wait to read your update, Anu. ๐Ÿ˜‰
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Posted: 8 years ago
Hello everyone! whoa! yesterday it was all silent.. bt today the thread is up and running :D
ahh glad :D
Sarcy, Deepika, Priety... Superbb updates :)
Besides Preity... u remember me Priya... aka Priyamvada.,,? I think we met on several forums including DWTG?! sorry i dint remember the shows exactly ;)
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: -Serene.Rose-

Hello everyone! whoa! yesterday it was all silent.. bt today the thread is up and running :D

ahh glad :D
Sarcy, Deepika, Priety... Superbb updates :)
Besides Preity... u remember me Priya... aka Priyamvada.,,? I think we met on several forums including DWTG?! sorry i dint remember the shows exactly ;)


Guess the weekend helped people to recharge their Priveer love! ๐Ÿ˜‰
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Posted: 8 years ago
Rishu just pm-d to say she has a follow-up update ready... so she'll be posting that soon... ๐Ÿ˜ƒ
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Posted: 8 years ago

PI ~ Prinku Investigating


Priyanka tossed and turned. For a moment she had fallen into a light sleep, but something woke her up. She sat up straight to identify what had caused her to wake up. To wake up and get back to this awful reality. She got up and looked outside again. It was a full moon and the stars shone brightly. Somehow, this calmed her down a bit. She had always been fascinated with the sky. The sound of Dadi's loving voice resounded in her ears.


"Puttar.. When people pass on to the afterlife, Rab Ji welcomes them with open arms. There is no space for sadness at all. Everyone is happy, celebrating and rejoicing. They are watching over us like guardian angels. Whenever the stars shine at their brightest, they are being charged by an Cosmic Energy, announcing the arrival of someone or something beautiful on Earth."


Priyanka had believed Dadi back then. She always knew how to calm her and her brothers down. She needed her Dadi desperately right now. How she wished she could turn back the hands of time and be a kid again. Or even go back two years ago.


Dear God, dear Stars.. Please help me? I truly wish I could go back to that horrific day and set things straight. But what's done is done. I know that. I thought I had come to terms with it. Accepted it. Both Om Bhaiya and I were finally in a better place. I suppose it is time to grow up and man up to what had happened exactly. If only Om bhaiya would just allow me to do so. I can't take this anymore!'


The same questions came back to her mind again. Why?'


Why did I insist on driving that day, while I wasn't ready for it?

Why were we driving there?

Why did that lady have to flash by at that particular moment?

Why is someone blackmailing us?

Why can't I remember everything that had happened?

Why after two years this is being investigated again?

Why is the ACP so set on taking down the Oberoi's?

Why am I still walking around free as I deserve to be punished?


There were too many questions. Too many loose ends. Perhaps she had been asking the wrong questions?


What happened exactly that night? What happened to his sister? I can recall there was no funeral but only a memorial.

Who is sending the secret messages and boxes to blackmail us?

Who could know more about this case?'


The longer Priyanka thought about it, nobody knew exactly what happened that night. Except for.. Svetlana!


Priyanka could hear her heartbeat echoing loudly. She felt week in the knees and had to sit down. Could it be? How did she forget about her?


"Oh no.. I should call Om Bhaiya as soon as possible! Or perhaps Shivaay bhaiya..?


She would call home in the morning.

Her body was full of adrenaline now. Sleep was the last thing on her mind. After pacing back and forth, she decided to put everything on paper. She started eagerly, determined to face her demons:


"Who, What, Why, When, Where, How?"
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Posted: 8 years ago
That was some powerful stuff, Rishu! Loved it! So glad you decided to join in! This does set us off on another path...could Svetlana somehow be connected to the accident? Brilliant!
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Posted: 8 years ago
@Rishu just came nd saw ur update nd dat was grt! Wt a twist man!! Lana in it 2,i like it ๐Ÿ˜† some1 write da next pt already!

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