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Castile2

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Posted: 8 years ago

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Hey Lara 🤗

A BIG thank you with lots of love for dedicating this chapter to me! ❤️

A BIGGRR sorry with huge puppy dog eyes for this late comment! 😕 😳

Blame entirely goes to Life which derives sadistic pleasure out of my miseries!

Shucks my babbles!!

I have read this chapter five time already during all these days!! This was amazing dear!! 👏

Coming to the chapter...

So the much awaited tea-party is here!

I didn't know what to expect but what I was greeted with actually surprised me!! 😉 😆

The whole setup of the party that you portrayed was just amazing! 👍🏼

But man I am waiting for the day Suman takes over the reigns of MM! 🥱

The whole support staff is going to thank the heavens for sending her to their rescue!

And Vandy needs to know that the world does not run according to her whims! 🥱

Yes. No one can compete Vandy at being a witch! 🤣

Yeah go Sumo!! #SavageLevel101 🤪

Suman and Rahul were so adorable!! 😳

Wonder how Shravan would have reacted on seeing his wife with a baby?

Yeah that's right! Go melt in a puddle like me!! 😳

Suman and Sanzh are going to be the best buddies!! I can see that!! 😃

Suman now realizes what a star stunt she pulled off with the most eligible bachelor!! #LikeAStud 😎

ShraMan's kids!! Yea!!! [:D/]
And Three kids!! Haye!!

I always wanted them to have three kids!! I have an idea in mind about this too... 😳 😉

Kamini. 🤔

But have I told you before that all the names that you have made Suman call her husband with are just...

Tall monster. Buffoon.

Just loved how she referred to him as a "protective bear" ❤️

And yeah!!! Suman just showed Vam-Kam her place! [:D/] 🤣

Suman is headed straight towards that wolf 😡

But I believe that's where her fear lies and for peace she would have to face him.

That's inevitable.

But yes. Shravan is there with her right? When the time comes?

Those little notes!! Oh my!! 😳

Waiting for what happens now!!

Please update soon!! 😊

P.S. this is the third time I am writing this comment hope it gets posted!! 😲

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Lara / Clara

@devilaonmoon

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Posted: 8 years ago

#202

*I claim all copyrights of this work. Do not plagiarize this story, no part / scene / dialogue of it may be copied, reproduced or transmitted in any form or by any means without my (Clara Ricks's) written permission. Plagiarizing my works will be taken as an offence and will be dealt with properly, and know that it is punishable by the forums and law. If you find anyone copying my works, please do let me know.*

Dedicating this chapter to shalz_123.🥳

Dear, you asked for Shravan and Suman's POV all in one. But I don't want to break the pace of how I've been writing the story since a while now. So, I thought of writing Shravan's POV of the past many chapters (lost count of how many chapters I've covered here) that were written in Suman's POV.

IMP Facts:

Till now, we've come to know in this story (which is a little bit different from the show's Shraman past)-

1. Suman was really cold and insensitive towards Shravan and more of a rough kind of teenager.

2. Shravan had asked Suman to meet him after school.

3. But she never came because her parents died.

4. Shravan however didn't know it and left for London.

5. Suman had an older brother named Rudra who died of cancer.

Now, a new revelation about Sumo is going to be made and it will define a part of why Shravan had been ignoring Sumo while he ran off to London recently.

Moral: Villains are made, for they've experienced trauma. Monsters are awakened, for they have been always there. While villains are redeemable, monsters must be slayed. Such impressive differences they've got.

Sometimes I feel like Shraman are both villains in this story rather than heroes, redeeming themselves all along.

Chapter 37

Removed

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Rest will be continued on Suman's POV from here.

I hope you enjoyed Shravan's side of the story, his thoughts and majburia.

Thanks a lot for your likes and comments, and I'm sorry for not replying to them, thought you would like it more if I give you a fast updt in stead. Will reply to as much comments as I can until the next updt. Pls don't forget to like, comment! That will make me so, very, utterly happy.

Ah... and also, tell me you favorite part, dialogue or scene of this chapter. That will help me a lot to write.

Love you all,❤️

Lara.

P.S. As usual, people who liked and commented will receieve a PM. If you're not receiving a pm, then obviously you're not doing it both... or - your PM inbox is full and can't receieve anymore PMs (this happens a lot, check it). You need to empty your inbox to get new ones. Tada!

Edited by devilaonmoon - 7 years ago

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orion23

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Posted: 8 years ago

#203

Oh la la!

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Do you think it would be weird if I quoted the entire chapter? I think it would right... See you asked for what parts I liked..

I'll be honest, I loved the whole of it!

Not one dull moment not one part our of place. All so perfect...

I'm beating around the bush to find words...

Lara, you Ma'am I have gotten into the habit of tipping my hat to!

Inspirational is what your writing is!

Coming to the update. I absolutely loved the justification Shravan gave, his running away made complete sense. Your vision here is commendable. Poor Sumo, she's been through so much. Poor Shravan, the guilt ain't letting go anytime soon...

His concern is ❤️

He got a guard posted below her window.. Your Shravan takes my heart away!

Pushkar Shravan confrontation was beyond epic 🤣 You are cheating on my Sumo! The hell😆 I like how Shravan went all protective there...

His fears, his love, his desires, all were penned so beautifully Lara, I shit you not I blushed 😳Brilliant touch there. I love how he's being open with her and wants her to be open too. He wants to be her shield, heart leapt there!

The last bit, so I feel like the 5 year old who's candy was snatched yet again! Why doth thou torenth me so! I can't wait for the don't stop moment! Did she know what she brought upon? We'll know soon enough..

And no I don't mind if you take longer to reply to my comment, update soonish😆

Oh and special mention to the moral and the little couplets you add here and there. They literally make the work stand out.

Love and adoration,

Zoya

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Sunain

@Sunain

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Posted: 8 years ago

#204

Res 😃

*****

me second...for the first time..yaaay🥳

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LARA LARA LARA...I LOVE U YAR...🤗

U R MY SHUNSHINE..MY LOVE...MY CUTOO..!!🤗

(yessi u r my Sunshine n from now on i'll call u tht..copyrite reserved😉...n defo u didnt mind😳)

U literally made mt day...the upii was damn astonishing..loved it! loved it! loved it!❤️❤️❤️

u hav no idea...infact 0.000000% idea how much i loved n enjoyed it..by the end i was blushing hard n had a "HIIUGE" grin plastered my face.😃

it was phenomenal,outstanding,mindblowing...n so on..literally hav no words to praise it..it feels like m insulting ur hardwork by appreciating it so lowly.u r damn damn damn good!

Shravan's POV is bonous for me..as i asked u for it..n u pulled it stupendously!

Shravan craved for her soo soo soo badly..his desires were so strong tht even i shivered whn i read bout his need for her..i hav no words to explain..he was voracious for her n scared of his own desires he ran away..n tht revelation..heart breaking one.

God has gifted women lots of precious gifts n two of thm r..hell lot of patience n profound strenght to endure excruciating pain...n thts women's plus point..i believe!

N same happened with Suman..she endured her all pains n became a strong yet hard Suman.

ahh..Shravan's thoughts were driving me crazzy🤪☺️

Finally they sorted their MUz..which was much needed...n tht kiss..OMG..was enchanting😳..(was worth waiting😉)

their greives literally got mixes up..n tht part was damn fantastic..emotional too..made me cry like a made person😭..but still loved it!

n tht Pushkar part..was damn hillarious n "My sumo"😆..jealous shravan is fun😳

cant wait for the "sub kuch" part..u knw na wht i mean😳

Lara u better continue it soon..or else i wud die of curoisity..😛😳

eagerly waiting for the nxt part..

love u ton much🤗

plz continue soon😳..now its the matter of life n death😛

Tadaa!

Take Care!

Sunain

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Anum

@anum20jamali

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Posted: 8 years ago

#205

Lara, my darling, 1st of all so many hugs to u for d fast update, it was such an amazing surprise. 🤗 U made my day.

Coming to d update, I wanna shout "dey kissed, dey kissed" Haha, I m such a Besharam, lol 😆

Shraman did not say d 3 words but dis was even better. It was so intense and emotional, obviously dey know dat dey love each other, Shravan knows Sumo loves him and vice versa. It is so evident, words ain't even needed.

It was so so beautiful, Nanu revealing evrythin, realization dawning on Shravan, Sumo is also guilty for hurting him but he consoles her, I just can't get over it I could imagine each n every thing. Shravan says he can't stop and Sumo says then don't stop She's giving him permission, she wants him too, she loves him so damn much. 😳

And our lover boy, wat to say about him 😳 He is already giving her so much of love, now dat he knows about her feelings too, he's goin to shower her wid all d love dat he has kept hidden within himself for so long I m lookin forward to read dat. Reading ur story makes me wish dat we could see all dis, I wanted to see dis on d show, I desperately want a season 2 now wid dese amazing scenes dat u write.

U r amazing, u r awesome, keep writing and plz don't keep me waiting for long, u know u stopped at a very wrong point 😉

Loads and loads of love sweetheart,

Anum ❤️

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PrincessAshVik

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Posted: 8 years ago

#206

That was a lovely update Lara!!

It was AMAZING reading Shravan's POV after ages!!! His thoughts, His feelings and desires, his emotions, his guilt everything was so well-written!! I Loved every bit of it!!!

My favourite parts would be: MY Sumo!! (Haha I loved how possessive he became!) And the last scene!! So much happened in it!! Beautiful!!!

Thanks for the PM!! Please update soon.

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Castile2

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Posted: 8 years ago

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It has been already established before that whatever Shravan feels, its always in extreme.

He never does coy. He never underplays his emotions.

I thought his feelings here ran deep. Never realized the depth of them, though.

It is perfectly normal to get attracted to a woman and harbor intimate feelings for her. Justified even, when the woman happens to be your childhood love and your wife.

What is astounding here is Shravan's self-control! Not for himself but for her.

Her safety. Her mental well-being.

Shravan acknowledges all this and is ready to live in (sexual) frustration rather than scaring and scarring her for life with his lust.

For a man, this is a humongous task. A nearly impossible feat.

But he is ready to endure all this. Just for her.

Suman

A woman tried and tested by destiny.

Weathering the trials and tribunals of wicked life all by herself.

Broken and left by her dearest ones. First her parents. Then her Shravan.

But she gathered herself and stood again. But barely so.
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These two put together are the epitome of damaged imperfections.

But what others fail to see is that, they are each others only home.

Their only respite from the world with which they are constantly at a battle.

Respite from their battles within and among themselves.

I just wish to see them supporting, healing and salvaging each other from their demons.

Again a heart touching piece from you. May many more such come our way.

Regards
Cas

P.S. Just loved your Pushkar ❤️. Shravan's little wife is loved by his brother after all. So get used to it!

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Lubna

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Posted: 8 years ago

#208

Speechless. No words. Just awesome, you are such a brilliant writer Lara. Shravan's pov was much needed. It makes everything much clear now. Thanks for this beautiful update. Don't make us wait for long. Update next part soon, with some impending romantic moments.

Lubna.