FF Bitter Sweet Symphony#Thread 3: Epilogue on#Thread4 link on pg1 - Page 23

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Posted: 8 years ago
Hey Lara,,,amazing chappy as usual thanks for the pm...it's so truly awesome to read abt their pain and Shravan s point of view...absolutely amazing chapter...love violetgirl
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Posted: 8 years ago
I just love the update, Lara!
Naanu was bang on: Shravan Malhotra was always the single biggest threat to Sumo's mighty shell...
Also loved the way Pushkar pounced on Shravan as the lingerie spilled out of the shopping bags 😆 and the way the suave Shravan Malhotra's fangs came out at his little brother the moment he heard him say "My Sumo"... Awww... the chashmish inside this man is so adorable..

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Posted: 8 years ago
Amazing and a sensational one!!! Emotions of Shravan have been brought out so nicely!!!The misunderstandings clearing, Hope Shraman will be happily together ever after!!!! Waiting for Sumo's POV...
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: anum20jamali

Hi Lara!!

I was the 1st to res, but got so late in commenting. Sholly!!

Hi! I'm Sorry too! I've replied even more late than u. 😳

I love each n every chapter dat u write 😊 dis 1 didn't hv much of Shraman in it, but my my, d revelations wer shocking 😲 dat bloody asshole Khurana, using his wife's weakness to his advantage 😡 I m so waiting for Shravan and Sumo as well as Sakshi and meethi to thrash him left Nd right and not to forget, police's dandas too, he drives me mad wid rage 😡

Don't worry, dear. He'll get everything that he deserves. 😉

The tea party was funny as well as disgusting wen it comes to d food items 😆 Kamini deserved d "in ur face" reply by our gutsy Sumo 👏 And now Sumo is wid Sakshi. Yay!! Hope she takes Shravan's help too, protective Shravan is alwaz an amazing treat

You'll definitely get protective Shravan either way. 😃

And coming to our Shraman scene, d gifts ❤️ his notes "because I have all rights wife- ur husband" Awww!!! And their much awaited intimacy 😳 I can't wait Lara. Plz kasar puri karna, jo bhi show me nai mila, sab Dying to read it. Plz plz update dis extra soon 😊

Thanks a lot!🤗

Lots of love and hugs,
Anum ❤️

Love and hugs to you too, Anum. ❤️

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Nirvrithi

I am the laziest reader ever..thats the only reason for not commenting earlier.. this is my most fav ff.. i stalk it everyday.. and my fav line from this chapter is.. because I have all rights,wife... I just can imagine it happening...

Nivi


But I'm glad you commented now. You've made me so happy. 🤗
Thanks a lot, Nivi!
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: orion23

RES!!😛

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Lara! Lara! Lara!
What have you done?
Why would you torment me so?
I feel like a 4 year old before whom a massive candy was dangled and then she was told it ain't for her
If you describe it like that - it really sounds like torture.😆 I can almost see that 4 year old kid's cute face fall in sadness. 😭


This would be a test of patience honestly!
You'll be at the receiving end of my impatience though, be prepared 😎
Thankfully, I updated fast enough already. Bach gayi main... phew...😛


To the update we shall go now..
Love the halloween party!
So well written were the details I could see it all happening..
Poor guards!
Sumo's reply to Kamini! Paisa wasool..
I shit you not I read and reread and reread that part, laughed maniacally and memorised it! I will use it some day to shut some d**k head up!
Let me know when you do that.😃
I've already used a lighter version of such a dialogue, the result was an almost fist fight between ladies. 🤣 Me vs. enemy.😈
So, be prepared.😆


Sakshi poor lady. I felt for her.. Khurana needs to rot in hell. Promise me he will!
Sumo will help her, I'm not sure if that's a very good idea? Khurana is the devil himself, I'm scared for Sumo, please let it be alright...
Of course, it is and is not a good idea at the same time.
But let me tell yaa, Khurana wouldn't know what's coming his way...😎

And what do I say about the last part? Been in daze since.
Shravan the doting loving husband!!
Rain of gifts! Love!
Dangling red lace! I love even more!
Those lines in a raspy voice, I can't begin to tell you the feels!
And there broke my dream!
It's my favourite part, its continuation will be my favourite part in the next!
Please Please do not keep us waiting long!
Even I could not wait to updt, see..., I updated. 😃

Thank you for this one!
Loved it!
Until next time🤗
Thank you so much, Zoya!
Your comments always make my day. Love you.❤️

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Posted: 8 years ago
Amazing update... Loved it completely knowing everything from shravan's POV much needed..nanu is amazing as always nd pushkar is true friend to sumo but a bit irritating for shravan
Eagerly waiting for next update...plz update soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
A message popped up in my gmail. chapter 33- Shravan"s POV, i was super happy. I clicked on the link and Viola, what do I see? Finally mera Number aaa gaya. I get a dedication...
i am not a person who can express myself in long comments. Honestly i am at a loss of words. First from the chapter, second from the dedication. Thank you, thank you so much. Thank you for remembering.

The entire chapter, d ShraMan conversation, the pushku conversation , everything. ...finally they open their hearts.. I wish they confess too. R they going too? Or u are going to keep it open ended so that u can bring in insecurity card later on..
I can't wait to read more...


Love
Shal
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Posted: 8 years ago
It was just mind blowing chap... 🤗
Shravan so far didn't know why Sumo didn't come to meet him library after the school... After Nanu told him about it he came to know... Poor guy he just dead out of his guilt... That he was hating her all the years without any her mistakes... 😭

So he just ran off to London to control his emotions & harmones... Poor guy he couldn't control his desires for her... Wanting her in his life so badly...

So finally we got Shraman's romance...🤪 Poor Shravan trying hard to control his hormones since so long... Finally he surrendered himself infront of his lady love... & his dialogues ""that's what I had run like hell... You make me want you so badly... I don't wish to stop""... Shravan's face was worth watching when Sumo told him ""Don't stop""...Finally Sumo gave him the permission for that he was craving since long... Now no looking back...


Update soon dear...

Thanx for the PM


Edited by vimikrao - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
Fantastic update once again...
Its just not sumo but sharavan also opened himsellf... beautifully written section on their emotional states...
Shravan unbridled desire that just want to make sumo completely and unconditinally his...


Really really loved the update... awaiting for sumo pov ...
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Lots and lots of sharavan and sumo hotness in next update...
Edited by mogu_togu - 8 years ago

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