ff-kuch to hua hai (part 20+21-end)

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Posted: 17 years ago
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hi guys!!!!! its my first ever ff and i truly dedicate it to my dear frnd mahima!!!!!(minku)

thanx for supportin me always and heres the intro wid part 1

kuch to hua hain

intoduction:

jai: cool handsum rich and laadla of the house. can do anythin for his pa and aims to be like him one day! he's a flirt and his parents are ram and krishna

bani: rich pretty bubbly types and "bhav bahut khati hai" type! parents are rajesh and sushma

part 1:

a grand house is shown. a lady is shown andshe shouts - bani... jaldi kar beta!! shaadi ke liye der ho rahi hain

(bani comes down and she has worn a beautiful red salwaar kameez)

sush(ma)- apni best frnd ki shaadi mein salwaar kameez pahente hai!! ja saari pahenke aa

bani- c'mon ma! tumlogo ki sari ki generation gayi!

sush-pata nahi tera pati tujhe kaise jelenga!!

bani - o please!!! im still in college! ab chale!!!(they go to the shaadi hall which is decorated beautifully)

(on seein rano)b- hi.........! apne pati se to mila!

(rano laughs and) r - khud itna late aayi to main kya karu? ab reception mein milna!

b - ooof! yeh marriages!! btw jiju ke jute to main aur pia hi churenge!!!par woh hain kahan????

meanwhile a cool young dude enters in sherwani and sum1 calls him. he looks around and he is none other than jai!!!

j - arre aunty aap! kahaan hain saahil!

aunty(saahil's mom) - beta woh tayaar ho raha hain!!! (sum1 calls her and she excuses herself and goes) jai's parents r busy talkin wid others!

just then he hears sum grls chattin"joote to hum hi choorayenge" "haan lekin ....."

and sum1 patts him at the back and he sees that its pushkar!!!!

p- tu yahaan kya kar raha hai?? lemme guess kadkiyon pe line maar raha hain/??

j laughs and tells him wot he had heard! both go inside the room where they were talkin and there stands piya and bani!

jai - oooooo!!! to tum ho! well apna plan bhul jao kyunki joote hum chori karenge!!

(bani gets frustrated and pia just stares at him. shes like ' o god wot a guy!!')

b- oh yeah! joote to hum chori karenge!!akhir tum logo ko kya zaroorat hai??? paise to kama te hi ho!(actually the jiju has to pay the one who has stolen his shoes and only then can he get them back)

'huum to rahe nadan!' (bani)

j- o! nadan loko ko aise khel nahin khel ne chahiyen! ja bachcha beth ja! (push was also busy starin at pia who was still starin jai)

b - dekho tum..

'tum kya??'

'tum....' (and he goes neare to bani and bani feelin awkward steps behind and -

"aaaaaaaaaaa!! dumb u stamped on my feet!-pia

b- sorry

j-woh to tumhe hona hi padenga!!!!

b- listen main tumhe nahin...

j- dekhte hain kisme kitna hain dum!

b-dekhte hain kaun kise kahenga 'sorry'

(and they both go away and their frnds follow them)

pia- kya cool guy tha yaar!!! aur tu hain ki ....

bani - ab bhashan mat de!!!

(in another corner) p - arre yaar tu bhi na! jitne dena usse!!

j - arre yaar! tu samajta nahin hain!!! haar ho ya jeet i don care lekin woh ladki..........awesum!

aur agar woh jiti tomere saamne apni jeet ki taarif karne aayengi aur agar haari to main uske paas jaunga so just chill! jeet to meri hi hain!!!

p - arre woh dusri ladki bhi to hain whose a lot intrested in you!!! lekin chalenga! tu usse mere liye chhodde!

j - sure!! waise bhi mujhe woh ladkiyaan pasand nahi jo mujh pe marti ho1 mujhe unko irritate karke mera deewana banana zyada achha lagta hain!!! (to himself) dekhte hain aage kya hota hain! (and he remembers bani and.........

i hope you've enjoyed this part and i'll post the other part as soon as possible! till then pls leave your comments and ideas !!!!

LUV,

PREETI!!!

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Posted: 17 years ago
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pls continue soon ..

wowo jai si being soo cool ..

ab bani aur jai ki takkar dekhni hai

👏

davia

Edited by davia389 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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😆 😆 😆
pehli part mei hi takkar
plz cont soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
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heyyy preeti,

sowwie man i am replyin late but i have some major trouble going on so....

thanxxx so much for d dedication i am flattered 😆 😆

gr888 begining dear 👏 post d nxt prt soon so we can know wat happens nxt...kon jeetega b or j???

luv ya
mahima
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Posted: 17 years ago
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pehle part mein hi mere hosh uda diya yaar. it was awesome.
do continue soon and jaldi karna.
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Awesome start
liked it.
plz cont. soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
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hey preeti
that was reallie.. good
please continue soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
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love your story!!! Plz do continue!!
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Posted: 17 years ago
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ok now for part 2!! thnx for all your replies and hope you njoy this part too!!!!!!😳

part 2:

bani is busy doin some work while pia sees the shoes and goes towards it , holds it, when suddenly jai cums there

j (innocently)- hiiiiiiii!! wots this pretty lady doin here??? (seein the shoes) arrre tum in jooto ke maamlo mein kyun pad rahi ho??? tumhare pyaare haath kharaab ho jayenge!!

(seein jai and his hot style, pia's hold on the shoes losen up and the shoes fall down)

j - to....chale!!

(while they were walkin,jai cleared his voice and there came pushkar and took away the shoes)

soon they come at some corner and

j- pia dekho mere dost mujhe bula rahe hain. i'll leave !

(pia holds his hand)p - no you cant go!!

j (astonished by her behavior) - arre leave me lemme go!!

p - nahi tum kahin nahi jaa rahe!!!

j ( mutters) - mar na hai kya?!

p - wot??

j - ummm.. kuch nahi ok bye!!!

(leaves his hand with a lot of force and goes)

j (to himself) - ajib hai yaar!!!

meanwhile bani cums to pia

b - joote liye??

p - haan woh.....(remembers everything) o god...!!!!

b - kya hua???

pia tells her everything

b - tu bhi na!! ek kaam thik se nahi hota!! woh ladka..... kya naam hain uska???

p - jai!! rano ne bataaya tha ki uske honewale pati ka best frnd hain!!

b - tu na! ab shaadi honewali hai! joote kaise layenge??? bas us jai...

p - dekh mere jai ko kuch mat bol!!

b-tu aur tera jai! oooof!!!!

just after a few sec the marriage begins! j looks at b with looks ki "dekho mainne joote le liye"

b sees this look,gets angry and walks upto him!

b - itna gurroor mat karo! kab kya hojaye kise pata??

j - woh main nahi jaanta lekin tum aaj itni s**y lag rahi ko ki na jaane kya ho jaye???

b - tum na...

j - main kya???(goes nearer)

b - tum.....

j - tum jaaongi nahi to phir....

b - ooof!! (she was abt to leave when j holds her hand , goes nearer to her face and whispers in her ears " gussa karna buri baat he bachcha!!"

b - tum muje bachcha mat bulao!

j - haath chhodo varna log kya sochege???

( b snatches her hand out from his and goes away)

j smiles to himself.

soon the marraige was over and when the shoes were asked for, j and pushkar gave the shoes. b looked at pia angrily who whispered ' sorry'

j came to b and

j - woh kya kaha tha tumne???kab kya ho jaye kise pata???

b- main kaam kar rahi thi isliye....

(then b's mom comes and tells them to drop SR to the hotel where they were gonna spend their first night!

b4 bani cud speak a wd j said "sure aunty!!!"

after a few minutes they were all in a car! b was red wid anger while j was on cloud nine and suddenly r says" bani tune bataaya nahin humaari jodi kaisi hain???"

b - definitely acchi hain! tum dono bachpan ke dost ho aur mujhe to pehle se hi pata tha ki tum dono ke bich kuch to he!!!

j - u cant b sure! kab kya hojaye kise pata??

b - tumhaari problem kya hain??

(rano , not knowin the reason y b suddenly got angry on j , says- ) tujhe kya hua?? teri kya problem hain???

sahil - donno wrry! mujhe pata hain kya problem hai! right jai??

jai and s smile at each other,r sits being confused and b is angry as b4!!!

soon they rech at the hotel and SR go to their booked room. when jai and bani were abt to leave,j realised the car wasnt wkin!!!

seein him tensed , b - kya hua jai??

j - tumhe mera naam kaise pata?? tum ne to apna naam tak nahi battaya!

b- bani!! ab bataonge kya hua!!

j - breakdown!

b - ab kya kare??? (looks around) yahaan to koi garrage bhi nahi hain?

j - main hoon na!

b - ooof!! b serious and ..... (looks at the hotel and says) chalo yahin jaate hai jahaan rano aur saahil hai

j - sure ??

b - (seein that look in his eyes) alag alag kamre mein!!!

j smiles and both go in the hotel!

there were no 2 rooms in the hotel and as there wasnt any other hotel to live in they finally decided to stay together for a night!!!

hope you like it!!! pls,.................................... reply and do comment!!!!!!!😃

😳 luv,

preeti!!

Edited by *Piku* - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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wowowo it rockign lekin woo pia😡🤢use to mein😡

lekin the joote sceene was funny.. 😆

pls contineu soon haial in hotel room suhaag raat ksiki hogi yaar?jb ka phir rano aur shail ki?

ya phir ksiki bhi nhai....

😆

pls cotnineu soon

davia

Edited by davia389 - 17 years ago

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