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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hello...i m new here...i m writing a fan fiction with my fav character dev and sonakshi...i hope you all like it...so here it goes.
Dev(D), sonakshi(S), elena(E) and Vickey (V) are on their honeymoon in London. Its their last day there.Dev and Sonakshi are at their hotel room.Dev is busy with his laptop on the bed and sonakshi is brushing her hair.its 2 pm in London.
S: What are you doing?
D: I am checking some official mails. I have to go to work from tomorrow na!
S: 'Hmm..but not here' and she folds the laptop and put it on a side table. Then she sits infront of him and asked him ' so how do you like your honeymoon Mr. Dixit?

D: He pulled her close and said 'do you want to know verbally or you want some action?'
S: 'meaning?
'D: Then he kisses her passionately on her lips and said 'action like this!'
Suddenly there is knock on the door. Sona get up to open but pulled back by her hubby. He made puppy face and said
D: 'Don't go. Must be waiter. Let me finish the task at hand.'with lusty eyes.
S: She kisses him lightly on his lips and said ' coming back'
Dev put his head down and give up. Sona opens the door and its Elena.

E : 'Can we talk?
'Thinking about dev's desire for a second sonakshi said yes.
She : ' I am going with Elena. Will be right back. You can do your office work!
'D:'dhatariki' in mute tone and loudly said 'ok'.
Elena and Sona come to the hotel lobby and seated down.
E: ' so all packing done?'
S: ' ya. Almost.so what are you want to talk about?
'E: Nothing.just wanted spend some time with you before going back.
'S: Oh..and smiles.she said 'Thank you Ele. If you weren't forced we couldn't come here

E: Oh.don't say thanks to me. You are my sister and I love you.
S: Really after so much avoidance from Dev, I thought I am going to lose him. After our marriage I longed to spend alone time with dev. But every time he prioritize his family. I am not saying that it was wrong but I felt miserable. Every time he broke his promise a piece of my heart broke and I cannot describe how much pain it gave. And there is tears in her eyes.
E: Hmm...i know now. But you are very storng. If I were in place of you I would have killed vickey. But I know you love jiju very much.
S: I don't know about how much but every time the thought of dev being away from me killed me. It feels like the world has no charm and I am all alone in this world. I can bear every possible thing but not an inch far from dev

E : Ok don't get emotional. Its all happy here. And you got 7DAYS with your 'Dev'.
S: Hmm...hmmm...and these seven days gave me more strength to fight for my life 'Dev

When sona and ele were talking dev came to ask sona about packing his newly brought clothes. But hearing sona's words he stopped and listened. He also have water in his eyes.
To be continued if you all like
...

Dev was little shocked then... But suddenly he began to feel empty..he began to walk slowly; holding the straight path..while walking he reached a garden close to the hotel..where there were many people, children were playing; Some peole were walking, some were chatting..but he didnot heared the sound of them all..he was thinking only about Sonakshi.

Sonakshi suffered so much to get him..In fact, both of them had to suffer..Dev thought that after the wedding all will be all right..Sona will bring happiness into his life all around ..But Sonakshi is unhappy ..and She can told this to Elena but not to him..Why??! Where did he make mistake in love?!!
..They were good friends before marriage..they shared everything..Now she hardly says anything at openly..And he did not even notice that he feel now.

He was feeling guilty.In his thought he went and sat down in a bench..and he closed his eyes..He remembered the day on which he was put to sleep Sona on his lap forcibly ..all were out that day.and he came to collect his file..Sona had been talking to him in his room with his photo. ' how cute she was looking then '..He cleared his throat when she suddenly startled ..Photo frame was about to fall, caught on his hand..'Sona's hand touches my hand.. in the bustling my heart was like... ' Then he hugged her hard..Sona was shy,From there she began to go..Then he grabbed her hand, pulling her along..Sona fell into his arms ..He said, "where are you going? Nobody in the house, will not you love me ? " Sona looked into the eyes..and said " Mr. Dixit??!!"..he said 'what??' Let's sit here and he went and sat on the bed..You put your head in my lap..She was so surprised at what he has said but does that what he told..Dev said playing with her hair ' Do you know how much I'm desperate to pass a full day with you?! I want to see how you sleep ,How you look when you brush your teeth ,When brushing your hair, with falling hair, how much you get worried ..really how much food you actually eat! To this Sona chuckled..I want to know everything..Sona was listening to all silently..Then he said, 'When you come in this house rather then from that day I will keep you like a queen.You know from the moment I will never let you go! I love you too much.., She had tears in her eyes...Dev panicked and asked what happened?..Sona said ' nothing,,I love you too and kissed his hands..'
Dev suddenly opened his eyes and said to himself ' I then broke a promise..Instead of placing her like a queen,I made her a princess bound in gold chains'..' Why I've done this!!!...He wept and put his hand in the bench and keep it u rubbing ..

..He felt something under his palms..he notied that two names were engraved on the bench..EDWARD LOVES LISA-- TOGETHER FOREVER...he began to think..
Seeing him looking at the names an English man said to him that the names were of two lovers..who loved each other so much but destiny was never on their side and the lady died four years ago..in her memory Edward made that bench and engraved their names on it.' Its really sad love is so much pain' saying this the man walked away!

Hearing this Dev felt sudden pain in his heart..there are so many who never got their love in one incarnation but him being lucky got his love by his side..and what is he doing?..wasting it!!!... No, from now on he will never bring tears in Sona's eyes and he never allow to anyone to do that...its a promise to his own self...




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Posted: 8 years ago
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Very nice start...Sounds interesting
do continue
Posted: 8 years ago
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Its very good yar... do cont. soon dearr...

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