my new ff part 2.AR made 4 eachoder

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Posted: 18 years ago
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hi guys ...................... i myself enjoy a lot reading fanfics n 2 day decided 2 make 1 of my own............... so here it goes.........

part 1

its gonna be ridz's bday d next week..................

everybody cums 2 d hospital as usual............evry 1 is dere in d locker room except 4 ridz..............so anjali tells every1 bout ridz's upcoming bday...............atul very excitedly replies"are wah............... ridz ka bday hai wednesday ko!!!!!!!!!!!ye to baut achi bat hai...........kyu na hum log kuch kare uske liye"

anjali"to main tumhe ye bat aur kis liye bata rahi hu dr.atul?"

atul saying 2 sapna jali anjali kahin ki......

armaan thinking bout ridz n smilling n his background muzic is being played..............n den he says "hum sab log basket ke liye 1 surprise party prepare karte hai"

anjali"so dr. atul.........main aise ideas expect kar rahi hu................hai apke paas aisa kuch"

atul"ha hai na........... pichli bar ki tarah is bar bhi ridz ko party mein armaan hi lekar aega"

listening dis armaan bcums quite happy n kisses atul...........atul says chi chi ...........kya kar raha hai armaan>.....n armaan laughs n thnx atul.........

sapna"kyu na hum log ridz ke liye party beech side rakhe................aur sare arrangements main aur anjali kar lenge"

anjali"ya............gud idea"

atul"fir main kya karunga"

sapna"tum............tum...........flowers ka arrangement karna.................vaise bhi flowers ki tumse achi knowledge kie hogi"

atul "ha to fir thik hai"

armaan"aur main basket ko launga.........😊(thinking bout ridz n becuming very happy) aur sare guests ko invite karunga"

n every 1 says ok den armaan asks"vaise basket hai kaha?"

sapna"vo kal rat ko uski nite duty thi na to vo bas ati hi hogi apni shift khatam karke........."

armaan"(feeling bad 4 ridz ) n says"to jab uski shift khatam kab hogi"

n den ridz enters........

anjali"hi ridzi...............kaise ho? baut thaki hui lag rahi ho...........tum ghar jakar aram karo main aj ke liye tumhare cases attend kar lungi"

ridz says .........thnx di par uski koi jarurat nahi hai..........main ghar jakar 1 hour mein vapas ajaungi........

armaan "ha thik hai................ (every 1 luks at him)nahi matlab tab tak tumhare case main aur anji dekh lenge"

ridz "thnx armaan"

armaan smilling at ridz n wen ridz turns 2 laeve he holds her dupatta...........

den every 1 leaves

ridz turns 2 takout d dupatta frm armaaan's shirt which armaan has put janke in hisbutton.........she cums 2 take out d duppata

armaan touches her hand n den ridz luks at him.............dey both start luking at each oder.........armaan holds ridhima's hand .........she den realizes n tries 2 remove her dupatta frm armaan's shirt............her hair cums on her eyes ..........armaan sees dat n tries 2 remove her hairs frm his hands very gently .................she is buzy in removing d dupattan armaan buzy at admiring d beauty of riddima n luking at her in a very romantic way..............n den d dupatta cums out n ridzi leaves..............

n armaan says tum itni khoobsurat kyu ho ridhimma ..................kahin tumhe meri hi nazar na lag jae............... i love u ridhimma............. n den he says nahi ridhimma ko kabhi kisi ki nazar na lage" n leaves

dr. keerti standing behind listens everythng n smiles................ n she decides 2 help armaan armaan n ridhimma 4 patching up their relationship............

its d common room n cricket match is going on n all d docters r dere in d room 2 watch d final moments of d match............ suddenly by mistake d channel gets changed by sum1 n d news channel cum on.............. d news reporter says dat due 2 sum match fixings n everythng of dat soughts d pakistanis n indians are very angry n r fighting wid each oder(d cricket match was between pakistan n india)n den armaan puts back d cricket chaanel n sees d match has also been stopped............. dey put back news channel.............. d reporter is on d roads of mumbai n says dat here is a curfue like situation................ any1 who is cuming on d roads is being killed b d pakistanis............n den it is annonced dat all d interns except 4 dr.armaan hav 2 report 2 dr.keerti bcoz dr.armaan hav already been given his duty..............every 1 leaves..............

armaan is in d common room................ he is still watching d tv news.......... he suddenly remembers dat ridhimma also had left 30 mins be4 only n it takes atleast an hour 4 her 2 reach at her home............he tries 2 call ridhimma but she doesnt pics d phone up..................armaan becums very tensed..............n wen armaan finally decides 2 go n check 4 her..........he suddenly sees sum auto being put on fire n he sees d same dupatta which ridhimma was wearing..........

hey guys...........plz dnt get me wrong........ i was not at all ameing 2 hurt any 1 of urs feelings.........even if den any1 of u felt really bad bout dat,den im really sorry.............i promise it wont happen at all.............so nw widout any mistakes here cums 2nd part of d story...........

PART 2

armaan saw ridz's dupatta.........he was shocked..........n widout waisting any time he quickly confirmed d place of accident frm d tv n with his eyes full of tears he left d hospital in search of ridhimma..........armaan while going saw anji n told her bout all dis.............. she was shocked n screamed at armaan dat he is lying n it cudnt be ridz............she was mourning badly ..............n kept saying dat nthng can happen 2 my ridz.............armaan asked sister lovely 2 calm her down n not 2 inform any1 bout dis so dat d dr.s dnt get distracted n can take care of d patients properly.........

armaan went 2 search 4 ridz in his car.............he was crying very badly..........tears cud not stop cuming out of his eyes...............den on radio it was declared dat d match fixings n all were just sum silly rumours spread by sum1..............n d situation is under control now.............armaan after hearing dis said 2 himself dat"agar meri ridhimma ko kuch bhi hua to main use chodunga nahi jisne ye sab batein felai hai"n tears continuosly kept cuming out frm his eyes...........

armaan thought in his mind of all d nice moments he had spent wid ridz 2day............n suddenly he rememberd dat 2 day he said dat"meri ridhimma ko kahin meri hi nazar na lag jae" n he hit his head hard on starring wheel n said dat"maine aisa kyu kiya, ridhimma ko meri hi nazar lagi hai" n den anoder thought came 2 his mind dat if his luv is true den nthng will happen 2 his ridhimma............

now he had reached d place..............he got out of his car.............n saw dat d auto was still burning n d police had surrounded d place............he came out n in a shking voice asked dat"isme.....isme 1 ladki thi..........vo ...............vo kaisi hai .....????????kahan hai??????????"

policce"dekhiye mr. ye ye baut serious tha............is auto mein jo bhi log the ........afsos ab nahi rahe........sabhi log mare gae.........mera matlab vo auto vala khud aur vo ladki jiski ap bat kar rahe hai"

armaan pulled d police man frm his collar n said"ye kya bakvaas kar rahe hai ap? khuch bhi bol rahe hai" he left his collar n was sitting down n crying very badly..........he was holding ridhimma's dupatta in his hand.........."

den suddenly a little boy came out frm back of a small cart n said 2 armaan"bhaiya...............ap is dupatte vali ;ladki ko dhund rahe hai"

armaan "ha.............ha mughe pata hai vo abhi zinda hai/..........usko kuch nahi ho sakta.......tumhe pata hai na vo kaha hai?plz mughe bata do"

boy"ha chalo mere sath" d boy takes armaan behind d cart.............ridhimma was lying dere .............her head n her arms were bleeding badly armaan tuk ridz's face in his hands n kissed her may times.......he put his chin on her head n cried n said"main jnta tha tumhe kuch nahi hoga"

rihimma was half conscious n said arm..........armaan.......tum agae.........mughe pata tha tum aoge " she said n became unconscious........armaan tuk ridhimma in his arms her n put her in his car.............d boy was also injured so armaan talso asked him 2 cum wid him.........

ridz was on d back seat n d boy n armaan on d front seats.............armaan asked"ye sab hua kaise?'

boy"vo sab log didi ke piche piche bhag rahe the, didi chup chap ai aur mere sath akar chup ke baith gai............vo auto jo jal gaya usme 1 aunty thi jo baut bimar thi .........aur vo log ne auto ko rok kar rakha tha isliye auto ja bhi nahi pa raha tha"

maenwhile armaan was driving n also luking at ridz frm d mirror wid tears in his eyes boy"ddidi ko maine baut roka par vo us aunty ko bachane chali gai.........didi unhe lekar hi arahi thi ki unka dupatta auto mein atak gaya unhone aunty ko auto mein hi bithaya aur apna dupatta utar ne lagi......tabhi kuch logo ne auto pe vo goli chala di jise aag lag jati hai..................vo aunty aur autovala to mar gaya par didi bhar unhe ki vaja se bach...........par didi ko jab main dhire dhire laraha tha us cart ke piche tab didi behoshi mein bhi yahi bol rahi thi ki vo aunty ............vo aunty....."

armaan "luking at ridz n crying said"aisi hi hai meri basket kabhi apni fikar nahi karti...........khud pareshani mein hokar bhi dusro ki fikar karti hai"

dey reach d hospital n armaan takes hr inside d hospital.......he ask 1 of d sister 2 call 4 d strecher n he puts ridhimma dere n asksd ister also 2 take care of d boy n admit him in d general ward............armaan n dr. keerti operates ridz n ridz operation was successful...............but ridhimma was still critical as she had lost a lot of blood...............

dr.keerti asked armaan 4 O+ blood group.........armaan said dr. mera bhi blood group O+hi hai ........main dunga ridz ko blood..........dr.keerti smiled n said jaldi dr.

now ridhimma was under observation n armaan was her dr. now.............which dr keerti hai had done so dat armaan n ridz cud cum closer.........armaan decided dat he wud stay wid ridz 4 d whloe night........be4 going all d interns came 2 meet her n anji crying n said"meri pyaari ridz...............baut achi ho tum...............kyu kiya tumne aisa............n kisses her on her 4head........agar tumhe kuch ho jata to" sapna said"ridz to aj baut lucky hai ki use itni asani se O+mil gaya.......varna to baut mushkil se ye blood group avaliable hota hai"atul smiling at anji n said"tum itni achi ho mughe to pata hi nahi tha..............tumhare itne kadak chehre ke piche itna komal sa dil hai ye to meine socha hi nahi tha"

anji was still hugging ridz................den armaan said"ab tum log jao ......... main hu ridhimma ke sath.......use aram karne do"

sapna "lekin armaan .......tumne bhi to ise blood donate kiya hai...........aur kuch khaya bhi nahi hai na aram kiya hai..........tumhe bhi to blood donate karne ke bad blood chahiye"
ridz was cuming in hosh dhire dhire n heard dis..................but she didnt say anythng............coz she wanted every1 2 go n she wanted 2 tell armaan dat she luvs her.....................she felt like crying after hearing all dis.........coz vo armaan ko baut galat smaghti thi.............

ever1 leaves..............n ridhimma still acts as if she is sleeping n not in hosh..............armaan sits near her puts his hand on her headn kisses her on her 4head.........he den says"agar aj kuch ho jata tumhe meri jaan to main apne apko kabhi maaf nahi kar pata /.............kyuki tumhe meri hi nazar lagi thi"

ridz slowly opens her eyes ........armaan was hugging ridhimma n his head was on her shoulder so he cudn't see har face n armaan was crying............

ridz holds armaan's hand n he gets up n says"tum ...........tum thik ho na ridhimma"

ridhimma luking at armaan wid tears in her eyes n sweaps armaan's tears frm har hand n says"kyu armaan?kyu tumhe meri itni fikar hai"

armaan holding ridhimma's hand n kisses her on her hand n says"kyuki main tumse apni jaan se bhi jada pyaar karta hu"

ridz puylls armaan n hugs him n says"main bhi tumse baut pyaar karti hu armaan ...............main tumhare bina nahi ji sakti"n kisse him on his cheeks

armaan very happy but still wid tears in his eyes says"rihimma agar tumhe aj kuch ho jata to?" n kisses her

ridz"armaan tumhare hote hue mughe kuch nahi ho sakta"

dey both hug each oder n armaan kisses ridhimma many times on her face

den suddenly ridz's heart beats becoms fast n she was unable 2 breathe..........

hope u ppl like it...................written it wid lots of luv 4 u ppl n 4 apne armaan n ridz ..................

plz do comment!!!!!!!!

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Posted: 18 years ago
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gr8 part peppie. so many luv scences 😍😍😍.plz plz continue soon. i'm already getting addicted 2 ur ff.

Love Iram😃
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Posted: 18 years ago
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peppie tat was really awesome i liked the part very much do continue soon................ 👏 👏 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
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woww1ont wiat fr the nxt part.
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Posted: 18 years ago
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good stuff, but just one point, when someone donates blood he doesn't need to be given blood too. if that were the case, the chian would go on endlessly. the human body can replenish a cerain amount of blood itslef and only that amoutn is taken during a blood donation....
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Nice pal.. keep it goin :)
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Posted: 18 years ago
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guys plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz do let me know...............if u really like it den onlu i wud continue it!!!!!!!!!
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Posted: 18 years ago
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i luveddddddddd it birillant update 😳 u need a huge aroud of 👏
plz contd...... 😉
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Posted: 18 years ago
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hey luv ur ff
plzzz update soon
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Posted: 18 years ago
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ur fanfic is really gud.. awesome!!!

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plz continue soon! 😳

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