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Posted: 8 years ago
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Part 2

Nandini's photoshoot finish and she was about to go but Manik hold her hand... Manik was their in bike waiting for nandini
Manik: aa bhet jaa
Nandini: nahi bhetna tere sath kahi
Manik: Teri nautanki khatam nahi hui aab Bhi...
He drag her to corner

Manik: kya pagalpan laga rakha hai
Nandini: shadi karega yaa nahi
Manik: shadi shadi shadi sala bheja kharab kar diya hai, tujhe pata hai nah Chor hu mein, har mahine jail jata hu, koi theekana nahi hai mera, aaj hu kal nahi kab koi aake thok de pata nahi

Nandini shouts: theek hai bol kitne time aur jiyega, ek saal, ek mahine, ek hafta, ek din... Jitne din bhi jiyega mere sath jee... Mujhe apna bana k jee... Jab mein dam todu toh Teri ho kar todu, 12 saal Ki thi jab yeah sapna dekha tha... Aaj tak kisi aur chune nahi diya... Meri har saas mein, meri har dhadkan mein, meri jism k rom rom mein sirf tu hai, sirf Tera haq hai... Aur tu sirf mera hai... Nandini sirf Manik Ki hai aur Manik sirf nandini ka...

Manik cupped her face and wiped his tears
Manik: kyu shadi karna chahata hai iss Chor se
Nandini: sala tube light ek ladki gala phad phad k Bol rahi hai shadi kar shadi kar, aur tujhe abhi tak nahi pata woh kyu chillla rahi hai
Manik: tune kabhi bola hi nahi
Nandini: ishq ho gaya hai tujh se... Dil Chor kahika
Nandini just slammed her lips on his. Their lips r saying untold love to each other. Marking each other with that passionate kiss.

"Tring tring"
Nandini: Teri ghanti ko bhi abhi bajna tha
Manik take his phone

Manik: haa Cabir Bol thik hai mein aata hu
Nandini: jana jarori hai
Manik: aaj ek bhaut bada maal hath aaya hai, agar aaj maut k hath se Bach gaya toh meri zindagi tere hawale... Phir jo karna hai kar lena...
Manik smooch her lips ever so lovingly...
Manik: agar mein wapas nahi aaya toh apna dhyan rakhna



Next morning
Nandini was waiting impatiently for Manik's call
Nandini: abhi tak phone nahi kiya uska phone bhi nahi lag raha hai, kaha hai tu Manik mera dil betha jaa raha hai... Suddenly she saw Cabir came running.

Nandini: Cabir tu aa gaya Manik kaha hai kabse phone kar rahi hu lag kyu nahi raha hai
Cabir: bhabhi woh Bhai...
Nandini: aage Bol kaha hai Manik
Cabir: Bhai Bhai ko maar dala...
Nandini became froze

Nandini: dekh Cabir tu mazak kar raha hai nah toh Bol de ... Manik bahar nikal agar tu mazak kar raha hai nah toh mein sach mein tujhe goli se uda dungi...
Cabir: unlogo ne maar dala Bhai ko

Suddenly nandini remember Manik's word,"mera koi thikana nahi hai aaj hu kal nahi, koi bhi aake thok dega Aur pata bhi nahi chalega."

Nandini scream and morn over her beloved
Nandini: nahi... Manikkk... Aahhhaaa... Cabir woh mujhe chod k nahi jaa sakta manikkk ... Tune wada kiya tha... Manikkk...
Suddenly she get up and ran to kitchen and get a knife.

Cabir: yeah kya kar rahi hai pagal ho gai hai
Nandini: Manik nahi toh mein jee kar kya karungi.
She was about to cut her vein suddenly strong hand pulled off the knife... Nandini turned
Nandini: Manikkk..
She ran and hugged him tight, the force was so high that Manik fall down on floor on Nandini on top of him hugging him tight.

Nandini cryingly says
Nandini: mujhe laga tu chod k chala jayega...
Cabir: Bhai aapka plan toh dhasu tha bhabhi toh ek dam flat hai aap par
Nandini heard this and get up from floor

Nandini sternly ask manik
Nandini: yeah sab plan tha
Manik: aab zindagi bhar k liye tere jail mein rhena hi toh thoda try toh banta hai
Nandini came to him with a smile and kick his MP
Manik: aaahhaaauch...
Cabir: Bhai Ki toh phati

Nandini: Teri try Ki aise Ki taisi mein apni nas kaat leti toh, pata hai kitna dard hota hai suicide karne mein
Manik: mujhe kya pata meine kabhi suicide nahi kiya hai... MP mein Marne Ki kya jarurat thi
Nandini: tune bhi mere MP ko hurt kiya
M shocked listening her

Manik: aaila Tera bhi MP hai
Nandini: ghatiya deemag!! mera MP matlab mera main part which is my heart... Mein dar gai thi...
Manik: abhi tujhe theek karta hu
He was about to kiss her suddenly nandini Palm her lips

Manik: aab kya hai
Nandini: phele propose kar
Manik: mein nahi karunga propose tere ko, Kaun ghutne mein jhuk ladki ko propose karta hai... Mere ko nahi banana apna popat

Cabir: kya Bhai sharmana chod daal, raaz dil ka khol daal, aaju baju matt dekh I love you Bol daal...
Manik pulled Nandini's neck and slammed his lips with her.

Nandini: yeah cheating hai tune propose nahi kiya
Manik: jo Cabir ne bola copy paste enter
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Finished...tell me guys how did u find this TS. Do hit LIKE and Do COMMENT [:-D]
Will be waiting to read them 😳
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Posted: 8 years ago
#62
Kya yaar,itni jaldi khatam kyun kiya story ko?Bohot accha hain.Chalo manik samajh gaya.Main to dar gayi thi manik ki khabar sun ke.I really loved is story.
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Posted: 8 years ago
#63
Awesome ending..
Love this ts..
This was completely different plot..
Thank u for pm
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Posted: 8 years ago
#64
I wish I could read more
The ending was amazing
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Posted: 8 years ago
#65
Lovely update dear
But small one
Waiting for next update
Thanks for the pm
Tc
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Posted: 8 years ago
#66
yaar it was so funny update ha ha
jo cabir ne bola copy paste 😆
baba ko kiss karne se fursat mile tab propose karenge na😆
loved it dear
thanks for pm
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Posted: 8 years ago
#67
🤣🤣 MP!! Nandu ka bhi MP hai? kya faadu tha re yeh wala Swariii!!!
But haan those lines were awesome.. Mere jism me rom rom mein bae tera haq hai❤️❤️
I toh loveeed it🤗
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Posted: 8 years ago
#68
Awesome Update love it continue soon thanks for the pm
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Posted: 8 years ago
#69
Woah nice one he he
manan r too much
thanks for pm
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Posted: 8 years ago
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