MaNan TS: Dil Chor..(Part 2-Page 10)

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Swarna

@manancraze

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Posted: 8 years ago

Huh..shayad main abhi v mermaid doll k khatam hoone ka sadme se bahar nahi ayi..😭...kya hoga mera...so maine sochaa ek aur story kyu na ho jaye..😆

This is written by rupa my frnd...and with her permission I post it on IF...😃

Let's move on to the story...😳

DIL CHOR...

SNEAK PEAK 1:

Boy 1: Bhai maa kasam bhabhi aaj ekdam tota lag rahi thi

Boy 2: kya bola

Boy 1: sorry Bhai galti se muh se nikal gaya woh kya khete hai tough slip by mistake

Boy 2: kaha par hai Teri bhabhi

Boy 1: xyz hotel

SNEAK PEAK 2:

Nandini: Manik jaa yaha se...

Manik: nah !! Man nahi hai kal se chua nahi hai tujhe...

Nandini: sirf bistar garam karne k liye chahiye toh kothe par jaa...

SNEAK PEAK 3:

Nandini: Cabir tu aa gaya Manik kaha hai kabse phone kar rahi hu lag kyu nahi raha hai

Cabir: bhabhi woh Bhai...

Nandini: aage Bol kaha hai Manik

Cabir: Bhabi..woh...Bhai ko maar dala...

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To kaisa laga yeh "PEHELI JHALAK"...😃..All I want to say...

I BELIEVE IN HAPPY ENDING...😳

Do tell me ur view about it...😃😃

INDEX:

PART 1

PART 2

Edited by manancraze - 8 years ago

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Thoshna

@21July2014

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Posted: 8 years ago

Sneak Peak 2 tak total mazedar laga.. Sneak peak 3 mein heart attack🤢

But I loved MaNanBir.. Kuch bhi these are the soul of kyy..❤️

Update sooon haan 😉congo for new story

Wah im first⭐️😛

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@dreamy_doll15

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Posted: 8 years ago

Oyeee teriii.

ye sneap peak 2 to dhamakedar
niklaa.
hahaa kya dialogue mara 😆

or manik ko mar dala 😭

Mtlb.

I too believe in happiee ending yr.
Waiting for it ...

Update soonish 😛

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Sanjida Tamanna

@tamanna121

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Posted: 8 years ago

Wow it seems interesting..
My most most fav three character of ky2 r in this story..
First sneak peak was was amazing but last one was scary..
Very very curious to know actually what happen..
Update soon.. Will be waiting..

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chocolate1234

@chocolate1234

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Posted: 8 years ago

Jhatka laga
Shock laga
Kya tha ? Story mein hoe ka murder wo bhi start hone se Pehle ya Allah heart par attack ho jayega
We believe in u
U will give us a sweet Wala jhatka
Thanks for the pm
Update soon
Keep smiling
Tc
With lots of love and hugs

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nita24

@nita24

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Posted: 8 years ago

Sounds interesting dear
Seems Different concept
I also believe in Happy ending
Waiting for story to proceed further
Thanks for the pm
Continue soon
Tc

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Satya28

@Satya28

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Posted: 8 years ago

Hmmm seems interesting. I too love happy endings. Continue soon. Congratulations and all the best for your new story😊

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Pooja2899

@Pooja2899

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Posted: 8 years ago

Interesting sneak peek!!!!
Sabki language ekdum tapori jaise lagi!!!!
according to sneak peek 2 , does manik really use nandini???????
And in d 3rd one I think cabir meant something else by that "maar dala"...or he was fooling nandini.
Curious to know d story!!!!!
cont soon & thanks for pm. :-)

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Swarna

@manancraze

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: KYYtoshRCB
Sneak Peak 2 tak total mazedar laga.. Sneak peak 3 mein heart attack🤢
But I loved MaNanBir.. Kuch bhi these are the soul of kyy..❤️
Update sooon haan 😉congo for new story
Wah im first⭐️😛

Thanks dear...😃..seems tum to sab stories main hi first commenter ho meri...😆

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Swarna

@manancraze

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Posted: 8 years ago

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Originally posted by: gtilwani45
Oyeee teriii.

ye sneap peak 2 to dhamakedar
niklaa.
hahaa kya dialogue mara 😆

or manik ko mar dala 😭

Mtlb.

I too believe in happiee ending yr.
Waiting for it ...

Update soonish 😛

Thanks for believe in me...😃

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