Mrs. & Mr. Shravan Malhotra - Thread # 1 - Now moved to Wattpad - Page 38

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Posted: 8 years ago
Congrats kis liye ya?
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Artist_Forever

I'd read half of it long ago. But now I read it again.

Marvellous!
Loved how you weaved not so significant moments as impactful. That's how life is!
Awesome!

A bit long for lazy bumps like me so I felt a tad bit off track. Nonetheless, it was amazing!😳

A bit long??🤣
It's okay ya!!
You're busy I understand😃
And thank you🤗
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Posted: 8 years ago
This part is now on Wattpad and the link for it can be found on the main page of this thread.

Cheers!
Edited by orion23 - 6 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Zo 🤗
This update was worth waiting 👏 👏 👏
I was grinning so much I wonder how my mouth is still in one piece
Is zalim duniya se chupte chupate maine padhi ye update Malik *classic nirupama Roy expressions*
Enough of my stupid rants . Let's come to the update 😆

Sumo episodes 🤣 🤣
Where do you get these ideas? 😆
Your stories have right amount of humour . We laugh at one moment n other moment We have a dreamy smile
That's what u call Zoya's effect 😎


"Two questions, why are you a gadha for marrying me and why don't you love me anymore?"

I could imagine a frustrated shravu 😆 . He must be having a hard time keeping his sanity 😆

From you don't love me to why do you love me so?? I agree she is bipolar 😆

Arey ek toh tum har baat mai mere profession pe kyun aa jaati ho? Yeh nahi aata, lawyer kaise bane? Woh bhi nahi aata lawyer kaise bane? What does packing a bag have to do with being a lwayer?"

Patni se sataya hua bechara pati😆
But I love their bickering ❤️ . They may have become husband n wife but still argue like kids 😆
# DilTohBachaHaiJi 😆

Honeymoon in London!!!
Nothing could have been better than this .
I always wanted him to show her the place where he spent a decade.

Sumo is scared of flying . How well you correlated it to the Ferris wheel incident 👏
His assurance he is there for her always ❤️

Oxford journey was so dreamy with safarnama song . Felt like watching a romantic movie
I think I'm gonna use this emoticon too often in this update 😳

Ahan Bathtub romance 😉 ... I like it!!!

Aww Grah Pravesh in London ❤️
This man is a sweetheart . I wish I could kidnap him n keep all for myself 😉
But he is already taken n many more here must be cooking the same plans as me 😆
I don't want shravan malhotra to be the reason of world war III 😆
See kitni shantipriya hoon main 🤣

Ahobhagya humare!!! Eric Bhaiya ke darshan hue *sheds bucket full of khushi ke ansoon*

Even when he was mad at her, despised her, he treasured their memories , their pics 😃
Sumo as rose n shravan as jack painting her ...that would surely cause global warming 😉

2months work n 2weeks off ...awesome plan!!!!

Are movie khatm 😲 ...I didn't want it to end
Without any explicit content ( someone must be very happy about it . You know who 😉 ) this honeymoon was ❤️
Do I need to tell how much I love it?? N you even more ❤️ 🤗

P.s.- Again I have written a long one. Are you proud of me Malik??
Nahi?😲 . I am 🤣
I may have missed many things . But you know I'll be back .. don't u?
This is worth many reads!!!
Edited by sapphire3 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
Honeymoon in London ..always a perfect place 😃
Written beautifully👏
Loved it
Edited by sheeluneelu - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Zee..!!🤗(actually Zoi didnt sound good..Zee..much better..hope u wont mind)
where shud i start from...literally spellbound...i guess u hav some kind of obssession of making everyone spellbound through ur updates😆...update was as always Tremendous!

the begining was lovely.."Sumo Episodes"😆..tht was really cute...her complains..oohh..she seemed so adorable to me...
Woah..Shravan planned a vacation for two of thm...woh bhi to London..awwh..just wanted to show her how he survived thoz 10 years without her...n Sumo...got over excited😆..few moments ago she was accusing him to be a worst husband n all of a sudden her statement changed😳

In this whole OS i really loved Sumo..her antics..her cute excited toddler phase...really throughout the OS i was adoring her...n was wondering how lucky she is tht she got such a sheer loving n caring Husband...was a bit jealous too😳
ohh tht bubble bath part...❤️❤️❤️...really beautiful...Shravan such a teaso..😆

he made her do ghrahparvesh(i hope i pronounced it rite)..tht was heart touching moment...he had her profile pics..awwh...I so agree with Sumo..."One track Mind" 😆...nice one though😳

niether wanted to end their vacation..but ended up planning otherone...Shravan Sumo k sath rah rah kar smart ho hi gaya...as Sumo said.warna show mein tu he lacked brains along with hormones too.🤪

the whole update was my fav...each n evry part of it...loved it..totally dazzling!
U knw I read it Thrice n planning to read it again...wel it worth reading a trillion times😉
see u soon..


Cheers
Sunain.

Edited by Sunain - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
That's what special about your writing skills orion. When you read this it is not just that you are putting an usual shraman moments together but it is also giving serious life goals. the idea of on and offs is simply great that if we implied that in our life it will be SO easy to make balance between personal and professional life .
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Posted: 8 years ago
Loved it..just awesome two months work two weeks off kya idea...
Edited by Joyness - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
Wah Zoya ji, kya baat hai... Yeh Banda to awesome se awesome-er bante ja raha hai! Makes me want to just say, "Purrr-fect"!
Hugs!
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Posted: 8 years ago
wow
totally amazing
loved it so much
continue soon

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