Hello,
I remember reading this yesterday morning during commute.It was awkward so I hurriedly left a like because the lady besides me was most probably peeking.
But you seized my interest with your words.I haven't mentioned it perhaps, but I look forward to your fiction because it has so much character.
This seemed akin to those tragic love stories one hears a lot.The yearning,passion,desperation,struggle and the truth were enticing.The way you write them is so beautiful.Your Shivaay is gray and he is aware of it.
I love such romances it seems where it ain't all sunshine and roses and the stories are not quite over.
Loved this as well! Looking forward to infinitely more.
Take care.