Breakup not a solution: updated part 2

I agree. Since ishwari's problem is sharing and letting go of her son... It could only happen with sona staying there. With practice and experience. I also agree that instead of breaking up the solution is talking it through, little adjustments on both side.

So as it is in my mind I am writing this :

Dev 'S birthday night, devakshi after party in room

After a heated discussion btw the two:

Devakshi - apne mujhse breakup kiya tha isliye kyuki maa is rishte se khush nahi thi!

Par dev kya woh abhi bhi is rishtey se khush hai yaa unhone sirf apki zidd puri kar li...

Dev stood stunned as all illusions crumbled before him.

To be continued... Tell me if I should continue. If i do it may take sometime because i really want them to think it through and for that i will also have to.

Also suggest a name pls

Thanks

Previously...

Sonakshi and dev reached their room finally, after all celebrations of dev's birthday ceased. Both sonakshi and ishwari had thrown a majestic party for dev. At the end of the day he had been glad that the two most important women in his life had joint hands to surprise him.

The party had proceeded with everyone happily chatting away, but he could tell something was worrying her. She seemed too quiet. And then sonakshi's maa Baba had come and glancing at sonakshi through the corner of his eyes he had deliberately avoided calling them by specific name. This was also obviously noticed by sonakshi.

Thus, at end of the party though his sisters had teased him with the personal gift bhabhi was going to give him... He knew better. This was going to be a long night.

Both of them entered the room. And first of all changed into some comfortable clothes. Coming out of the washroom, he tried to gauge the mood sona was in. But she was not angry nor sad but engaged in deep thoughts. He knew the object of her thoughts was him.

He walked towards her where she was standing near the window. Cautiously, he enveloped her in his arms. She didn't shrug him off which he took as a good sign.

She turned in his arms and looked at him, and he could almost see the turmoil in her head being reflected in her eyes. She didn't have to say anything, he took his hand in hers and sat her on the bed. Sona looked down once, as if formulating her words, and then looking at him said, 'dev mai apse kuch baat karna chahti hoon.', but before she could continue he stopped her. He had some of his own talking to do... He knew he had to confess to her all the things that were bothering him all these days. He started, 'sona pehle mujhe kuch kehna hai toh pehle mera baat suno...

That's all for now guys, please tell me how it was. I had started to write an os before but couldn't finish it. But I really want to finish this and your comments would help me. Thanks!