FF: The Escapades of the Rajvanshi Siblings

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sriarshi

@sriarshi

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Posted: 8 years ago

#11

Originally posted by: BreakingBlue

was waiting for your comment! 😳 Yeah, plot is completely different from the serial, that's why I mentioned Normal conditions in the intro (I seriously didn't know what to call it! 🤣)
I was ROFLOLing when I was writing the text messages! Especially the last Khandala one!😆
Yeah hopefully I get ideas for the next part as well! 😊

ya even plot is different...but i liked this kind of sukor too...text part was so funny😆...u did a good job👏

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BreakingBlue

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Posted: 8 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: -K.Kapoor-
Awww these siblings are just adorable! It's sad that in the show there's no bond whatsoever between them😒!Anyways, your writing is as awesome as ever!Please do continue it.

Yeah, in the show, their bond level is on 'Duniya main hum aaye hai toh jeena hi padega," 😆

Thank you for all those compliments! 😳 I'll try to continue this! 😊

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BreakingBlue

@BreakingBlue

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Posted: 8 years ago

#13

Originally posted by: sukiya123
Hii Breaking blue... what is your name

This is has got to be the funniest AU Udaan fic I ever read.

It so lighthearted, funny and sunny! You can feel the bond of the siblings... And each of their character is so true.

Like how Suraj ends up picking after Ragini & Vivaan, from plaiting her hair, to cooking dinner to waking up Vivaan to fixing him up with Imli!!!😆😆

Vivaan and Ragini's scooty ride reminded me of me an my sister's scooty ride.. She never could turn properly... Great attention to detail. Of course Suraj was keeping an eye on them.

Again while cooking Vivaan and Ragini running around haywired while Suraj is like

Most of all I really like the way you show Suraj to be. He is a responsible big bro, with his flirty attitude. Loved the way he proposed to Chakor

The simple way you bring Chakor into the background is absolute gold!! 🤗

Hey there! Please call me Akhi! 😳

Thank you so much for the huge compliment! 🤗

Suraj and Vivaan's convo was the best thing I wrote so far. Apart from the text messages. 🤣

A/N: The Scooty ride is kinda my story as well! 😆

Yeah, though it's nothing like the show, I do believe if they had grown up normally, then Suraj would have been responsible like this. And hopefully next time, if there is a next time, Chakor comes into the picture and is not just seen through texts!😆

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sahashrabdi

@..chotu..

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Posted: 8 years ago

#14

Look, I am a bad girl! Commenting so late! 😭 Sorry!
This was is amazing. Hillarious too! I was rofloling at most of the lines!
Permutations and combinations with hair? 🤣
Kaun be? Tera bhai be! Thats so me as well as Suraj 😆
Suraj pasand karlia Jungli billi ko? Acha pataya bhi! 😆
Niche chote bache khel rahe hai! Hehehe. Ragini n vivaan bahot chote hain 🤣
Sochna vi mat saali hai humari!
Bhabi kaun? Humari shaadi vi nahi hui
Suraj babu toh shaadi kiye bina hi Imli ko saali maan ne lage, toh Chakor humari bhabi kyun nahi? 😉
Absolutely loved it. DO NOT DARE TO DISCONTINUE! (😆)

Edited by ..chotu.. - 8 years ago

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BreakingBlue

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Posted: 8 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: srividhya68
so nice
loved it
plz cont

Thank you so much! Yes, will try to continue this with some more ideas.😊

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BreakingBlue

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Posted: 8 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: ..chotu..
Look, I am a bad girl! Commenting so late! 😭 Sorry!
This was is amazing. Hillarious too! I was rofloling at most of the lines!
Permutations and combinations with hair? 🤣
Kaun be? Tera bhai be! Thats so me as well as Suraj 😆
Suraj pasand karlia Jungli billi ko? Acha pataya bhi! 😆
Niche chote bache khel rahe hai! Hehehe. Ragini n vivaan bahot chote hain 🤣
Sochna vi mat saali hai humari!
Bhabi kaun? Humari shaadi vi nahi hui
Suraj babu toh shaadi kiye bina hi Imli ko saali maan ne lage, toh Chakor humari bhabi kyun nahi? 😉
Absolutely loved it. DO NOT DARE TO DISCONTINUE! (😆)

Yes! You really disappeared for so long!😔

Chote bachche though.🤣 I'm happy you found it hilarious.😆

Thanks for your lovely comments as usual! ❤️

Yes Madam ji! I'll try to update ASAP! 👍🏼