AsYa TS : The Scars of Life... Third Shot - P. 29 !*COMPLETED* (16/10) - Page 24

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: MayurChan

Very Good and Well written part Bano...

You know if i was at Asad's place and if i had someone diary like this with me...and i was as attracted to that person like in this situation...i would have done the same thing...😆
I know it is bad manners...but kya karein Control hota laha hai jab...
Khair on a serious note...
Yes their are Survivors like Zoya who fight all the odds and still live their life...( Here is a fact , one such girl from India actually walked the ramp in NY few days back )...but sadly their are some girls who are like Nikhat also who give up to the pressure of society and also lack of proper support...
Asad meeting Asad , i have read this for the first time...and for the first time Elder one got to know how annoying he is from the younger one...that part was good...but yes kids are cute but are annoying to...but this is also a truth that they are cute till everything is going according to our will and when they start going against us they become annoying...😆
I think the confrontation part was very good...but i also think Zoya ko thoda aur time lena chaiyeh kuch bhi sochne mein...but should also scold Asad next time when he meet her for reading her Diary without permission...😈
Liked reading this part...
Continue soonish...


sorry Mayur !! Maine yeh wala dekha nahi tha😳

thank u so much !!! i'm glad u liked it !😃😳

hahaha dekha ! we can't blame him for invading privacy agar hum khud yeh karte 😉😆😆
we r just out of control 😆

wow i didn't know about this girl but a bravo to her👏 see i told u the background was sad but the story is happy 😉😆

hahaha i think everybody should have a taste of their own medicine, just imagine our mums jab hum chote the, mastiii ! 😆😆😆 ah yeh tumne meri mooh ki baat cheen li !! My niece Zoya is like this only, abhi 4 saal ki hui hai aur jab usko kuch chahiye toh 'Sheher-Bano , aap bohot achi ho !' (she has the bad habit of not calling me khala kyun i'm the youngest toh sab mujhe mere naam se bulate hain) lekin dekha tab bohot sweet hogi mere saath but the rest of the time ! seriously little devils😆

haan i know what u mean maine bhi yeh hi socha ke usko sochna chahiye but then i thought the TS would become too long😛

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: cutie15

Wow
This one was exceptionally beautiful
I loved the concept and the simplicity with which you wrote this
Your way of writing and saima di's poems were a perfect combination of awesomeness
Mind blown literally
Superb job
Loved it
Thank you
Love you apple


aww thank u so much Cutie !! i'm glad u liked it !!🤗
haha true ! Aapi's poems were just that amazing !😳
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: ayat20

Beautiful update

Loved asya
N little asad was cute obedience him
It was truly a beautiful story


thank u so much Ayat !! i'm glad u liked it !!🤗
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Asya_Forever

Wow a beautiful story ended already?
I enjoyed reading all 3 shots.
Last shot was written so beautifully, finally AsYa confessed and got married.
Loved how Asad respected Zoya and loved her, not caring a bit about her scars. He accepted her with her scars. For real, a person like that is so hard to find.
Very very beautiful
Loved reading it 😊


hahaha yeah for once i updated jaldi jaldi 😆
thank u so much dear !! i'm glad u liked it !!🤗
it is so hard to find someone like this, the people who have such people in their lives should really feel lucjky
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: MOnkEy_rAngEr

Awsm se bhi super duper awsm 👏



thank u so much guys ! 😳
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: --Mirage--

It was a beautiful work as usual...

Loved every bit of it...
❤️

You did a great job...
We could find light after every dark...it may turn up unexpectedly...

Waiting for your other works


thank u so much Arpita !! i'm glad u liked it !! 🤗
everybosy should know that after the dark comes the light, so never give up on hope 😳
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: AkaiBara

Peek a boo
I see who?


voldemort !!!!!! 😲🤣
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Posted: 8 years ago
Assalam o Alaikum

How r u bano??? Hope u doing well...

Mai naraaz hoon *pout*
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: sasir

Superb..
Out standing..
Thank u...for this wonderful story..
N di for such awesome poems


thak u so much Sasir !! i'm glad u liked it !! 🤗
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Miss-Appy


voldemort !!!!!! 😲🤣


Wrong answer 😆

Mene toh AAK ko dekha hai, kitniii sohni dp hai 😳

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