Together Forever MP fan fic (Part 3 Pg 2) - Page 2

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Sounds really interesting and different... Can't wait to read on. 👏 👏 👏
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Lovely, wonderful read 😊 nice description of the surroundings.

Please continue soon=]

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Posted: 17 years ago
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wonderful n lovely........now really cant wait for d anext part...very curious to knw wht happens next... 😊
Edited by swetha10 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Hello hello hello guys its me back again with the 3rd part of the ff, hope u guys like it and plz do comment!!!!!!!

Part 3

"After the welcome that gave me, how could I do anything else but enjoy it her" he replied, and thought he saw a small tint of a blush flit across her face. Quick to make up for this he asked her if she would like a drink. Again she smiled that smile and moved with him to the near bye beach bar.

They sat together for some time, watching the people in the sea, and on the beach, making conversation about the island and the holiday, until before he knew it the sun and started to set in the sky. She looked at her watch,, "I have to go, another plane is landing soon, and another group of people to welcome.

She must have seen the look of disappointment cross his face for she quickly added, "But there is a BBQ in your hotel tonight, perhaps I could meet you there?"

A wave of relief spread through him, and he nodded his head, thinking of to many things at the same time to answer her. Prachi leant forward and kissed Milind's cheek. "Later" she said, and flashed those eyes at him once more.

He finished his drink, and hurried back to the hotel, spending the time writing the postcards he had promised, then getting ready for what he could only call a date.

He saw her as he entered the BBQ area, a fresh flower in her hair to match the color of the dress she wore. He moved to her, and could swear the smile on her face was for him, as the pushed through the crowd to meet him.

The food was wonderful, and the bright lights and color, sounds and people were only outmatched by the smile on the face, and the deep brown of the eyes of the angel, who was by his side. After a while, she slipped her hand into his, in what seemed to be the most natural thing to do,. They walked round the gardens, talking in soft whispers, learning about each other, her name he soon knew was Prachi, something knew to him, yet magical to his heart.
Son she lead him away from the crowd, to the moonlit beach, and as the waves lapped round there feet, they kissed, the stars filled the heavens and her eyes, and they both knew what was meant to be.

From that day on through the rest of his holiday they spent every moment, day or night they could together. He learnt about her, the island, they learnt about each other. He met her family, and felt at once at home, in the warm welcoming group of people.

Days soon rushed by, and they grasped every moment, lived for each other, neither wanting what they had to end, yet both knowing that it had to.

At last it was their last night together, and they took a blanket down to the beach and under the stars made love with a deep feeling that only true lovers know.

She walked with him to the airport, their hearts breaking at the thought of being apart. She kissed him, tears filling in those deep orb's that melted his heart with every look. His own eyes brimmed with tears, and his heart ached until he thought his chest would explode.

At last she looked at him. "Go" she said, "go and do not look back, I can not take it if you did" he voice broke as tears once more filled her eyes. "Just never forget me, never forget our love, and that there is a brown eyed girl from the islands that loves you more than any one has ever loved" She broke away as sobbing filled her, and her eyes clouded with the veil of her tears. He leant and kissed her. "I will write, I will remember and I will always love you" At this he turned and though his heart cried "turn, turn, stay with her." He made his way to the waiting plane.
To be contd

Regards, Pulwasha 😳



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Posted: 17 years ago
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Very good!
And a very painful parting..i was touched! keep up the good work!!
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Beautifully written😳

I hope they meet again soon.

Edited by $weet Ema - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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wow they have already make love?hott real hott 😆thnaks 😊but really would they ever meet again?and if yes when is that?pls do more soon thank u very much dear 🤗
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Awwwwww. Beautifully written. Looking forward to the next part. 😃

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