Ishra SS:Zindagi laayi humein yeh kahan teaser pg 136 mar 3

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hello darlings
back with a new story
don't kill me for another one
what to do? this one was a special demand by two of my readers Mdwst aka viji and Nits83 aka nithya
both wanted me to write a story on the current YHM track of course with my twist so here I am
and this is my first attempt to write on an ongoing track n I don't know how it would turn out to be
this one would be a short story six to seven parts only
and viji has helped me with the plot
so THANK YOU VIJI for that

I hope you guys would be able to bear me and this story😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
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PROLOGUE

I -why raman why... why you always leave me alone when I need you the most... don't you love me? First you left me when ruhi... I had also lost my daughter raman... the same daughter who made me a mother... I needed you raman I needed you at that time...I wanted you to hug me, console me and tell me that you were with me and that I have not lost both the angels of my life but you poured all you anger on me I was hurt I went away from you but then we got ruhi back our rooh and I forgave you and see what you did today you did that to me again... you again left me for our daughter... don't you love me even one tenth of what you love her? Why didn't you blame me, shout at me for having done that to you for having snatched your daughter from you... you just walked away from me mouthing "I am going to pihu" why raman why??????????

She screamed falling down on the floor and she didn't knew when she dozed off tired of her crying session

OTHER SIDE IN BANGKOK

He was sitting on the floor with his family picture in his hands his family was not a family anymore, he had broken it with his own hands

Why the hell he could not control his anger that night when they had lost their daughter? Why he had blamed her, called her barren and a bad omen? Why he let his new born think shagun was her mother? Why didn't he tell her about ishita and how her father had killed her mother... why didn't he get her name in pihu's birth certificate? Why he had to be the one at fault always?

He banged his fist on the wall cursing himself for having hurt the illumination of his life, his wife beyond repairs... he was the reason of all her sorrows, her pain, he was the reason her very own daughter never called her "maa"

But now he had had enough, he couldn't bear her paying for his mistakes and the moment he had heard pihu blaming her telling her that she hates her asking her to go away from her life, he had decided that now he would bridge the relationship between the mother and daughter, he was the one who had kept them away and now, he would bring them closer even if it takes him going away from all, drifting to the lanes of isolation once again he was ready to bear it for her, his madrasan his ishita

He kissed her picture hugging it closer to his heart

R -I will bring your pihu back to you ishita... I promise

His tear drop fell on her picture giving an impression that she was crying... he quickly wiped away that tear from her face and his eyes too telling himself and her not to cry

Hm Mm Hm Hm Pyaar Humko Bhi Hai,

Pyaar Tumko Bhi Hai

To Yeh Kya Silsile Ho Gaye

Bewafa Hum Nahin,

Bewafa Tum Nahin

To Kyoon Itne Gile Ho Gaye

Chalte Chalte Kaise Yeh Faasle Ho Gaye

Kya Pata Kahan Hum Chale

Pyaar Humko Bhi Hai, Pyaar Tumko Bhi Hai

To Yeh Kya Silsile Ho Gaye

Bewafa Hum Nahin,

Bewafa Tum Nahin To Kyoon Itne Gile Ho Gaye

Chalte Chalte Kaise Yeh Faasle Ho Gaye

Hm Hm Hm Ho, Kya Pata Kahan Hum Chale

so that's all for now... lengthy right????

will be waiting for your responses


Edited by akriti154 - 8 years ago
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Res

Unress
Interesting akku...
Ishita so broken...
Update soon
Edited by ishrasoul - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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added a prologue
hav a look
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Posted: 8 years ago
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interesting prologue...
waiting for the update...
update soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
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So Raman left Ishita
Raman broke the picture

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Originally posted by: divanfanS.

So Raman left Ishita
Raman broke the picture

Continue soon
Thanks for pm
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: divanfanS.

Continue soon
Thanks for pm

Congrats on your new story
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Originally posted by: divanfanS.

Congrats on your new story


Di please like my OS
Please please and please 😭

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