Maaneet FF:Everlasting love Thread 2 updated - Page 33

Originally posted by: ns.1

Please don't stop it. I love this story a lot. Continue writing. Why should we suffer because of few people who don't show any interest.

Pls read d note again y i m shutting it

Originally posted by: tania90

but what about us

Pls read d note again

please dont stop ..
we love to read the stories..

Don't do this ee love your stories

hi thanks 4 da pm n note! s news that u have discontinued! I request u 2 pls reconsider! thanks

No dear!! We love your writing.. please do not close.

Reconsider ur decision as this will be good for ur readers. In some stories everyone has to face shorten of comments.as most of the members are studying or doing job n some get ill or have ill family members. But all are trying to cop- up as much we can. And main thing is all are not nature gifted like u to have ability to write beautifully. So have patience u will get your part of reward today or tomorrow. Waiting for update

Part 14

It was evening and maan wanted to take geet out but with so much guest around he can't take geet anywhere, so he decided to take help from Annie
He went to Annie's room as she was with geet and studying there

Maan: hi Annie wat r u doing
Annie: Bhai I m studying and tell me wat u want if u want to talk to Bhabhi then I m sorry she is with me so u can't talk to her
Maan: no I don't want to talk to her but need ur help
Annie: wat kind of help
Maan: I wanted to take geet out

Annie started checking Maan head face that whether he is alright or not
Maan: wat r u doing
Annie: Bhai I m checking whether u have fever or not
Maan: whattt
Annie: have u gone mad Bhai all d relatives are here and if u take Bhabhi with u, all will question Bhabhi

Geet was seeing everything silently as she thinks that she should not speak in between both
Maan: that's y I need ur help, Annie pls help ur Bhai pls
Annie: I can't do anything but yes Dadi can do something
Maan: then pls go and ask Dadi pls pls pls
Annie: ok I will go till d time u spend time with ur fianc

She winked at them and left them alone
Geet asked maan wat were u saying to Annie
Maan: geet last week I was busy so I wanted to take u out so that I can spend some time with u
Geet: but maan wat all will think
Maan: geet just tell me would u like to spend time with me or not
Geet: yes but

Before geet can say anything Dadi came inside d room and held Maan's ear and said where u want to go
Maan: Dadi pls leave my ear it's hurting
Dadi: no u deserve this wat u r thinking is next to impossible

Both Annie and geet are laughing seeing Maan's condition

Maan: Dadi pls I want to spend some time with her, pls Dadi do something only u can do
Dadi: but y u have full life to spend but y now
Maan: Dadi first leave my ear it's hurting

Dadi left his ear and asked geet do u want to spend some time and geet nodes his head in yes

Dadi: ok where u want to take her
Maan: I want to take her to sukhna lake but just for an hour
Dadi: ok i will say to everyone that we are going to mandir and then we all will go
Maan: thank u Dadi
Dadi: all get ready and meet me in d hall in next 10 mins

All left d house and no one question Dadi
In next 30 mins all reached mandir first and take d blessings from God and then reaches sukhna lake and Dadi told them to roam around
Maan: where u will sit
Annie: me and Dadi will also enjoy, u don't worry about us just spend time with Bhabhi

Enterance of sukhna lake



Sukhna lake at night



Geet was again mesmerized by d beauty of d place
Geet: Maan this place is so nice
Maan: yes geet In childhood we all come on d weekends at this place
Geet: this is so silent
Maan: its night time and we have come to d other end if we would have gone to other end it would have been so crowded
Geet: oh so it has two entries
Maan: yes

Both were waking hand and hand and inhaling d fresh air
Both sat at one place and geet placed her head on Maan's shoulder



Place where both are sitting

Maan: geet do u want to say something
Geet: maan I m really happy now, after my parents demise this is d first time I m happy from my heart
Maan: ur happiness matters a lot to me
Geet: u will never change and keep loving me like this
Maan: no I will neither change and will keep loving u like this
Geet: after marriage also we will come here and wat else thi and place has
Maan: in day time there is boating, swings and many games
Geet: wow boating u know Maan I love boating
Maan: even I like boating, we both will come here again but alone
Geet: ok

He kissed her forehead and both kept silent for sometime
Then they came where Dadi and Annie were sitting
All went home and as soon as geet reaches home Sunita aunty was there and she hugged and said aunty I miss u
Sunita: I missed u too beta
Geet: aunty I need to talk to u something imp can we
Sunita: yes beta

Both left to d room
Geet: aunty u know wat u have to do
Sunita: yes I know wat I had to do
Geet: no one should come to know that wat I have decided, if anyone comes to know anything then everything will be destroyed
Sunita: no it will not happen
Geet: aunty I hope u r ready with all that and have u taken out d whole information
Sunita: don't worry geet no one will come to know and we will execute our plan

PRECAP: NOT DECIDED YET

PS: NEXT UPDATE WILL BE DECIDED ON LIKES AND SPECIALLY ON COMMENTS
I DONT NEED ONE LINER COMMENTS 😡

Asum update,cont soon
Maan is despatetly wanting to spend some time with geet so he wants annie to help him.
Waiting 4 nxt part

Originally posted by: priya_21

wah you back

😃

Just came here to see whether I will get response or not if not then this will be shared with few on fb