Memories - TWINJ FF new part Page 52! - Page 35

Originally posted by: adi_FMT_ct

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Farah you know i just love the thing how you convey Twinkle & Kunj's feelings.

Just Loveee it.

Beautifully potray their hesitancy,their confusion...

And also the dot part is ❤️

And Twinkle's waiting for Kunj's message and Kunj's messaging us simply worthy in this situation.

Kunj's realisation about his misdeeds not only the big one also the tiny one like Twinkle always cared for Kunj's each and every emotion;Yes this can be giving preference to kunj's music choice in spite of her.

This part is best for me.👏

And now It's not the secret that always I am eagerly waiting for your update.

Originally posted by: SweetSau

Hi di

You know what I'm speachless!

I had to read it again to back my bearings as I was sooo very much absorbed in the story that I simply couldn't comment!

I loved Twinkle's diary entry finally she has started to think slightly of herself which is very good.

Kunj now thinking about Twinkle her pain was soo heartwarming. The way he is ready to every possible thing and not let her take any efforts also touched my heart.

Par Kunj aur Twinkle kisi bhi rishte ko age badhane ke liye dono ko mehnat karni padti hai sirf aur sirf ek person ke efforts karne se kuh nahi hota so work together and then not only will friendship be restored but you will fall in love and accept it too.

The way he reached out to her and assured her that he was ready to everything possible and her reply that was also ready but to take things slow also was beautifully penned. And the rain memory and Kunj calling her to pick her up and trying to make new memories and renew old ones was just classic.

This is making me fall even more in love with the story with every single part.

Update soon

Lots of love

Sayli

Ps. Sorry for the long comment. Was going to make it short but couldn't. Had too many things running in my head.

Originally posted by: Komal1298

Hey griffz!

This chappy was so emotionally depicted and so amazing!

Loved it to the core!

Sorry if i want be able to comment on next few chap's coz of my exams! but i will like all of them!

Thanku for the pm

Originally posted by: Black_Maniac

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I so want to comment right now, but I have to sleep heh! I have school tomorrow. I'll unres as soon as possible :D

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I know I got really late... Was packing stuff up... I'll be traveling for the next week, so I am only a little less than sure that I'll be commenting...

I want to apologize in advance.

Now, the update!

It was amazing!

The first few lines... Twinkle's numbness was touching... Something I was sadistically yet hopefully waiting for... Her to get numb... To be devoid of any emotions -.-'

Hey, it's not Twinkle who I want all sad and numb. I wanted Kunj to get his share of emotional distress.

And, girl, you brought justice. Obviously you are the lord of this amazing story. Kunj felt, much more than he had in his own life. That part that he deserved. (I know I know... Back to being sadistic aren't we?)

But, highlight of the chapter being: The relived moment. I felt happy bubbles in my gut :D

It was so peaceful [<3]

I was so happy reading it :D

Thanks a lot for that one moment. Unspoken agreement, understanding... Just what you need in this old yet raw friendship.

Loads of Love,

Krishi 😳

P.S. Special shoutout to the thing that they know both of them have to work to make this work. Kunj feels she doesn't need to make efforts on her part because she's already done enough and Twinkle's decision to keep doing because this mattered to her. It's back on track with a small yet huge difference on Kunj's part

I just wanted to say .. thak you for amazing comments and likes... its so heartwarming.. it makes my day.. I am sorry for replying late to them!

I am continuing my promise.. and here goes the next update!

Expect a longer update on monday.. as I am out of station for the next two days😳😳

Part 19

I needed to draw a line... yes ..I did ... the memory of drawing one last time seemed to have disappear...I didn't know how I had done it back then...

Maybe the dire need to fix him made me adamant about staying as friend and nothing more...maybe he had a girlfriend then..and that made me keep a distance?...but even when I didn't know about his girlfriend... I had decided to expect only friendship out of it...or did i ?

Would it all have ended this badly..if that love element wasn't there...

I searched an answer...and a firm voice said...no it would have still ended badly...because you were not expressing love and expecting it to be reciprocated..you were only expecting your friendship to remain the same...

But does anything ever remain the same..

Yes sometimes we do have the same friends all our life..and we meet each other regularly..but don't priorities change? Expectations shift ? Yes...maybe..

The problem was I had very few friends...apart from him.. I only had two other close friends..and things had been so constant with them that I never got to ponder on how friendship evolves over time..

This brings me back to expectations.. do my expectations as a friend remain same? Or do they change?

Because to know where the line is... my expectations had to be clearly defined...

Ughh.. I felt like i was doing an essay writing.. this was tough..

And I turned and looked at him.. he was humming songs...and he seemed lost...he did not seem to have grown old...he looked exactly like how he looked five years back...well except of a more obvious stubble.. well I liked that ...he looked a little more mature...and yes his actions had proved them...its his eyes and voice that had always intrigued me.. that always had a calling in them...and as he changed the song...i came back to my senses...

And one realisation hit me deeper than before...

That i still loved him...adored him...

My throat went dry...come back to expectations by brain sternly said.. but my heart continued to flutter... i felt like i was in my first year again..when we had gone for our first ride..

I had not insisted on the ride.. he had come to pick up some notes and it started raining..

He started saying how he hated rain...and i said i liked to drive when it rained...and he being the gentleman he is politely asked if i would like to go on one...and we went...

Those were the initial days when i was stil deciding whether i wanted to be his friend or did i wnat to encourage "those" feelings in me.. and I had continued to listen to him humming...his voice then also called out to me just like today...

The battle was back .. I sighed and looked outside...unable to find an answer... what did i want...

And my heart just very simply said "him"

No matter what...no matter how... i just needed him...

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I noticed her looking at me...i could feel her eyes trying to observe how I had changed...had she always looked like that at me?

From the corner of my eye.. as much as i could see and feel...i sensed an emotion ..a very different emotion...

But I brushed the thought quickly away...

And even she started to look outside the window..

The truth was I didn't deserve her love in any way.. not as a friend .. and definitely not as a lover...

But one thing that continuously made me want to try was her...

She inspite of everything wanted me in her life... could I want anything more? Possibly not...

Yes i loved her .. and i could do anything for her... but i needed to draw a line

First was not raise any suspicion because even though I loved her... i loved her as a friend too and her presence gave me peace like none other

Second... i had to first live to her expectations.. do everything she had always expected but never demanded.. always wanted but never asked..

But what were those?

The deeply i analysed.. I realised I would know what she would expect because deep down.. that idiot me was still there who could have done so many things for her back then but did not and it was high time the idiot boy ... did everything he could...

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" shall we head back?"

It had been more than an hour... i was still confused... and we had hardly talked..but it was good to not talk and just feel each other's presence..

" Sure..."

He said in a very calm voice...

"by the way ..did you get ajay's invite for the wedding in Goa?"

"Oh yeah... the next Saturday one?"

"Yeah..."

I wanted to ask whether he was going or not ...but my voice trailed off..

Ajay was our good old friend... we had not kept much in touch...but he was always a sweetheart...

" Have you been in touch with him" I asked...

" yeah.. like random texts.. I almost went to reunion because of him.. but then didn't feel like"

I stayed quiet..ajay had mentioned that to me and thats the reason i didn't go to it.. but I didn't want to mention that

"It is a three day wedding...with all the functions.. I wanted to just go for the wedding day..."

" Umm even me.. three day is long and I am not a fan of weddings...though goa is nice"

He grinned and I started laughing...

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The laugh.. I had heard that after soo long... so peaceful.. so pure.. just like her...

Ohh i was definitely in love with her... but i needed to stepp back and behave as a friend...

I had missed her laugh.. i had missed her smiles

It is true absence only makes u value.. we all take presence of anything granted

" we can go together you know?"

I chose my words carefully... i didn't want to sound persuasive.. demanding or even show that i wanted this

Because i knew she had a habit of fulfilling everything i wanted...

She kept quiet for almost a minute and I wondered

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Dont say yes... immediately.. my brain warned

But its perfect my heart almost squealed..

The line ! the line!.. my brain hissed angrily

Its just a one day visit to goa.. I anyways had planned to go for the wedding...

And i shut both my heart and mind

And said "yes... sure.."

And a smile... the one that always melted me appeared on his face

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I hope you guys liked this part

A lot of drama coming up ... in the wedding... 😃😉

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love u all

Cheers

Griffy

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