Darkness FF - Part 12 updated on page 20

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hey guys. I have an idea of a ff in my mind from so many days so I am trying to write it on the paper. In this story there are many characters. Some are familiar and some are new. By the time you will get to know about them.

Being a thahaan fan Dhruv is not in my ff.

This is the story of Vaani, a surgeon and her journey. She works in the City Hospital. She doesn't stammer. she is a sweet, innocent and a lovable person. She is very efficient doctor.She lives with her little brother Varun. He is her life. Her parents died in a car accident two years back.

Varun is a 22 years old boy. He is two years younger than Vaani. He studies in engineering college. He wants to be rich anyhow but he loves her sister and wants to see her happy.

I know I know you want to know about him and there he is Bihaan.

He is brave, smart, handsome and a happy boy. He lives happily. He doesn't have parents but a aunt who adopted him at the age of 7.He runs a restaurant and a catering business with her aunt but he does work for others too. He is very helpful to everyone so that's the reason everyone knows Bihaan.

I will upload first part by the evening if you like then I will going to continue.Kindly ignore language mistakes.😊

Part 1 Below


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Posted: 9 years ago
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Small introduction. it changed my mind fresh. keep writing. good luck.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Another new ff.. 😃
Please do continue..
M to mri jaa rhi hu thahaan ff pdhne ke liye.. 😆...
Show me to kuch bcha nhi..
But I'll love to read your ff.. 😉
Update soon..
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Best of luck.. 😊

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Posted: 9 years ago
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yes plz write.. we will read it
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Posted: 9 years ago
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PART 1

Two weeks before

Mehra Nivas

Vaani was very restless. It was 11 pm and she was waiting for her brother, Varun. She was trying his no. again and again but he was not responding. She was getting annoyed for his careless attitude. Suddenly, the gate has opened and he entered.

Vaani - Varun , What is this nonsense?

Varun didn't give answer

Vaani - I was trying your no. from the evening. Where were you ?

Varun looked at her with teary eyes but didn't say anything.

Vaani - Sab theek hai na Bhai !

Varun -Hmmm with heavy voice.

Vaani - Is there any problem?

Varun - Nahin !!!!

Vaani - Are you angry with me ?

Varun - Nooo

Vaani - Then what happened ? ( In a tensed manner )

Varun - Nothing

Vaani - something has happened. I can read your eyes.

Varun gets emotional. He wants to cry but he didn't know from where to start. He control himself and go to his room.Vaani doesn't know the reason of varun's tension. He closed the door and locked it.

After two hours, vaani goes near to his room and asked varun...

Vaani - Varun , kuch to bata. Kya hua hai tujhe ?

Varun - leave me alone. Chale jao yahan se. Don't treat me like a baby. I can solve my problems by myself.

Vaani knows that he is in a big problem. He doesn't cry on small issues. Something big has happened but what ???

Vaani - pls open the door for me, just for my sake. ( crying badly)

Varun open the door and come out. He was very angry from himself for making her sister cry. He wants to punish himself for breaking her trust . He hate himself for shouting on the person whom she loves most but he was helpless because he cant tell his problem to anyone.

She was sitting next to him. She took his hand in her hand and taking care of his hair, wiping his tears.

Vaani - No problem. We will solve it together. You don't worry. I am always with you.

Varun - (Burst out his anger) Mazaak lag raha hai tumhe sab! Pata bhi hai ki kya hua hai ? kuch theek nahin ho sakta. Ab kuch theek nahin ho sakta. Everything is finished. I am Finished ! Varun Mehra is Finished ( He was shouting like a mad person)

Vaani was shocked !!! Her little brother is talking like a criminal. She was scared from his brother's response. His mysterious behavior making her mad. She stood up and asked furiously - will you tell me what is this nonsense??

He sits on the floor and cried like a innocent baby. Vaani hugged her tightly so he can feel secure and better. After some time , varun looked into her eyes and want to confess..

Varun - Vo log mujhe maar denge Vaani. Vo bahut dangerous log hain, agar unhe mujh par shak bhi hua to, they will kill me !!! ( He was sure about this statement)

Part 2 - page 2

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nice start.. 😊
Waiting for next update 😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: lovely1999

Nice start.. 😊

Waiting for next update 😃

Thanks.😊 I will try my best
Posted: 9 years ago
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Suspenseful start
Continue the story. Waiting for Bihaan's entry obviously 😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: SewwandiVB

Suspenseful start

Continue the story. Waiting for Bihaan's entry obviously 😆

Thanks for liking it.yeah sure he will enter soon.😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Amazing waiting for next part..
Keep writing..

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