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Posted: 9 years ago
Waiting for today's update... plzzz update fast it literally feels tht soon the door knob will open n then the whole dhamaka bt in this family discussion I think OmRu will nt like acp oops commissioner Randhawa ki presence

Well how ever it goes I am waiting for my today's dose so addictive yaar
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Posted: 9 years ago
You tell an amazing story. I read all the chapters in one go and you have me convinced about the plausibility of each character's behaviour, and of each relationship. You convey so much with an enviable economy of words.
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Hi!
I'm so so extremely sorry that I haven't been able to comment on any of your writing before this but I've just been so busy/preoccupied?!

Just a quick mention for my favourite piece of writing on this forum, Promises, first.
Holy shit woman, to this day I don't know how I didn't come across it sooner and I'm genuinely so annoyed with myself!
Really though, Promises made me laugh and cry and fall in love with Shivaay and Annika, just that little bit more. Thank you for writing something beautiful, and just saying, you've made a fan for life ❤️

Now, onto Consequences.
I must say, the preview of it in itself was so fantastic! I love your Rudra and Saumya, but I think that your Rudra is just so touching. I think the issue with the show is that sometimes they get so carried away with the comedy premise, they forget that Rudra, in theory, is the glue of the family. Indeed, I think that without Rudra, the Oberoi family would be in ruins. Thank you for recognising this, and portraying it so aptly through your writing.

I'm a diehard ShivIka shipper, but ironically, what I loved the most about this story is that Shivaay and Annika don't end up together. As much as we love them, in real life, I don't think ShivIka would be endgame. In fact, even if they fell in love, I still think that they would be bound to social and moral constraints and they would have to let each other go. If the show was realistic, Annika would move on and Shivaay would marry Tia. I love that about Consequences.

On the ShivIka front, I also love that you've shown Shivaay to never have really moved on from Annika, and Annika not realising when she moves on from Shivaay. At the moment, I think that Shivaay is in much deeper than Annika so I absolutely love that your writing reflects on that.

On that note though, I don't like AniKara as a ship either.
I mean, I really really don't like it. Usually, I don't even read AniKara writing because in my eyes, it just doesn't make much sense. I was drawn to Consequences because of RumYa and so I was quite wary when I realised that AniKara were a thing in the story. I'm the same personality type as Om and I relate a lot to his ideologies and beliefs and even overall character, and I know that while I love Annika on the show, if I met a real person with her personality, I would most likely not be able to stand them. I think that in my eyes, I would only like a person like Annika in my life, at arms length. I just feel like they're too different; I know Shivaay and Annika are supposed to be opposites, but I think at heart, they're guided by the same morals and virtues. Omkara and Annika, on the other hand, just don't work for me. He's at one with everyone's emotions but his own, and I don't think love-starved, neglected Annika would be able to deal with the distance that Om will need. I think the issue is, that some people idolise Om, and think that he will always be loving and accepting - but because I relate to him so much, I can see the inherent flaws in his persona and so, for me, AniKara just don't work (sorry!). I also don't think that Om, knowing Shivaay's feelings for Annika, would ever be able to fully accept falling in love with her.
Still, I think you write AniKara impeccably though, so kudos to you for that 😆

On another note, I love your Priyanka and Ranveer 😊
They're so cute! There's not much fiction on them yet, but I think that you portray them so well. I feel like both the characters have so much potential so I hope that the CVs do them justice. Also, how hot is Randhawa? ❤️❤️❤️❤️

Onto my absolute loves, RumYa, I love them in this story. I love their friendship turned love story, and I think you write it very well. I also love that they have sex; I think that on the show, while Rudra finds her cute, he doesn't desire her like that yet, so it's heart-warming to read that you've shown that in your writing! It's just sweet that in Consequences, Rudy is so much more mature and looks past physicalities to see the real Saumya! I also love that in your story, RumYa are essentially the youngest in the family, but in some aspects, the most knowledgable and mature of them all. I love that both of them try their hardest to keep the family together and that they value the happiness of their family over everything else. I admit I cried when Rudra finds out about AniKara, his reaction absolutely broke my heart 😭

Overall, I just love you and your writing! Sorry for the impossibly long comment :/
Hoping to read some more writing from you very soon! Please PM me when you update next 😆

With love,
Innika




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Posted: 9 years ago
As much as I love the RuMya sections, I can't stand AniKara.
It makes me sick to the stomach, because it feels so perverse on so many levels.
It's weird that even after GK specifically rejected the idea of AniKara, people are still shipping them to the extent of writing fanfiction.
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Pyrrhic.

As much as I love the RuMya sections, I can't stand AniKara.
It makes me sick to the stomach, because it feels so perverse on so many levels.
It's weird that even after GK specifically rejected the idea of AniKara, people are still shipping them to the extent of writing fanfiction.


Loool I've been waiting for someone to post something like this, referencing Gul's comments about AniKara. Of course in the show, ShivIka is endgame and I would hate it to go any other way- but that's why fanfiction exists. It's not me fantasising about what I'd like to happen... I know some people write what they'd like to see happen in the show, and sometimes I do do that, but mostly I write to explore "What If" situations with characters whose heads I want to get into. When I started writing this story, that "What If" was "What if Rudra and Soumya woke up the 'morning after' in a hotel somewhere in the middle of London?"

But then I started writing Chapter 1 and it became a case of "What are they doing in London? What took them there? Why were they drunk enough to sleep together, (because obviously they were drunk)? 😆"

And then that day, Shivaay did something in the show to Anika which pissed me off and I was like "FINE THEN SHIVAAY, YOU CAN MARRY TIA, YOU INSUFFERABLE UPPITY PoS!" So I started writing. I ended the first chapter fully intending to write Anika and Omkara as roommates and nothing more. The meeting with the woman at the boutique was going to be with Ishana and this was going to be an IshKara ShivIka RuMya fic as per usual... but then I went into the backstory. How did Anika and Omkara get to London in the first place? Where's Sahil? And then the logistics came into play. How on Earth is Anika going to go to the UK? I know people who had VISAs rejected to come over here for their daughter's Graduation ceremony. Who in their right mind would give Anika one? And Sahil. Anika isn't going anywhere without Sahil. So okay, I'll have her marry Om, but like, a marriage of convenience so they can adopt Sahil and all go to London.

But then I thought, of course through both of these... they'd start to feel things for each other. Anyone would for someone willing to do so much and who you married and spent all your time with. And it's not as though Anika and Omkara don't get on. I feel as though Omkara would feel duty bound to take care of Anika because of what Shivaay did to her initially, but then naturally the feelings would grow. That's the entire basis of arranged marriages, surely? You put two people who get on in a relationship, then they draw closer.

For Omkara and Anika to feel guilty about their relationship is human nature, but logically they shouldn't. In the reality of this story at least. Shivaay is married to another woman. Anika isn't a homewrecker and holding onto feelings for another woman while married makes Shivaay the one at fault here, not Anika for moving on from them.

At that point, imagining how Shivaay would handle the worst case scenario following his marriage to Tia and how the rest of the Oberois would react to the same became an extremely interesting concept and so I started to write.

In the real world, Anika would probably (hopefully) never interact with any of the Oberois ever again and strike out on her own and kick ass until someone who appreciated her for her came along and swept her off her feet, but I didn't want to write that this time. That's an OS for another day 😆
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~~[CHAPTER TEN- D E V A R & B H A B H I]~~



"Do you mind if I join you?"


Rudra's head jerked instinctively in the direction of the door, but when he realised who it was he continued to stare out across the road from the steps outside Anika and Omkara's door. He was pouting. He knew he was pouting. He had been pouting inside as well, the reality of seeing Omkara with Anika too much for him to handle in person. Omkara had told him to 'stop pouting like a kid' which had infuriated him, and so he had stormed outside to take a few minutes to pout outside and cool his head.


Anika coming down to sit on the step beside him was not helping.


She took a deep breath and Rudra waited for her to start speaking so he could interrupt her and ask her to go away. He knew it was rude, but he didn't really care. He wanted to be rude. Rudra had been witness to the deterioration of Shivaay's state over the past two years and though he knew Anika was the last person at fault for what happened... part of him still blamed her.


As though maybe if she had fought harder at the time, forced his oldest brother to see her and love her, he would have.


The rational part of Rudra knew all that was nonsense- nobody could convince Shivaay of anything once he made up his mind about something. But Rudra had seen time and again how Anika had done just that. Had there really been nothing she could do at the time to convince him one last time?


And even if, after Anika's real and honest best efforts, Shivaay had still married Lady Baba. How could she just switch him out for Omkara? Rudra knew that Omkara hadn't touched any of the family money since leaving so he knew she hadn't done it for money, but surely that was worse? Had she secretly been splitting her love between both his brothers while Shivaay focused all of his on her?


That wasn't true- Shivaay had been engaged the entire time he had known Anika.


And Rudra knew Anika had only married Omkara to help him, and he to help her. He understood that being close to someone like that for a long time could make you see the good in them, fall in love with them.


After all, weren't he and Soumya proof positive of that? Well, perhaps he wasn't in love with her, but he did love her.


Everything he was angry at Anika for, Shivaay had done worse. Every decision Anika had made, he could understand her making, even if he thought she should have made different ones.


Anika moving on and being happy while Shivaay remained miserably trapped in the past was not her fault.



It really wasn't.


But still, Rudra blamed her.



So he was rather annoyed when instead of talking, Anika just sighed and wrapped her arms around her knees, staring silently out across the road with him.



He wasn't sure how long the two of them sat there, watching the London traffic roll by. At one point they watched as a cyclist scraped the side of a car trying to weave between it and one parked on the side of the road, and then the driver of said car screeched to a halt and got out to chase the cyclist. Unfortunately for him, the cyclist had already gone off-road and peddled off over a hill at high speed.


The driver had yelled some profane abuse at him, mourned the scratch on his car and spoken to the on-looking Rudra and Anika that the cyclist was "an effing wasteman, bruv" before getting back in his car and driving off.



They had looked at each other, both biting back a smile, before returning to their silent outward gazing.



"I wonder what's going on inside." He finally decided to break the silence.

It took a few seconds for Anika to answer. "I suppose Omkara is murdering the ACP while the ACP uses that as proof that he killed that other woman all those years ago?"

Rudra gave reluctant smile "What's that jerk even doing here? And why is he with Priyanka?"

"Your guess is as good as mine. Has he been meeting with Priyanka back in India?"

"He better bloody not have been!" Rudra's outrage made Anika giggle, and he felt his anger pop like an overblown balloon. "Anika Didi, I'm sorry."

"For what?"

"For everything."

"Oh Rudra, don't worry. It's okay for you to react to... all this... however you want."

Rudra shook his head. "I don't mean just now. I mean back then. I knew Shivaay Bhaiya was making a mistake." He felt rather than saw Anika stiffen beside him. "I knew he shouldn't marry Lady Baba. If he wasn't ready to marry you then, he shouldn't have married anyone. I should have made him realise-"


Anika cut Rudra off by gently placing a hand on his cheek, turning his face towards hers. "There's nothing you could have done." Her eyes scanned his face, softened. "You always were my favourite." She gave a quiet laugh. "Oh Rudra, has it been very hard?"

Rudra tilted his head, freeing his cheek from her hand and then determinedly turning away from her. "It's been fine. Everyone's fine."

"And how much of that is because you've been running yourself ragged to make sure of that?"


He didn't speak. Couldn't.


But as he thought of all the painfully silent meals he and Soumya had started rowdy conversations over, all the awkward and tense moments he had diffused with a well-timed joke, all of the tears he had seen his family members cry which he had offered them a shoulder for, and of all the many he was sure they had cried in secret, where he could not help them. Rudra felt the first tear break the barrier and roll down his cheek, quickly joined by many others. Anika hugged him, hiding his face from passersby as the Great Floodgates of Rudra Singh Oberoi were smashed open for the second time in two days but this time instead of crying for his brothers, Rudra Singh Oberoi cried for himself.



""""""""""


When Soumya arrived, she could tell instantly that Rudra had been crying. She took the seat beside him and felt a possessive warmth when he immediately took her hand in his, lacing their fingers together as he stared across the table at the conversation that was happening.


"It doesn't matter whether you want to come back or not, I'm telling you that you have to."

"I'm sorry, are you completely incompetent? Or do you think you're in some kind of Indian Drama and the law doesn't apply to you? If you had any evidence, you would have arrested me two years ago, and you wouldn't be stalking my sister and following her to London to try and goad me into falling for your ridiculous tricks."

ACP Randhawa raised an eyebrow. "You're quite chatty, aren't you?"

"I swear to God, I will mu-"

"Om, love, maybe threatening to murder a police officer accusing you of murder isn't the best defence."

"But I haven't killed anyone."

"And everyone believes y-"

"I don't."

"Sorry, I misspoke. Everyone who matters believes you. So just stay calm and don't let him get to you."

"Bh-bh-bhaiya, even if you d-don't come back b-because of the A-A-A-A-ACP, you should c-come home."

"Assistant Assistant Assistant Assistant Assistant." Ranveer counted off the stuttered As on his fingers.

"Mock my sister one more time, you son of a-"

"Rudra, sit down." Soumya tugged on his hand and pulled him back.


"Th-the family is d-d-devastated without you. We need you to c-come back and f-fix it."

"I can't."



Anika could tell when her husband was tense. He had been annoyed this entire time, with the ACPs fantastical accusations, but it wasn't until that comment that she noticed his entire body freeze, his muscles rigid, belying the passive expression on his face.

"B-b-but only you can help. Everyone's m-miserable."

"I'm sure that's not true."

"It is!" Everyone stared at Priyanka, who flushed scarlet as she realised she had both yelled and slammed her fist down on the table.

"That's the first non-annoying thing I've ever seen you do."

"Shut up, Policeman Plod. You're not a part of this."



Anika looked at Soumya, their eyes wide as the others around the table began yelling at each other.


"Enough." Anika rose to her feet. "The reason Omkara does not want to return home is because he is afraid of what Shivaay will say and how he will react upon learning about... me." There were several visible winces at the mention of the name which everyone was treating as taboo around Anika and Om. "He is, as always, trying to protect both me and Sahil from the notorious anger of Shivaay Singh Oberoi." She paused. "But he is also being a coward." She sighed heavily and sat back down. "We both are."


Anika looked at Omkara, took one of his hands in hers and squeezed. "We should go. We have to go."

He thought about it, and then gave a short nod.



"Priyanka, if your new boyfriend arrests my husband when we get to India, please inform him that I will castrate him and throw them into the fire."

"Anika's been watching a lot of Game of Thrones." Omkara explained, his voice deadpan as the rest of the table gawked at his smiling wife.


Chapter Eleven- Beast & Baby



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Thank you all so much for the amazing feedback so far! Truly truly appreciate it. Chapter 9 brought some pretty interesting responses, and I like reading comments both which agree with and enjoy my perspective (because obviously I want you to enjoy what I'm writing) and take on things, but I do also enjoy ones which make me really think about why I'm writing what I'm writing- so if any part of the story doesn't appeal to you, I'm totally up for discussion/ debate on why. Though I warn you now, having to think through and justify my thoughts kind of just makes me more determined to keep writing it 😆 But I have tried to explain in the post above this one why AniKara happened in this story, which I think might be of interest to quite a few of you. Following trains of thought to their conclusions can lead to a lot- ENJOY YOUR DAYDREAMS, GUYS.


Innika, I apologise for the late reply to your post- I promise it's coming. I have it open in a new tab on Chrome and I'm literally replying to it in pieces. It'll probably end up as long as an actual chapter by the time I'm done 😆

Edited by fallingpieces - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Amazing update, loved it even more now that I know the great amount of thought process that has gone into making these characters so different yet similar to their TV counterparts.
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Hello! This is the second story I've read on this forum and let me be very honest with you. Anika and Omkara married? The whole idea was unnerving really. I mean they come across as almost sibling like on the show and here married. But after finishing these ten chapters, I have to say I love it. The pairings and the entire idea behind your story. I keep watching the show and wishing Anika backs off and shivaay learns a few lessons. Then I read your story and it's exactly what I would like to see on TV. Extremely well written especially the chapter with Shivaay (in his alternate universe I think?).
Looking forward to the rest of your story (hoping it'll have Anika and Omkara staying strong, Shivaay finding some peace)

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<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="5">~~[CHAPTER TEN- D E V A R & B H A B H I]~~</font>





<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">"Do you mind if I join you?"</font>




<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">Rudra's head jerked instinctively in the direction of the door, but when he realised who it was he continued to stare out across the road from the steps outside Anika and Omkara's door. He was pouting. He knew he was pouting. He had been pouting inside as well, the reality of seeing Omkara with Anika too much for him to handle in person. Omkara had told him to 'stop pouting like a kid'which had infuriated him, and so he had stormed outside to take a few minutes to pout outside and cool his head.</font>




<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">Anika coming down to sit on the step beside him was not helping.</font>




<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">She took a deep breath and Rudra waited for her to start speaking so he could interrupt her and ask her to go away. He knew it was rude, but he didn't really care. He wanted to be rude. Rudra had been witness to the deterioration of Shivaay's state over the past two years and though he knew Anika was the last person at fault for what happened... part of him still blamed her.</font>




<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">As though maybe if she had fought harder at the time, forced his oldest brother to see her and love her, he would have.</font>




<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">The rational part of Rudra knew all that was nonsense- nobody could convince Shivaay of anything once he made up his mind about something. But Rudra had seen time and again how Anika had done just that. Had there really been nothing she could do at the time to convince him one last time?</font>




<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">And even if, after Anika's real and honest best efforts, Shivaay had still married Lady Baba. How could she just switch him out for Omkara? Rudra knew that Omkara hadn't touched any of the family money since leaving so he knew she hadn't done it for money, but surely that was worse? Had she secretly been splitting her love between both his brothers while Shivaay focused all of his on her?</font>




<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">That wasn't true- Shivaay had been engaged the entire time he had known Anika.</font>




<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">And Rudra knew Anika had only married Omkara to help him, and he to help her. He understood that being close to someone like that for a long time could make you see the good in them, fall in love with them.</font>




<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">After all, weren't he and Soumya proof positive of that? Well, perhaps he wasn't in love with her, but he did love her.</font>




<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">Everything he was angry at Anika for, Shivaay had done worse. Every decision Anika had made, he could understand her making, even if he thought she should have made different ones.</font>




<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">Anika moving on and being happy while Shivaay remained miserably trapped in the past was not her fault.</font>






<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">It really wasn't.</font>




<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">But still, Rudra blamed her.</font>






<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">So he was rather annoyed when instead of talking, Anika just sighed and wrapped her arms around her knees, staring silently out across the road with him.</font>






<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">He wasn't sure how long the two of them sat there, watching the London traffic roll by. At one point they watched as a cyclist scraped the side of a car trying to weave between it and one parked on the side of the road, and then the driver of said car screeched to a halt and got out to chase the cyclist. Unfortunately for him, the cyclist had already gone off-road and peddled off over a hill at high speed.</font>




<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">The driver had yelled some profane abuse at him, mourned the scratch on his car and spoken to the on-looking Rudra and Anika that the cyclist was "an effing wasteman, bruv" before getting back in his car and driving off.</font>






<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">They had looked at each other, both biting back a smile, before returning to their silent outward gazing.</font>






<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">"I wonder what's going on inside." He finally decided to break the silence.</font>


<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">It took a few seconds for Anika to answer. "I suppose Omkara is murdering the ACP while the ACP uses that as proof that he killed that other woman all those years ago?"</font>


<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">Rudra gave reluctant smile "What's that jerk even doing here? And why is he with Priyanka?"</font>


<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">"Your guess is as good as mine. Has he been meeting with Priyanka back in India?"</font>


<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">"He better bloody not have been!" Rudra's outrage made Anika giggle, and he felt his anger pop like an overblown balloon. "Anika Didi, I'm sorry."</font>


<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">"For what?"</font>


<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">"For everything."</font>


<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">"Oh Rudra, don't worry. It's okay for you to react to... all this... however you want."</font>


<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">Rudra shook his head. "I don't mean just now. I mean back then. I knew Shivaay Bhaiya was making a mistake." He felt rather than saw Anika stiffen beside him. "I knew he shouldn't marry Lady Baba. If he wasn't ready to marry you then, he shouldn't have married anyone. I should have made him realise-"</font>


<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3"></i>
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<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">Anika cut Rudra off by gently placing a hand on his cheek, turning his face towards hers. "There's nothing you could have done." Her eyes scanned his face, softened. "You always were my favourite." She gave a quiet laugh. "Oh Rudra, has it been very hard?"</font>


<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">Rudra tilted his head, freeing his cheek from her hand and then determinedly turning away from her. "It's been fine. Everyone's fine."</font>


<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">"And how much of that is because <i>you've been running yourself ragged to make sure of that?"</font>




<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">He didn't speak. Couldn't.</font>




<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">But as he thought of all the painfully silent meals he and Soumya had started rowdy conversations over, all the awkward and tense moments he had diffused with a well-timed joke, all of the tears he had seen his family members cry which he had offered them a shoulder for, and of all the many he was sure they had cried in secret, where he could not help them. Rudra felt the first tear break the barrier and roll down his cheek, quickly joined by many others. Anika hugged him, hiding his face from passersby as the Great Floodgates of Rudra Singh Oberoi were smashed open for the second time in two days but this time instead of crying for his brothers, Rudra Singh Oberoi cried for himself.</font>






<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">""""""""""</font>




<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">When Soumya arrived, she could tell instantly that Rudra had been crying. She took the seat beside him and felt a possessive warmth when he immediately took her hand in his, lacing their fingers together as he stared across the table at the conversation that was happening.</font>




<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">"It doesn't matter whether you want to come back or not, I'm telling you that you have to."</font>


<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">"I'm sorry, are you completely incompetent? Or do you think you're in some kind of Indian Drama and the law doesn't apply to you? If you had any evidence, you would have arrested me two years ago, and you wouldn't be stalking my sister and following her to London to try and goad me into falling for your ridiculous tricks."</font>


<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">ACP Randhawa raised an eyebrow. "You're quite chatty, aren't you?"</font>


<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">"I swear to God, I will mu-"</font>


<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">"Om, love, maybe threatening to murder a police officer accusing you of murder isn't the best defence."</font>


<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">"But I haven't killed anyone."</font>


<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">"And everyone believes y-"</font>


<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">"I don't."</font>


<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">"Sorry, I misspoke. Everyone who matters believes you. So just stay calm and don't let him get to you."</font>


<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">"Bh-bh-bhaiya, even if you d-don't come back b-because of the A-A-A-A-ACP, you should c-come home."</font>


<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">"Assistant Assistant Assistant Assistant Assistant." Ranveer counted off the stuttered As on his finger.</font>


<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">"Mock my sister one more time, you son of a-"</font>


<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">"Rudra, sit down." Soumya tugged on his hand and pulled him back.</font>




<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">"Th-the family is d-d-devastated without you. We need you to c-come back and f-fix it."</font>


<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">"I can't."</font>






<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">Anika could tell when her husband was tense. He had been annoyed this entire time, with the ACPs fantastical accusations, but it wasn't until that comment that she noticed his entire body freeze, his muscles rigid, belying the passive expression on his face.</font>


<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">"B-b-but only you can help. Everyone's m-miserable."</font>


<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">"I'm sure that's not true."</font>


<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">"It is!" Everyone stared at Priyanka, who flushed scarlet as she realised she had both yelled and slammed her fist down on the table.</font>


<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">"That's the first non-annoying thing I've ever seen you do."</font>


<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">"Shut up, Policeman Plod. You're not a part of this."</font>






<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">Anika looked at Soumya, their eyes wide as the others around the table began yelling at each other.</font>




<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">"Enough." Anika rose to her feet. "The reason Omkara does not want to return home is because he is afraid of what Shivaay will say and how he will react upon learning about... me." There were several visible winces at the mention of the name which everyone was treating as taboo around Anika and Om. "He is, as always, trying to protect both me and Sahil from the notorious anger of Shivaay Singh Oberoi." She paused. "But he is also being a coward." She sighed heavily and sat back down. "We both are."</font>




<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">Anika looked at Omkara, took one of his hands in hers and squeezed. "We should go. We have to go."</font>


<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">He thought about it, and then gave a short nod.</font>






<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">"Priyanka, if your new boyfriend arrests my husband when we get to India, please inform him that I will castrate him and throw them into the fire."</font>


<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">"Anika's been watching a lot of Game of Thrones." Omkara explained, his voice deadpan as the rest of the table gawked at his smiling wife.</font>


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<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">Thank you all so much for the amazing feedback so far! Truly truly appreciate it. Chapter 9 brought some pretty interesting responses, and I like reading comments both which agree with and enjoy my perspective (because obviously I want you to enjoy what I'm writing) and take on things, but I do also enjoy ones which make me really think about why I'm writing what I'm writing- so if any part of the story doesn't appeal to you, I'm totally up for discussion/ debate on why. Though I warn you now, having to think through and justify my thoughts kind of just makes me more determined to keep writing it😆But I have tried to explain in the post above this one why AniKarahappened in this story, which I think might be of interest to quite a few of you. Following trains of thought to their conclusions can lead to a lot- ENJOY YOUR DAYDREAMS, GUYS.</font>

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<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">Innika, I apologise for the late reply to your post- I promise it's coming. I have it open in a new tab on Chrome and I'm literally replying to it in pieces. It'll probably end up as long as an actual chapter by the time I'm done😆</font>



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Posted: 9 years ago
Ah, finally we are moving the plotline to India. Womderful update
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Posted: 9 years ago
The AniRud interaction was very heart-warming and beautifully expressed the pain that Rudr has gone through during the past two years. 😭

While everyone was busy screaming their lungs out at the same time, I almost expected Shivaay to walk in on them but then I realised that was drama for another day. 😆

But, my absolute favourite scene from the update and one that had me cracking up real bad was the one of the ACP counting Prinku's stuttering As - Assistant Assistant Assistant Assistant Assistant! 🤣

The guy has proven he's fit to be Rudr's brother in law. 😆

PriVeer is my latest love in the show and I'm glad your FF has them - for whatever tiny scene possible.
Edited by -Sarcy- - 9 years ago

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