Ishqbaaz FF: Consequences. Chapter 15 on Page 39 (02/08/17) - Page 17

As odd as this may sound, I think I love you... Or rather, I love your story. But, at this point in time, after reading nine simply marvelous chapters of this beautiful story, I feel like I have a piece of you with me, a piece that is tearing me to bits, but yet I am enjoying every second of it... I can only assume that this is what love is. Coming to your story, I realize now that I had written a comment about how the last chapter literally broke my heart to bits and pieces, but then I accidentally deleted it, thinking that I had posted it, and not bothering to check until now. When I realized this, my first instinct was to go back and tell you how amazing, heart breaking, and gut wrenching it was to feel how Shivaay is torturing himself... and then I ended up reading this masterpiece of a chapter ;) And suddenly, everything blows out of my mind except for that tiny piece of me telling me that I was right about my Tej prediction. However, not in a million years did I think that Priyanka would end up finding the pics of Rudy's laptop... Kind of expected better than that from him. Then, to add to my shock, we now know that Shivaay has seen these pictures, and is having fever-induced dreams, is completely unconscious, and this dream that was only mentioned in passing by Know-It-All Singh Oberoi is probably what we saw a glimpse of during the chapter. I want to punch and hug you at the same time, if possible... Still love you though :) I also cannot believe that Tej actually told Jhanvi... I mean, I expected their relationship to take a turn after Omkara leaving, but I did not expect for it to turn into a "we love each other, we share everything with one another, but we have distance ourselves from one another because our son left"... Then again, I feel like I should've seen that coming from when you referenced Jhanvi's return to alcoholism in one of the previous chapters... That being said, I cannot wait for "all the bloody pieces" to get under one one roof, and see (read) the drama unfold. Last but not least, PriVeer... Atleast I think that's what we're calling them now.. I absolutely loved the glimpse of their dynamic that you gave us, but now I am most definitely excited for Randhawa's (hes commissioner now?!) reaction when he finds out that the stuttering is a social anxiety thing... And for all the guilt to come crashing down on him... Thank you for this beautiful insight to the dynamic "back home", and please update the next part as soon as possible... I am getting really giddy for the Shivaay-Anika confrontation... Also, Omkara (and Rudra, Priyanka, Anika, and Saumya's) reaction(s) to seeing Tej on the porch of AniKara's house!!!!

For all the updates I have not commented for, I apologize

fantastic...awesome. hurry, waiting for the next update

Awesome update

Originally posted by: twerping

You balance pain with humour so well.. so natural and life-like.

And then ACP! I am loving your ACP! Yes! Mr MachoMan needs just this in his life and you are giving that in plentiful!

And happy diwali!

Originally posted by: Tanu156

Hey okay don't read this is useless comment 😭 but I was going through comments n u see everybody is accepting anikara just fine 😲🥱 I think it's bcoz of her character she has pride that's why after such hiliation from shivay it was unlike her to be with. Him I was wondering about it😳😃😃 yes I waste my time like this all day ... Its just Indian show don't maintain their character 😭 which I don't like n I am sad😭 how can only a few people can see the potential of priyanvir story!!😭😭 how!!! Anyway I hate when they pay attention only one character in real life everybody is imp n that's why I think priyanka always left behind - need a guy like ACP!!! 😆 u r a writer !!! Amazing one write something for them

Originally posted by: A.K.Aggarwal

I really want annikara... even while watching the epi today I was like omg I want annikara tht look tht they shared was just tooo much I just don't know why bt I want annikara..,. I know I am mad n it's shivika most fans touting for bt there is something abt annikara I can't let go I guess the forbidden fruit kinda scenario bt chalo hope ki is story mein I get tht

Originally posted by: jassu7

As odd as this may sound, I think I love you... Or rather, I love your story. But, at this point in time, after reading nine simply marvelous chapters of this beautiful story, I feel like I have a piece of you with me, a piece that is tearing me to bits, but yet I am enjoying every second of it... I can only assume that this is what love is. Coming to your story, I realize now that I had written a comment about how the last chapter literally broke my heart to bits and pieces, but then I accidentally deleted it, thinking that I had posted it, and not bothering to check until now. When I realized this, my first instinct was to go back and tell you how amazing, heart breaking, and gut wrenching it was to feel how Shivaay is torturing himself... and then I ended up reading this masterpiece of a chapter ;) And suddenly, everything blows out of my mind except for that tiny piece of me telling me that I was right about my Tej prediction. However, not in a million years did I think that Priyanka would end up finding the pics of Rudy's laptop... Kind of expected better than that from him. Then, to add to my shock, we now know that Shivaay has seen these pictures, and is having fever-induced dreams, is completely unconscious, and this dream that was only mentioned in passing by Know-It-All Singh Oberoi is probably what we saw a glimpse of during the chapter. I want to punch and hug you at the same time, if possible... Still love you though :) I also cannot believe that Tej actually told Jhanvi... I mean, I expected their relationship to take a turn after Omkara leaving, but I did not expect for it to turn into a "we love each other, we share everything with one another, but we have distance ourselves from one another because our son left"... Then again, I feel like I should've seen that coming from when you referenced Jhanvi's return to alcoholism in one of the previous chapters... That being said, I cannot wait for "all the bloody pieces" to get under one one roof, and see (read) the drama unfold. Last but not least, PriVeer... Atleast I think that's what we're calling them now.. I absolutely loved the glimpse of their dynamic that you gave us, but now I am most definitely excited for Randhawa's (hes commissioner now?!) reaction when he finds out that the stuttering is a social anxiety thing... And for all the guilt to come crashing down on him... Thank you for this beautiful insight to the dynamic "back home", and please update the next part as soon as possible... I am getting really giddy for the Shivaay-Anika confrontation... Also, Omkara (and Rudra, Priyanka, Anika, and Saumya's) reaction(s) to seeing Tej on the porch of AniKara's house!!!!

Hello! Catching up on your FF was a great way to utilise the past hour on an IB-less day.

Thoroughly enjoyed the way you've scripted the characters and woven their stories. And despite everything, and though it was his own decision, I still feel miserable about the miserable state of Shivaay - could pin that down to my Shivaay love, I guess. 😆

And, can I just say how glad I am to read about the ACP in your fic? He's my new obsession in IB and I have such high hopes from PriVeer, it's not even funny. Trust Randhawa to be on his high horse and Omkara to match his arrogance right there.

Can't wait to see where you take this ahead. And a special mention of the Shivaay-Shakti scene, LOVED it!