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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: 357159pikachu


Tune toh nishu ka dialogue chura liya. Nisha kisi se nahi darti. 😆 I thought that Viraj ko naya look doon iss FF ke saath. Toh mere jaise Nibirians jo Viraj se nafrat karte hain would to the least start liking him bits. 😆 U are right. Mine is different. par uske different elements abhi bhi bache hain. 😉 Kirti ko ye abhi nahi pata chalega but jab pata chalega i assure u zaroor tease karegi. 😆

and Neha i am happy that you commented really. Itna long toh tha tera comment what else do you want. And i understand you have loads of work to complete. No prob. Agli baar bharpaayi kardena. And ATB again for the AT task. Jaldi karle you dont have much time left.


Viraj zarurat se zyada different ho gya 🤣
& Thanx for ATB really need it!!
And comment aur bada hota tha coz update b to badi thi na 🤔
But couldn't
And Yeah hope next to next time bharpayi kar paun 😆
Coz ye bar to u already Updated part 14 but I havnt completed my AT tasks yet

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Posted: 8 years ago
i am just loving it more and more with each update 😃😃
pls update sooner
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Posted: 8 years ago
awesome update...😃
kabir bhi na😆
kabir nisha ko irritate karne ki nayi tareeke use kar raha hai😆
nibir fighting on who is more mature🤣
ab jaldi se next update do...wait hi nhi ho raha mujhse😳

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Posted: 8 years ago
Superb update 👏
I must say your sense of humor is awesome...
That point when nisha main pheli baar school gai or kabir say terrorism felane that was awesome I really laughed there..
Ab factory or jalegi maza aayega 😆
Waiting for it..
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Posted: 8 years ago

Chapter-15

Factory Zyada Jal Rahi Hai

They went upstairs to their ADDA.

Ka- What is the matter Viraj?

Vi- Actually main Kirti ki shaadi mein aaya hoon aur mujhe sab mehmaan ki tarah treat kar rahe hain.

Ni- Kya matlab hai tera?

Vi- Yaar I have not got any work to do for Kirti's wedding.

Su- Toh tu kya chahta hai?

Vi- Equality!

Everyone looked at him with confused eyes.

Vi- I mean I also want to work for Kirti's wedding.

Ka- But now all the works are distributed.

Vi- I know, Suku told me.

Ni- (gets an idea) Well you can work with us Viraj. I mean accidently Kabir and I got almost all the same jobs except for the receiving of the guests so you can help us with it. (smirks)

Su- (gets the reason) You are right Nishu. Viraj can help the two of you. After all how much will you work!

Ka- (agrees) Good idea Nisha! Even the work is vast. We discussed about everything that night so you can explain it to him.

Vi- (teasingly) Night!!!!! OOOh!

Ni- Viraj tu nahi sudherga. Actually... (explained him the whole incident)

Vi- Toh Suku is almost settled now. (teases Suku)

Su- (blushing) Aisa kuch nahi hai!

Ni- (joins Viraj) Nahi toh kaisa hai!

Su- (diverts the topic) Okay, so Viraj will work with the two of you.

Everyone chuckles at him. just then Ayesha comes with a plate of snacks but stops at the entrance.

Ay- Actually aunty told that Nisha and Kabir were upstairs when the snacks were being served so she has sent them.

Ka- Aunty is so cute.

Su- Ayesha come inside! Why are you standing out?

Ay- Actually aunty told that this is the ADDA of the three of you. So she asked me to take permission before I enter.

Su- And you are granted the permission.

Vi, Ni, Ka- (teasingly) OOOh!

Ay- (innocently) What's the matter guys?

Vi -(chuckles at her innocence) Nothing! Come inside Ayesha.

Ayesha comes and gives the plate to Nisha and was about to leave.

Ka- Ayesha, where are you off to?

Ay- Nothing! I just thought not to disturb you all.

Ni- You won't disturb us. Come and sit.

Ayesha comes and sits beside Suku. They all cough in Madhuri Dixit style. Suku gave him a glare which they knew what it meant. Nisha was about to begin with the snacks.

Ka- (innocently) Nisha main bhi khaloon?

Ni- Abbe oh Nimbu! Tu khatti baatein karta hua hi accha lagta hai, mithaas dete hue nahi.

Ka- Matlab? (smirks)

Vi- Nisha, this is not the way to talk. He is talking to you so politely then what is your problem?

Nisha gets irritated then suddenly Kabir and Viraj burst out laughing. They gave hi-fi to each other.

Ka- Tune kya socha tha Viraj teri side hai?

Vi- Nisha I am sorry but I am not Suku. Tera friend hoon and therefore I deserve ki main teri firkin loon.

Ka- And main toh tera by-birth enemy hoon. I also deserve irritating you.

They were still laughing. Nisha frowned.

Ni- Theek hai! Tum log karo masti. Main ye akele kha rahi hoon.

Nisha took the plate and left. Kabir ran after her.

Ka- (trying to match her pace) Abbe rukk na motu!

Ni- (Walks even faster) Don't you call me that!

Ka- Arre yaar, sahi main bhook lag rahi hai.

Ni- Toh tere kaarnaame karne se pehle sochna chahiye tha.

Kabir got annoyed. He was walking beside her. He pinned her on the wall suddenly (not her hands but he kept both his hands on either side of her). They were very close now. (ISHQ BULAVA TUNE GOING ON BEHIND. ONLY THE TUNE)

Ni- (shocked, annoyed) Yeh kya kar raha hai tu?

Ka- (huskily) Wahi jo tere saath karna chahiye.

Nisha's hearybeat started raising even when she did not know it and so did Kabir's. they were really close to each other. Kabir started moving his hand on her right hand.

Ni- (stammering) Ka... ka... ka... Kabir!

He took the plate from her hand without her notice.

Ka- (enjoying it) Kya?

Ni- (annoyed) Just leave me, I said.

Ka- Okay! (left her)

Nisha felt a bit okay now but not anymore after she realized what she has missed.

Ni- Kabir ke bacche, teri toh! (started running after him)

Ka- (while running, laughing) Abhi hue nahi hai! Tu permission dede. (smirks)

Ni- (takes out her slipper) Mere se flirting karega! Rukk teri toh! (throws the slipper and it hits his back, HARD)

Ka- (stops, in pain) Abbe K! kitni zor se maara!

Ni - (come there) Rukk jata toh nahi padti. (takes the plate) Equal karke khayenge.

They sat on the corridor itself and started dividing the snacks. They had their shares of snacks after some fights.

Ka- Main ab chalta hoon! Decorators se bhi baat karni hai.

Ni- Wait! I will also come. I will call Viraj as well warna tu woh funky colors ka decoration kara dega.

Ka- (shows her his hand) Oh hello! It looks cool okay.

Ni- Haan chala!

They go to their ADDA and tell Viraj about the decorator plan.

Vi- Okay!

Ka- (monologue, unknowingly angry) Ye kabhi mana nahi karta kya? Problem kya hai iski? Theek hai bachpan ka dost hai but fir bhi Nisha se itna kyun chipak raha hai. Suku se itna toh nahi chipakta. Chipkoo Chipkali!


PRECAP- SIRF COTTON FACTORY HI KYUN JALE! SILK KO BHI TOH JALNA CHAHIYE.

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: RoshniVdian786

Oh my god

I Dont belive this 😲
1 more update
To mera RES 😆


Yeh le ek aur update. Jaldi karna hai because i have to give the epilogue by my birthday which is fast approaching. Tu RES karle baad mein unres kardena. would be waiting to read ur comment.
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Anmol333

Superb update 👏

I must say your sense of humor is awesome...
That point when nisha main pheli baar school gai or kabir say terrorism felane that was awesome I really laughed there..
Ab factory or jalegi maza aayega 😆
Waiting for it..


Thanks Anmol. Really i feel good when u say my sense of humor is good. i dont hear it quite frequently else. 😆Thanks a lot for that too. Aur ab toh doosri factory bhi jalna shuru ho jayegi. Already updated. U can read.
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: angelanju

awesome update...😃

kabir bhi na😆
kabir nisha ko irritate karne ki nayi tareeke use kar raha hai😆
nibir fighting on who is more mature🤣
ab jaldi se next update do...wait hi nhi ho raha mujhse😳


Thanks Anju. Wait bhi mat kar ab.😆 Already update. u can read.
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Niha0606

i am just loving it more and more with each update 😃😃

pls update sooner


Thanks Niha! Glad you are really liking it. Already updated.
Posted: 8 years ago
Thari bhali howe chhori
Tu daily update done lag gyi 😲

To mera ek aur res

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