@~* Ring Tone - Premeer Write up *~@

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Trisha Morajkar

@Trisha510

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+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#11

Itz amazing n beautifully written

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tarannum6

@tarannum6

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

#12

wowww Athi AMAZING OS
this is very Beautiful.. awosome dailouges and sceans ..I always love your post par ye story I
loved it ^_^
Ring tone scean bohat cute hai ..love premeer sceans ^_^

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Naziya

@rano23

Explorer

Posted: 8 years ago

#13

Wow awesome Athi
Tussi great ho
Love it

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Bhagyashri

@bhagyashri12

Explorer

Posted: 8 years ago

#14

Wow Athi

It was fabulous OS !! 🤗

Loved it !!?

Premeer were so cute

Keep writing !!! 😃

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Sadia khan

@sadia66

Inactive

Posted: 8 years ago

#15

Beautiful Story Athiii 😊😊😊 Too good 😎

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Fatima

@Fatima_Q

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 8 years ago

#16

Aray wah! Athisda in a romantic writing mood?!?! ☺️

When? 😲 Where? 😲

How did this happen?

I mean she even included song lyrics...this is serious! 😆

Wonderful story recapping all of Kis Desh from Heer's perspective 👏... but aww...the best part was the ending...and the ringtones. Too sweet.

You're a seasoned writer now Athisda...😎...Fab job! 👍🏼

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AASUS

@AASUS

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 8 years ago

#17

Fatima with Prem and Heer I could as they are naturally romantic couple. The conversation is something I could always write but not story wise.
This is some of the things I'm doing as activity in forum. It's no way creative though. If I was a reader I'd hv slept if it weren't for Ringtone part. Oh well.
It's cool ur roaming in forum. U do cheer us up actually - our Preet after all in real life. It's one of the worst nighmarish day we had as fans with IF article.

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Fatima

@Fatima_Q

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 8 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: AASUS
Fatima with Prem and Heer I could as they are naturally romantic couple. The conversation is something I could always write but not story wise.
This is some of the things I'm doing as activity in forum. It's no way creative though. If I was a reader I'd hv slept if it weren't for Ringtone part. Oh well.
It's cool ur roaming in forum. U do cheer us up actually - our Preet after all in real life. It's one of the worst nighmarish day we had as fans with IF article.

Ah yes! I read it too...🤔