@~* Ring Tone - Premeer Write up *~@

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Eh is anyone's B'day today? Nahh .. May be... well not that I'm aware of..

Is it cz some cool episode or intense Premeer scene aired on TV ?

... umm well ya kinda
..Yesterday we had Premeer Milan in Jaisalmer, Rajasthan - the desert episode where Heer running not caring for her life and Prem too is running only to save her voila! Premeer Reunion happened. šŸ„³šŸ¤—ā¤ļø They look cute and what happens right after is even more cuter.

But that's not y I'm here either cz Cutediary (Sana Khan)
has already started Rajasthan Episodes special topic and continuing her updates there ...amazing reading + her sweet creations decorating the topics.

This time it's tiny write up on Premeer - two weeks ago on a Sunday afternoon while I was resting on sofa suddenly had a brain wave about Prem talking to Heer. Tiny bit of scene came to mind.
So I asked sana.harshiti she said it sounds fun and to go ahead with it.

Initially I've only thought of it as mini romance of PH with bit fun dialogues of Prem.
But dunno why after the 1st paragraph I changed my mind and it took a different turn altogether. It is wayyy tooo looong.

To me it really does look boring cz you all know PH story in show and what happened in scenes, probably more in detail than I do. šŸ˜† Anyhow didn't want to change what I wrote so decided to post whatever I wrote.

If it's boring well sorry for that. If it is ok then it's cool.

Either way in my understanding Prem is this kinda person and he treats her as a kid.

He's used to being a boss, be authoritative and used to have ppl listen to what he says.

He is not used to someone challenge him. His siblings take his advise and even his father look up to him for important decisions in the family.
There are times that didn't happen but 90% of time Bauji takes Prem's opinion before he does something related to business or at home.

There is good and bad in the way Prem is.

Good is Prem pampers Heer. He pampers his siblings and even his parents.

Bad is he won't give opportunity to have a different opinion than his. Some ppl think it's cool but you need to be on receiving end to see whether that is true or not.

I like the affectionate brother Prem and this affection he also shows to his wife Heer and he takes very good care of her.
For Heer he often acts as her father who protects her a lot from various difficulties. She's very appreciative of this gesture and holds it close to her heart.
It's something that being elderly sibling acquire I suppose, they become a 2nd parent to their younger siblings.
Needless to say Heer has reciprocated the same to her Prem. She also pampers him a lot as she too is an elderly sibling to someone.



So here we go...




Ring Tone


(Creation credit : sana.harshiti)


Heer staring out the window of their bedroom. Looks like she is deep in thought.

Hiii

A husky voice resonated in her left ear and soon she felt hands slithering from behind her ever so slowly wrapping her waist in firm soft hold. She feels the weight on her right shoulder. She slowly tilts her head back enjoying the affection shown by her hubby. A smile appears on her lips feeling how her hubby is flirting just now, a tiny bite on her ear lobe, working his way down to her shoulder.

He didn't ask anything nor did he say anything to her. But she knows they both have this unexplainable connection between themselves.

She understood that he understood something is on her mind and without her saying a word or even looking at him, he sensed her perturbed mind and decided to sooth away her uneasiness.

This is a usual scene in their house however she is never allowed to be sad or even worry about anything.

Suddenly she found herself going on a quick trip down a memory lane - a rewind of her life of where she was and where she is now in flashes of Milli seconds ...

Their families were friends - their fathers Balraj Maan and Lalit Juneja to be exact were childhood friends who for whatever reason went on a separate way for a while.
Before the families got separated, the fathers made a promise to keep their friendship and make it stronger by becoming relations in future. They decided to marry their children so they made a wedding card from a leaf of a tree near a temple in their tiny village and made a promise to marry their children when they become adults.

Years passed and due to some accident her parents were killed. She later realized that her parents were upset at the time of death because of her Chachi DJ. She is a wife of her father's brother Balwant.

The Junejas arrived but they did not recognize her and she could not introduce herself to them either as her Chachi said they hate her and her father.

Heer moved on with her little sis Meher. She worked and sent her sis to college as she has more years to complete. So many things made her and Junejas bump into each other - sometimes in Shiv Mandir and sometimes in their hotel when she went on an official visit.

Her Chachi's plan of becoming part of Juneja family did not work as Prem found out something isn't right. He investigated and told his father. The truth of her Chachi was revealed one day and she was kicked out of the house.

The constant bumping in made Prem take notice of Heer more and he wanted to find out where she was from and her family. One day he directly asked her out on a date and said I really need to speak with you but not in office. Would you trust me to take you out on a date? I really would like to know more about you. She for whatever reason said "yes' without thinking twice.

Their journey as friends turned lovers started from that day but tragedy soon fell on her as her Prem met with an accident and declared dead. She did not accept this fact and really stood firm on her pov that her heart would know if he has passed. Except for her friend Preet who is Prem's younger brother, the entire family thought she needs psychiatry help. Even her little sister did not believe Heer. Meher is a practical girl and she goes by facts rather than emotions and so on. Heer's talk about how her heart is connected to Prem did not make sense to her at all. Meher could only show sympathy but could not support her sister's view.

Well there is twist to every story so after half year gone by Heer goes to Jaisalmer fort. She was sent by her employer Rishab to over see his palace as he is planning to have some big celebration there. She was his PR, executive assistant and she is responsible for this function.

On the same day she arrived there, she found herself being happy and smile appeared on her lips automatically. She wondered why she was feeling this way and could not figure out the reason.

That night as she was moving around checking to see if guests of palace are being taken care of properly, she bumps into someone and voila ! She sees her Prem.

Long story cutting it short he did not know or recognize her at all. After many months of therapy did he recover and remembered his past life. The doctors at first said, it is highly unlikely he would ever remember but Heer did not give up and prayed for him and hang out with him until he did remember.
This was hard to do - hanging out as he found her to be a nuisance. annoying him always and trying to act as though she knows him in and out.. He spoke in an angry voice but later would regret that he had hurt her feelings and apologize for his behaviour. Then their marriage happened in a simple ceremony.

Just when their life start to move forward Prem's younger sister's life became turmoil because of her own insecurities and a bit of jealousy towards the Maan sisters as she believed she was being ignored by her brothers who used to adore her 24/7. She influenced her mother, G3 who is a step mom to Prem and turned her against Heer very easily.

Due to this situation Prem was led to believe Heer is being unfaithful and has committed adultery. He got drunk and accused her publicly in front of her best friend Rajveer.
Heer unable to stand this, runs home and asks advise to G3 as Heer is unaware of who is creating problem for her. G3 advises Heer to leave the house and never to return.

Heer leaves the house and Prem's father tells him to go after her.
In train station Prem called her, she turned around and said if you respect me even a little bit do not follow me. With tears she put her foot to climb up the steps, her payal falls down and Prem picked it up and kept it with him always.

Years passed she is living her life of her own as an independent woman but not alone!
Who is her companion now? Her 5 years old cute daughter Chahat Payal Juneja.

Yes years ago when she found out she was pregnant and she was going to inform Prem. She did not get a chance as he accused her of something unimaginable on that day.

6 years later at her friend Geet's wedding preparation she again came face to face with Prem as it turned out the wedding was organized and happening in one of the Junejas' hotels in the city.

From that day on wards Prem made an effort to see her and she fully ignored him. Soon he found out about their daughter and even came to her house to see them both. He did not reveal who he was but said to Chahat that he is close to her mom and not a stranger. He and Chahat soon became best buddies and shared a cute relationship as buddies.

All except G3 came to visit Heer and Chahat one by one. Bauji and Meher and Kulraj di and Heer's friend Geet all tried very hard to reunite the couple.

One day father's day at Chahat's school, Heer realized that Chahat misses her Papa even though she never said that to her.

Heer was very hurt that her daughter would hide this feeling from her at the same time she felt very insecure that her last hope for living - her child would want to stay with her Papa. She feared she would have to lose her if there is a custody case for a child as Junejas are rich and powerful and she has to work everyday all 7 days to run her household.

When Prem was feeling dejected, Bauji lifted his spirits up and constantly gave moral support to be there for Heer and not give up hope.

A miracle like situation occurred as Prem saw in front of his eyes that due to his step mom whom he worships from the day he has known her is the reason Heer left and not coming back.
He investigated and his father also helped along with his brothers and sister to know why G3 felt this way. They found out and decided to confront her right away.

Bauji stopped them and he talked to her privately. G3 still did not want Heer. So Prem left the house on the same day and said he won't come back.

The family got shocked and tried to stop him but no use. He left in a taxi and said he would resign his position as CEO next day. G3 was shocked to hear this and she went to meet Prem at his office following day and said she would bring Heer back and he does not need to resign. She also said she loves him more than all her children etc.

Prem asked her how can she change over night when she did not do so in so many years?
He didn't want to risk hurting Heer so he said he would stay in hotel until Preet is ready to take over then he would officially resign.

The family said they will also leave the house if he resigns. Bauji was the first to suggest that and Preet followed.

In the mean time Meher has updated Heer of the developments and she did not want the family broken this way.

When Prem went to see her that evening she said she forgave his mistake and he should not leave the family. He argued that you and Chahat are my family how can you stay away from me? So she said I'll come if ma agrees.

G3 saw that entire family is against her and she left the house.

Heer found her while she was going away and brought her back. She asked the Junejas to treat G3 with respect as she is the heart of their home. G3 felt emotional by Heer's words and thought I hated her and she shows so much respect towards me.

She then requests Heer to come back into their house as daughter in law and wife of Prem.

The family decided to have a full Punjabi style very grand wedding and invited all relatives / friends / dignitaries and neighbors to witness the reunion of Prem and Heer.

And from that day on words Prem holds Heer on his palm of his hand. He literally does not allow anyone to hurt her. He took her out on holiday trips with Chahat and now just a month back they returned.

While they were on a trip - a mini honeymoon / bonding time with their daughter Chahat.
Prem had schedule that incorporated both of them on some and separately on others.
Ramu kaka, who is the care taker of Juneja children came on this trip to take care of Chahat.
The trip was marvelous - 4 months of world tour seeing everything that may interest Heer.
She had a long list of places to visit and do long list of activities. This surprised Prem as he did not expect his shy Heer to be so excited but he enjoyed this side of her.

Heer often now remembers her childhood favourite song. The cartoon movie that used to make her feel she is flying along with Aladdin & Princess Jasmine

For listening pleasure:
YT Link:
A Whole New World..


I can show you the world

Shining, shimmering, splendid
Tell me, princess, now when did
You last let your heart decide?1

I can open your eyes
Take you wonder by wonder
Over, sideways and under
On a magic carpet ride

A whole new world
A new fantastic point of view
No one to tell us no or where to go
Or say we're only dreaming

A whole new world
A dazzling place I never knew
But when I'm way up here, it's crystal clear
That now I'm in a whole new world with you

(Now I'm in a whole new world with you)

Unbelievable sights
Indescribable feelings
Soaring, tumbling, freewheeling
Through an endless diamond sky1

A whole new world

(Don't you dare close your eyes)

A hundred thousand things to see

(Hold your breath, it gets better)

I'm like a shooting star
I've come so far
I can't go back
To where I used to be

A whole new world
Every turn a surprise

With new horizons to pursue
Every moment red letter
I'll chase them anywhere
There's time to spare
Let me share this whole new world with you

A whole new world
A whole new world
That's where we'll be
That's where we'll be
A thrilling chase
A wondrous place
For you and me

She now sees Aladdin is her Prem and feels as his Princess Jasmine šŸ¤“
It was not the trip but the experience, the time they spent together as family all made her feel this way.

Missed me? a raspy voice alerted her to reality and she popped open her eyes 😲
She realized where she was and felt her self smiling. Prem turns her around and wiggles his eye brows. She giggled and looks down. He lifts her chin up and looks at her eyes. She tries to move away and he didn't let her.

Prem : Heer you have a habit of constantly in a dream world - should we go see a doctor? I mean it seemed to have increased since we came back from the trip.

She playfully hits his right shoulder with her free hand and stayed quiet.

Prem : I know

Heer looks up surprised

Prem: You're thinking again but you promised me you won't dwell back in the past and we will cherish the time now.

Heer : no I

He stops her before she denies what is going on with her.

Prem: Was trip down the memory lane fun? I'm sure you enjoyed the romance (Heer giggles) but his tone of voice turns serious he says "I also know you get emotional. I know that feeling. Please Heer enjoy this time we have."

Heer : I do enjoy and I am very happy Mr. Juneja just that once in a while I had to pinch myself.

Prem giggles at her response and pulls her into a hug.

Just then they hear "Papa" "Papa"

Heer lifts up her head and looks around to see if Chahat is in the room.

Prem: Hello beta. Aap kaise ho?

Chahat: Mei teek hoon aur muje pata hai aap bhi teek ho kyon ke aap mamma ke saath hai na. She giggles on the other end. šŸ˜† Prem smiles brightly hearing his daughter teasing him.

Prem: ji and aap kab aarahi ho?

Chahat: In five minutes Papa and love you ā¤ļø

Prem: ok waiting to see you and love you more ā¤ļø

Heer watching their convo got surprised and looked at Prem.

Prem: Why are you surprised? He pulls her into a back hug and as usual put his cheeks with her right cheeks while whispering in her ear. "I didn't know her for so long. I only met her few months back. I want to hear her voice all the time. When I miss her I play the ringtone and it feels like she's sitting beside me" He kissed her cheeks.

Heer turns her head slightly and said "I'm sorry Prem"

Prem didn't allow her to continue.. "shhh no more sorries and you are the one told me that" He raises his eye brows indicating she should follow her own advise. šŸ˜†

Heer then asks is it only Chahat's voice you have as ringtone. Prem started to laugh. 😃

Heer in a miffed tone. "Tum hans kyon rahi ho? iss mei hansne wali kya baat hai?"

Prem: thamle iss pal ko. Kya pata kal ho na ho

Heer : oye who asked you to repeat movie dialogues huh? I asked you simple question

Prem... Prem...Premmm..

they hear this voice. Heer says "Yeh toh mere awaz lagra ha hai? mein abhi tumarana naam nahi le rahi thi"

Prem: Correct. you are 100 % correct Mrs. Heer Prem Juneja. This is also my ring tone with your voice.

Heer looks up at Prem and her eyes started to tear.

Prem shakes his head side ways telling her silently not to cry. He tenderly wipes her tears and hugs her. He says in a low whisper in her ear while hugging her tight "I also did not see my wife for so long. When I miss her I listen to this and it makes me feel as though she is with me 24/7. You and Chahat are my life and I don't want to be away from you both even for a second".

Heer couldn't help herself and tears welling up and starts to flow like water fall. She whimpered and again says sorry to Prem.

Prem in a very stern voice : Y'know I really don't like tears especially from your eyes. But I know I am the one that caused your tears so I will remove it. He kisses her eyes, nose, cheeks and every where in her face until he reached her lips. He pulls away and looks at Heer's eyes. By now all her tears have been removed and even her sniffles stopped.

Heer moves forward and pulls Prem into a tight hug. She then repeats the affection showered upon her to her Prem. She then kisses him on the lips and they fall into their romantic journey not caring about anything not even their little daughter who is on the way.šŸ¤—




Credits:
Premeer creations: sana.harshit
Song lyrics : Aladdin Movie lyricist


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Posted: 8 years ago
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Its was sooper awsome athišŸ‘
Really liked this story
But somehow in real i never like the part of seperation
Any wayz ur update was very cool & lovely 😳

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Posted: 8 years ago
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@Sam ha no one liked as it was very bad. PH are one was the concept of the show and that separation and they way creatives changed Prem has ruined their original concept.
It was the actors who charmed the fans despite the story at worst state and hoping creatives would pick up and rebuild the story again.

Ya in this story most of it is as per the show, I've only slightly changed some details that's all. So it's understandable you would not like.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: AASUS

@Sam ha no one liked as it was very bad. PH are one was the concept of the show and that separation and they way creatives changed Prem has ruined their original concept.
It was the actors who charmed the fans despite the story at worst state and hoping creatives would pick up and rebuild the story again.

Ya in this story most of it is as per the show, I've only slightly changed some details that's all. So it's understandable you would not like.

Ur point of view was really nyc athi
& sepration part well i believed that seperation blame goes to ekta maa'm šŸ˜†
In one swift moment she ruined prem's character huhhšŸ¤” how did prem do this to his heer...
Any wayz we still love our premeer alot upon our own reservations😳
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Sam you're back 😲 yeshhh we do. PH are always cute. šŸ˜Ž
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Wow beautiful storyU r a beautiful writeršŸ‘luv premeer.luv Ringtone scenešŸ˜›šŸ˜ŠSuperb post šŸ¤—
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Sana K šŸ˜† really ? nah but I like the ring tone part šŸ˜†
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Posted: 8 years ago
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It was fab Athi, just loved it
You write every point so beautifully
No one like sepration track šŸ˜†
ringtone part was really amazing and i really loved the romantic premeer at the end
lob u and keep writing athi plz
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Posted: 8 years ago
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sana.harshiti šŸ¤— cute emos lob those and y'know except for Ring tone part I can't say this is any useful in terms of story. But glad you get to read and comment.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: AASUS

sana.harshiti šŸ¤— cute emos lob those and y'know except for Ring tone part I can't say this is any useful in terms of story. But glad you get to read and comment.

Athi u are fab writer I wish u continue to write more stories and surprised us šŸ˜†

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