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Kn : Ayee suno sab bandualog chalo ab tum log iss chipkali ko deewaar me chun do fatafat warna tum sab k bacho ko humarey aadmi abhi goli maar dengey
Mai: Ii ka keh rahe h aap malik humri bachua ko humri chakoria ko chor dejia
Kn: Abeey chup .chalo tum log khel shuru kartey ho ya hum tumhare ye keedon ko maar daaley
Ppl: Nhi maalik humarey bacho ko chor don.chakoria hum sub tohar jaisen mahaan na h .humka maaf kar diyo
Chakor: Nhi kaka ek humarey marne se agar sab ki jaan bachti h to humeey ye maut manzoor h humey aap sabhan se kauno shikayat nhi
Suraj:abey o devi chup karo bdi aai mahaan banney aur tum log saalon jab tum taak pe ho to chakoria chakoria karke ussey heroine bna dia aur aaj ek second nhi lga tum logon ko ussey balli chadane ko taiyaar waah beta ...
Vivan: Kn aap humey szaa dijiye humne hi aapko pakadwaya tha chakor ko chod dijiye
Imli : Ii aap ka keh rhe h vivan babu iima aapki kauno glti nhi h.maalik aap didi ko chor diyo
Everyone started assembling bricks with heavy hearts and wet eyes .the full moon night of sharadpurnima has tuned into a nightmare for them .they were themselves killing the last hope of their freedom ,their guardian angel and they could do nothing about it .being a puppet in hands of kn made them realise that past few days were just a facade ,a dream that would never be true
(but suraj was somewhere else he felt like he was the one under threat , he could not let her die .cuz if she dies then...no he frantically started luking here and there for a shred of hope and for once someone sitting above enjoying the story of the two souls that was just about to begin.yes the chanduji had decided to handover the responsibilty of his chakor to suraj
Suraj observed that key of handcuff was about to fall from goons pocket .he somehow managed to get hold of the key and now all he needed was a few moments to execute his plan.he opened the lock of his handcuff and passed on the key to imli .imli had been a companion in his crimes all his life , she didnt needed another word .once imli and vivan were free of clutches of hadcuff all three of them attacked. Here suraj got hold of kn ,there imli pushed ragini and grabbed gun from her aiming it towards her head.
Suraj:vivan jao kn k kutton ko us kamre me band kar do aur tumbolo apne laundo se ki chup chap hatyar neeche rkhey warna tumhari khopdi uda dengey ( vivan did as he was told).ab pkdo issey hum jaatey h chakor ko bachane.
Suraj ran as fast as he could .no matter what he had to save her .his enemy .no ...his wife...no his...ohhh defining this relation could wait .he started breaking the still wet wall while shouting on the top of his voice...
Suraj: Chakor ...chakkkooorr tum sun paa rhi ho humee jawab do chakor.
Chakor: Suuurraajj...suurraaj
Kn noticed that the stupid son of his brother was not paying attention to work assigned to him ,he grabbed the gun from vivan and aimed it towards a bandua child .
Kn:abbey oo gaddar ruk ja warna hum issey goli maar dengey .aee imli chor ragini ko aur tum log roko ussko warna tumhara bacha gya.
Everyone started pleading suraj
Ppl: Deewar na todiye suraj baabu humra bachua mar jaega
Suraj: Abbey kamal narayan bhul gya ki hum kaun h .bhad me jae ye sab tujhe jisko maarna h maar de humarey hotey hue chakor ko kuch nhi hoga
(it was a moment of euphoria for kn .nooo this could not be true .how could it be.yes he knew that this chipkali has always affected his son but it was always in his favour ,it was hatred but where has this come from.he cant let this happen .he can handle the two of them individually but if they came together then it will bring tornado in his life which will ruin his kingdom his dictatorship.)
Theek h to fir lo dekho iss pilley ko martey hue.
He was about to pull the trigger when one of his goon came running and panting from haveli
Goon: Maalik mantri ji aae h ghar pe wo aapse aur ragini bitiya se milna chahtey h turant aur un k saath wo reporter aadi bhi h wo chakor k baarey me puch rha h.
Kn: (gave goon a slap)Saaley manhoos jab bhi aata h galat kabar lekey aata h.chalo ragini beta lagta h kuch saansein aur h abhi inn logo ki zindagi me.
Suraj with help of imli and vivan somehow managed to save chakor .he picked her up (for the third time that day) and carried to her maii's house .her mai checked and assured everyone that she is unconcious but would be fine after some rest.he sat on the steps outside her house and and and breatheee .that was when he realised that... something had changed .what ?why? When? He had no idea.he started laughing like a mad person
Suraj: (luking at the moon)To aakhir phassa hi liya tumne hume .wo chakor h tumhari chakor tumari thandak chahti h wo aur hum suraj h taptey hue suraj jal jaegi wo...yaa shayad humari tapan kum ho jae...pagal ho gye ho kya suraj bakwas kiye jaa rhe ho.(he went and grabbed a bottle of liquior that drenched his throat and numbed his senses.he didnt wanted that feeling of ...(god knows what) ...to seep in..and kept laughing like a maniac
Few hrs later chakor gained conciousness and imli explained her what happened .she became furious after listening that suraj kept a child life at stake ...how dare he...she got up and started moving towards the door
Mai:arrey chakoria kaha jawat ho thoda aaram karlo bitiya.
Chakor : Nhi maai humey suraj se baat karni h abhi nhi
She started searching for him and found him beneath a tree laughing like that..she had seen him drunk a lot of times now .she had seen his happy drunk,sad drunk,devdas drunk,broken heart drunk ,angry drunk but this was something elssse it felt as iff he was mocking someone but who ...anyways focus chakor ..her mind warned her
Chako: Suraj (she shouted)
Suraj: Chakor. ( he smiled)
Chakor :hass kyu rhe ho .mazak lag rha h tume jo bhi hua
Suraj: (realised what he was doing and there came his mask once again)tumse matlab ..aurrr tuum yha kya kar rhi ho chain nhi h tumko aaj to anaarkali ban jati tum aur hum salim...mera matlab h yha kya kar rhi ho chup chaap jakey so jao.jjjaaaooo
Chakor : Tum kitney ghatiya insaan ho tumne us bachey k baarey me ek baar nhi socha agar kn ussey goli maar deta to
Suraj: Aur agar tum mar jaati to
Chakor : To kum se kum wo to bach jata tumhe koi pharak nhi pdta agar wo mar jaata to.tumhari jagah agar vivan hota to kabhi aesa na karta.i hate you.nafrat karte h hum tumse
Suraj(listening vivans name from her set him on fire ) : Hum vivaan nhi h chakor hum suraj h . aur tum ab bhi humari biwi ho.aur ek baat aur jab bhi chunna padega tumhare aur kisisi aur ki jaan me se to tum chahe saamne wale ko chuno par hum sirf tumhe chunnengey chahey puri duniya kyun na jal jae .janti ho kyu .kyunki h hum khudgarz.samjhi tum
Chakor was stumped .for once she didnt knew what to say.all her life she was too busy to think about everyone gaonwaley, maai,baapu,vivaan,imli and so many others .she was angry with him cuz he didnt thoughtof that child but she didnt realise till this moment that he did it for HER.for once she was the priority for someone .
Suraj:Maybe you're right, chakor. Maybe I am hateful. Maybe I ruined your life. Maybe I'm the devil, and the worst thing that ever happened to you, and a million other awful things... But did you ever stop to think that even if I am a monster... I might be your soulmate, anyway? (drunk suraj happen know english somehow😉
(he was drunk she was for once stmped and somewhere above chanduji was glad .he knew they both need each other and hate will someday turn inside out into love .though that day is not coming soon but the frst and the most difficult step had been taken .)...
This is it .its a one shot but i m leaving it with an open .i may explore it ...plzz tell me what you think of this piece .help me improve plsss.luv u all .thanks 😳
Kn : Ayee suno sab bandualog chalo ab tum log iss chipkali ko deewaar me chun do fatafat warna tum sab k bacho ko humarey aadmi abhi goli maar dengey
Mai: Ii ka keh rahe h aap malik humri bachua ko humri chakoria ko chor dejia
Kn: Abeey chup .chalo tum log khel shuru kartey ho ya hum tumhare ye keedon ko maar daaley
Ppl: Nhi maalik humarey bacho ko chor don.chakoria hum sub tohar jaisen mahaan na h .humka maaf kar diyo
Chakor: Nhi kaka ek humarey marne se agar sab ki jaan bachti h to humeey ye maut manzoor h humey aap sabhan se kauno shikayat nhi
Suraj:abey o devi chup karo bdi aai mahaan banney aur tum log saalon jab tum taak pe ho to chakoria chakoria karke ussey heroine bna dia aur aaj ek second nhi lga tum logon ko ussey balli chadane ko taiyaar waah beta ...
Vivan: Kn aap humey szaa dijiye humne hi aapko pakadwaya tha chakor ko chod dijiye
Imli : Ii aap ka keh rhe h vivan babu iima aapki kauno glti nhi h.maalik aap didi ko chor diyo
Everyone started assembling bricks with heavy hearts and wet eyes .the full moon night of sharadpurnima has tuned into a nightmare for them .they were themselves killing the last hope of their freedom ,their guardian angel and they could do nothing about it .being a puppet in hands of kn made them realise that past few days were just a facade ,a dream that would never be true
(but suraj was somewhere else he felt like he was the one under threat , he could not let her die .cuz if she dies then...no he frantically started luking here and there for a shred of hope and for once someone sitting above enjoying the story of the two souls that was just about to begin.yes the chanduji had decided to handover the responsibilty of his chakor to suraj
Suraj observed that key of handcuff was about to fall from goons pocket .he somehow managed to get hold of the key and now all he needed was a few moments to execute his plan.he opened the lock of his handcuff and passed on the key to imli .imli had been a companion in his crimes all his life , she didnt needed another word .once imli and vivan were free of clutches of hadcuff all three of them attacked. Here suraj got hold of kn ,there imli pushed ragini and grabbed gun from her aiming it towards her head.
Suraj:vivan jao kn k kutton ko us kamre me band kar do aur tumbolo apne laundo se ki chup chap hatyar neeche rkhey warna tumhari khopdi uda dengey ( vivan did as he was told).ab pkdo issey hum jaatey h chakor ko bachane.
Suraj ran as fast as he could .no matter what he had to save her .his enemy .no ...his wife...no his...ohhh defining this relation could wait .he started breaking the still wet wall while shouting on the top of his voice...
Suraj: Chakor ...chakkkooorr tum sun paa rhi ho humee jawab do chakor.
Chakor: Suuurraajj...suurraaj
Kn noticed that the stupid son of his brother was not paying attention to work assigned to him ,he grabbed the gun from vivan and aimed it towards a bandua child .
Kn:abbey oo gaddar ruk ja warna hum issey goli maar dengey .aee imli chor ragini ko aur tum log roko ussko warna tumhara bacha gya.
Everyone started pleading suraj
Ppl: Deewar na todiye suraj baabu humra bachua mar jaega
Suraj: Abbey kamal narayan bhul gya ki hum kaun h .bhad me jae ye sab tujhe jisko maarna h maar de humarey hotey hue chakor ko kuch nhi hoga
(it was a moment of euphoria for kn .nooo this could not be true .how could it be.yes he knew that this chipkali has always affected his son but it was always in his favour ,it was hatred but where has this come from.he cant let this happen .he can handle the two of them individually but if they came together then it will bring tornado in his life which will ruin his kingdom his dictatorship.)
Theek h to fir lo dekho iss pilley ko martey hue.
He was about to pull the trigger when one of his goon came running and panting from haveli
Goon: Maalik mantri ji aae h ghar pe wo aapse aur ragini bitiya se milna chahtey h turant aur un k saath wo reporter aadi bhi h wo chakor k baarey me puch rha h.
Kn: (gave goon a slap)Saaley manhoos jab bhi aata h galat kabar lekey aata h.chalo ragini beta lagta h kuch saansein aur h abhi inn logo ki zindagi me.
Suraj with help of imli and vivan somehow managed to save chakor .he picked her up (for the third time that day) and carried to her maii's house .her mai checked and assured everyone that she is unconcious but would be fine after some rest.he sat on the steps outside her house and and and breatheee .that was when he realised that... something had changed .what ?why? When? He had no idea.he started laughing like a mad person
Suraj: (luking at the moon)To aakhir phassa hi liya tumne hume .wo chakor h tumhari chakor tumari thandak chahti h wo aur hum suraj h taptey hue suraj jal jaegi wo...yaa shayad humari tapan kum ho jae...pagal ho gye ho kya suraj bakwas kiye jaa rhe ho.(he went and grabbed a bottle of liquior that drenched his throat and numbed his senses.he didnt wanted that feeling of ...(god knows what) ...to seep in..and kept laughing like a maniac
Few hrs later chakor gained conciousness and imli explained her what happened .she became furious after listening that suraj kept a child life at stake ...how dare he...she got up and started moving towards the door
Mai:arrey chakoria kaha jawat ho thoda aaram karlo bitiya.
Chakor : Nhi maai humey suraj se baat karni h abhi nhi
She started searching for him and found him beneath a tree laughing like that..she had seen him drunk a lot of times now .she had seen his happy drunk,sad drunk,devdas drunk,broken heart drunk ,angry drunk but this was something elssse it felt as iff he was mocking someone but who ...anyways focus chakor ..her mind warned her
Chako: Suraj (she shouted)
Suraj: Chakor. ( he smiled)
Chakor :hass kyu rhe ho .mazak lag rha h tume jo bhi hua
Suraj: (realised what he was doing and there came his mask once again)tumse matlab ..aurrr tuum yha kya kar rhi ho chain nhi h tumko aaj to anaarkali ban jati tum aur hum salim...mera matlab h yha kya kar rhi ho chup chaap jakey so jao.jjjaaaooo
Chakor : Tum kitney ghatiya insaan ho tumne us bachey k baarey me ek baar nhi socha agar kn ussey goli maar deta to
Suraj: Aur agar tum mar jaati to
Chakor : To kum se kum wo to bach jata tumhe koi pharak nhi pdta agar wo mar jaata to.tumhari jagah agar vivan hota to kabhi aesa na karta.i hate you.nafrat karte h hum tumse
Suraj(listening vivans name from her set him on fire ) : Hum vivaan nhi h chakor hum suraj h . aur tum ab bhi humari biwi ho.aur ek baat aur jab bhi chunna padega tumhare aur kisisi aur ki jaan me se to tum chahe saamne wale ko chuno par hum sirf tumhe chunnengey chahey puri duniya kyun na jal jae .janti ho kyu .kyunki h hum khudgarz.samjhi tum
Chakor was stumped .for once she didnt knew what to say.all her life she was too busy to think about everyone gaonwaley, maai,baapu,vivaan,imli and so many others .she was angry with him cuz he didnt thoughtof that child but she didnt realise till this moment that he did it for HER.for once she was the priority for someone .
Suraj:Maybe you're right, chakor. Maybe I am hateful. Maybe I ruined your life. Maybe I'm the devil, and the worst thing that ever happened to you, and a million other awful things... But did you ever stop to think that even if I am a monster... I might be your soulmate, anyway? (drunk suraj happen know english somehow😉
(he was drunk she was for once stmped and somewhere above chanduji was glad .he knew they both need each other and hate will someday turn inside out into love .though that day is not coming soon but the frst and the most difficult step had been taken .)...
This is it .its a one shot but i m leaving it with an open .i may explore it ...plzz tell me what you think of this piece .help me improve plsss.luv u all .thanks 😳
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