The red string of fate...Devakshi TS

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"Sona..",asha snapped at her bring her back from her thoughts."yes Maa." She responded,"kuch nahi beta bas thu bohot koi Hui lag rahi thi..isliye"she said caressing her hair"Aare maa aap har baat pe kyun itna sochthe ho, kuch baat nahi hai".she said
But Asha was not convinced after all a doting mother she was, her only happiness was in her children's happiness."Sach batha tu iss shaadi se khush hai naa..?", she finished.
"Haa maa mai khush kya bohot khush hu ..", she said hiding her pain." Fir teek hai beta mujhe tum pe bharosa hai aur agar tumhare Mann mei kuch bhi problems ya confusions ho tho bas apne maa se keh do , tumhare maa ke paas har problem ka solution hai... Teek hai "Asha said smiling
A small curve formed in the corner of her lips , trying to make it smile.She was heartbroken how could she imagine someone else other than dev in her life. He is the man of her dreams and her Prince charming, seeing anyone else in his place was not possible for her , but even though she agreed to marry Rithwik for her family's happiness.



Though it is the same sequence as in the serial, I just wanted to give it my flavor by adding a bit of sweet and sugar, moulding it in my way...


Love
Pooja😳
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Yo.. Go for it Girl...looking forward to it .. Do pm me.
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Update soon ...would love to read the story
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Pls continue
Would love to read😊
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Plz continue...
Waiting for the next update...
All the best dear...
Plz pm...

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Originally posted by: Monaleojan

Yo.. Go for it Girl...looking forward to it .. Do pm me.

Dear Mona( I hope that is your name),
Glad you liked it..will try to update soon..

love
pooja

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