DevAksi : Ek Baar Nai 100 Baar- A Passionate OS

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Posted: 9 years ago
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NOTE: I've given this name to the OS as I think that dialogue of his was the highlight of the scene and the episode. (6th Oct)

Guys so I'm here with an OS again.
This is in the continuation of the DevAkshi scene which was shown on 6th of Oct and made the whole fandom go gaga over it, Dev discussing about their Suhaagraat and how he has thought about it not once but a hundred times.
So everything is just the same but with a twist. This starts from where before Nikki's knock at the door Dev is holding Sona close and before they fall on the bed.

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"Dev..kya kar rahe ho?"
"Apni biwi par haq jata raha hun.."
Feeling shy she tried to move away, he tried to hold her close but they tripped over and thumped on the bed instead.

Dev's back hit the bed and Sona fell upon him. Her hands embracing his strong chest, his hands holding her by her waist lightly. Their eyes were hooked, and that playful smile somehow vanished as the tension increased.

The thought of them being on the bed, so close to each other, no one stopping them, and that they have every possible right over each other was giving both of them butterflies in their stomachs.

Dev's intense and passionate eyes were doing alot of strange things to her. The always composed Ms. Nutritionist wasn't able to keep herself straight and her nervousness was visible.

To hide it up she tried to get up from the bed, but maybe the more she was trying to move away the more they were getting close. He grabbed her hand and rolled upon her. She had no escape now.

"Kaha ja rahi thi?" His low and sexy voice was working as a turn on for her.
Gulping, trying to wet her dried throat she stumbled to speak but his poker eyes were making her forget what she had to say "Dev..Dev..wo ..niche.."

Bringing his face closer, leaving Sona even more high on breath he said moving his thumb on her cheek "Agar aaj tumhe kahi ni jaane du toh?"
"Dev.."
"Sh.." he shushed her keeping a finger on her lips. And she closed her eyes on his touch over her lips.

Seeing her giving up, he brought his lips close to her temple and kissed her there. Placing his lips close to her ears he whispered "Agar maine aaj kuch kar diya toh?"
Saying this he started nudging his nose over her neck. She tightened her grip on his shirt as he did that.

Bringing his lips to her ear again, he mumbled "agar main aaj khud ko nai rok paaya toh?"
He looked into her eyes saying this. She was finding it difficult to say anything in response. 'Dev' she wanted to say but before she could manage to utter "De.." he pressed his lips upon hers.

Her lip moment made him even more desperate and he couldn't help but touch her lips with his own. Their hearts beated to a high pace and their lips were locked just like that for some seconds.

Their eyes still closed, he lightly pulled his lips from the kiss, just few centimeters apart only to join the lips again but with higher passion and desire. Sona dugged her body deep into the bed as he intensified the kiss with light sucklings. It took her few seconds to realize that they were actually feeling each other's lips.

Mesmerized by what he was doing to her she didn't even know how to reciprocite. She was loving his slow lip movements. And he was busy feeling her lips as much as he could.

Meanwhile Nikki knocked at the door. "Sona bhabhi.." she called out.
But the lovebirds were so absorbed in feeling each other that sounds were only reaching their ears, but their brain had given no commands to understand anything.
Unaware of someone knocking the door. They kept kissing and sucking each other's lips.

After not getting any response, Nikki too left from there and went to her room. Thinking that might have already slept and that she'd handover the post in the morning.

"I love you so much .." he whispered. But she was so much into the reverie of their first kiss that words weren't coming out of her mouth but a shy smile adorned her face, .

Lying adjacent to her, holding her hand, his mind was occupied in few things that he wanted to be fixed before they proceeded any further. The lighting of the room was way too bright for anything cozy and second came her saree. Though she looked angelic in the yellow saree but knowing that he was a fresher at all this, he didn't want to let down Sona, if he fumbles trying to get the 6 yards saree off her.

What if I'm unable to free her off her long saree? I'd look like such an idiot who just wants to have sex but can't even get his wife's clothes off. He thought to himself, staring at the ceiling, pouting and scrunching his eyebrows.

"Kya hua?" Sona asked him seeing him making those faces.
"Kuch nahi." He said, ofcourse he had to act cool and not come across as nervous and immature at 'it' in front of his newly wedded wife.

She just smiled and lowered her gaze.
"What?" He asked feeling being mocked.
"Kuch nahi." Saying so she got up from the bed and proceeded towards the door. Seeing her go he too got up from the bed and stood up.

Claiming the switch board she turned off the lights.
"Its not good to waste so much of electricity when its in no use."
She surely was good at making puns.

Impressed by her little initiative he had now a rush of confidence in him.
She stood there close to the switch board, her back facing him. Without wasting much of time he marched to her. Gliding his fingers over her waist he asked.
"I promise to give you the most memorable night if you just help me out like this. You know I'm a little fool."
She grinned at his statement. Her mind stuck on the three words "most memorable night"

Kissing her over her long and slender neck he made her eyes shut and head spin. His hands claimed her shoulder and tried to undo the pin that was holding the pallu of her saree.
He was very quick at it and threw the pin somewhere.

Lingering his lips all over her nape and smelling her beautiful scents he claimed the edge of the pallu of the saree over her shoulder and glided it off. Chills ran her body as she got a little uncovered now.

Her belly got bare now and he playfully touched her over there making her ticklish. Getting his hand a little down he untucked her saree which made him touch her even more close.

As the saree finally fell down Sona's breath got struck knowing that she is standing in such less clothes in front of Dev. She felt shy and excited all at the same time. And quickly turned back to hug him.

She kissed him on his lips lightly giving him the approval that he needed. He was more than happy seeing her acceptance and that he wasn't being a desperate man but she too wanted him.

He lifted her up in his arms delicately and she wrapped her arms around his neck. Placing her lightly over the bed he switched off the side lamp too and came over her heaving body to take their love to the next level.

That night they didn't have an idea of the outside world. All they knew about was their love. They couldn't have stayed away for any longer and that desire and desperation which was in a good way ofcourse, was evident.

Temme temme how it was.

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Arey update karde meri Maa..raha nei jaraha hai yar!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awesome...I wish humare cv's kuch aisa dikhaye na ki wohi ghisa pita hero heroine paas aye...they were about to get cozy aur idhar koi aa gaya rang mein bhang daalne...real life mein thodi na aise koi hota hai...arrey ab shaadi hui hai aur woh bhi love marriage to they'll do the deed some day or the other...nw mata trying to stop them from doing 'it' is totally absurd and uncalled for
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Abhi Tak Upload Bhi Ni Ki R_S I'm Waiting! 😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Bhai- log (though we have mostly women here 😆)
Ab Shaheer ke tweet se dhyan hatao.. read the OS
Om Shaanti Shaanti..
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Posted: 9 years ago
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aaa!!!!!
maza a gya!!
Truly DevAkshi just _RS_ style... and i loved it!!!
wah ji wah!!
I am dancingg... no my gutter brain has got awesome feed!!!

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Posted: 9 years ago
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i really wish it had happened ..
its awesum
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Monaleojan

Arey update karde meri Maa..raha nei jaraha hai yar!

Kar dia beti..😆
Chalo aake comment karo..
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: EJF_FAN

aaa!!!!!

maza a gya!!
Truly DevAkshi just _RS_ style... and i loved it!!!
wah ji wah!!
I am dancingg... no my gutter brain has got awesome feed!!!

😆😆
Hehe.. gangnam style.. _RS_ style..😆

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: sona_naksh

i really wish it had happened ..
its awesum

Arre CVs ko fikar hai hamari isliye nai dikhaya
Warna koi bachta kese 😆😆

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